The Road to Counterattack to Protect Sweetheart
by Nan Siqi
About This Novel
"Isn't it true that the relationship we have been together for three years is not worth a person who has just been here for a week?" Ya Meng and Li Mo felt very sad, but the two boys were still like that. Not only that, but when they returned home, their wife was killed, which gave them the idea of revenge. Three years later, the two of them took their sisters and loved ones back to the place that once made them heartache and began their fight back.
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How should I put it? The plot is an old routine commonly used in guardian black culture. Let me give you a few suggestions: ①There are a few typos in the preface. I probably didn't notice it because I was typing too fast. I hope you'll pay attention next time. ② I don't think it's good to add the author's own language or a small play in the text. It can be placed at the end of the article, or in the author's words. ③The description of the environment and the psychological activities of the characters can be strengthened. Many authors who write guardian essays will make the same mistake as Dada at the beginning. But as you write for a long time, it will naturally get better. Finally, I hope you can continue to work hard! Looking forward to the next update!
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Official(1)Scraped 3d ago
Thoughts after reading
How should I put it? The plot is an old routine commonly used in guardian black culture. Let me give you a few suggestions: ①There are a few typos in the preface. I probably didn't notice it because I was typing too fast. I hope you'll pay attention next time. ② I don't think it's good to add the author's own language or a small play in the text. It can be placed at the end of the article, or in the author's words. ③The description of the environment and the psychological activities of the characters can be strengthened. Many authors who write guardian essays will make the same mistake as Dada at the beginning. But as you write for a long time, it will naturally get better. Finally, I hope you can continue to work hard! Looking forward to the next update!
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