It Rains When it Rains
by White Dye
About This Novel
A "rain" disrupted the order of the entire world. Triggered new changes. Fei Zhao, who lives peacefully in the forest isolated from the world, originally planned to escape from the troubled times with his current "family" and live a peaceful life quietly. But he didn't expect that he had been involved in an inescapable crime. He was forced to come into contact with this world, face a vast sea of people, and face a war for the five star stones. Look at the scars of battle everywhere. Trembling hands, trembling heart, unable to hold the blade in hand. He adjusted his breathing, endured the pain, practiced swordsmanship, and witnessed the state of the world. He was constantly hit and eroded by heavy rain until his whole body was soaked by the rain... Finally he woke up, and finally he realized the reincarnation of fate: "What is that phantom?..." "Did I kill everyone..." "Why... Why is this happening..." "Who am I...?" [Note: This article was conceived for several months, and it is roughly centered around the war to set off various emotions, and the backgrounds and backgrounds of many characters are implicated. Highlight the changes brought about by the war. Friendship, family, bond, betrayal, passion, and micro romance tell the story of the male protagonist's change from laziness, greed, and inaction after experiencing war and seeing various world conditions. Learn to carry it and understand it, because there are many shortcomings in this first writing, I hope everyone can give your opinions. Thanks! (Era Background): [Cold Weapons and Steam Age] (With swords and other cold weapons as weapons, the Southern Kingdom was the most prosperous, and with the opening of steam trains, it became a super large town. The rest are small towns, grasslands, mountains and forests and other wild areas. The main line begins in 817)
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Official(97)Scraped 5d ago
A pretty good book
Although I didn't read many chapters, I saw some problems: 1. Too many brackets. It seems a bit cumbersome and gives people the feeling of... Trying to make up the number of words. It makes people look a bit... How should I put it, seems to be uncomfortable. 2. The plot is somewhat complicated. Why is the plot complicated? Because... Most of the time I can't understand the plot. There are many foreshadowings, but no echoes. The relevant households should be sorted out, preferably one by one. Although you portray some characters very well, there are always one or two that make people... Confused. 3. There are too many martial arts scenes. This is a problem, too many dance and fight sequences, although they look exciting. But in the eyes of outsiders, it actually looks like a boring word count. People simply don't have that much energy to think about these actions. When watching martial arts movies, the pictures are basically exciting, but when it comes to descriptions... The few martial arts scenes are okay, but if there are too many... I can't say anything~
It looks okay, I hope the writing style can be more flexible
I feel that sometimes the writing style is very rigid and only uses a few fixed words, especially in the first few chapters when the male protagonist is a child. I hope the author can pay attention to it. The plot seems to be very immersive. I will follow it first and read it for a while before commenting.
The author will update it sometime, it's not enough to read.
Let's briefly analyze the plot so far.
From the first chapter, the author seems to have begun to foreshadow who was Fei's family killed? After a series of twists and turns, he was adopted by He Xiaoyun and met Xiao Luoyu (who felt like the heroine). Then he used a scene change to jump directly to the future 9 years before the two grew up, but it was not all smooth sailing. As soon as they returned, the master was attacked and he was forced to let the two escape. He and the enemy died together (but looking at the latest chapter and the tenth chapter already showed that the master was not dead), and then the plot deepened and the two were attacked by that half-beast and half-demon ( I really don't know how to pronounce that word) After being rescued by Takizawa, what was Fei's phantom when he was unconscious? So I have begun to think that his life experience may be extraordinary. Here I have to praise the Si Li chapter and the Fudie chapter. They are really good and the lyrics are very real. It seems that the background and experience of the characters in this book are not simple. In short, there are a series of plot twists and turns in the middle (the author really knows how to make things happen...). Now the male protagonist has to fight the sword master He Yan of Blade of Wind again. I am looking forward to it. I can understand the plot, it's fairly rounded, right? The Burning Stone War hasn't broken out yet, but it's getting more and more interesting later on. Come on, author, I'll just comment on these for now. 😘
Updates have been suspended recently. Sorry everyone, I have started to save manuscripts and sign contracts.
Because the old updates are intermittent, I am now starting to save manuscripts frantically, so updates will be discontinued recently.
The author wrote it very carefully and put a lot of effort into it. I give you my recommendation vote.
come on
Come on, come on, come on＾0＾~
The first 1-5 chapters have been completely revised
Finally, the first few chapters have been completely revised, the details have been optimized, and the setting of the plot of Nufen has also been changed. Now we will continue to steadily update the main plot with the end of Fudie's retrospective chapter. In addition, the trailer of the Collapse Chapter was recycled for optimization and modification. The main plot is about to approach "Southern Kingdom·Fantasy Train" and the battle for the Burning Stone will begin soon.
The author's writing is profound and smooth, but the updates are not very powerful.
I decided to read it after reading the introduction. Like it.
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Official(97)Scraped 5d ago
A pretty good book
Although I didn't read many chapters, I saw some problems: 1. Too many brackets. It seems a bit cumbersome and gives people the feeling of... Trying to make up the number of words. It makes people look a bit... How should I put it, seems to be uncomfortable. 2. The plot is somewhat complicated. Why is the plot complicated? Because... Most of the time I can't understand the plot. There are many foreshadowings, but no echoes. The relevant households should be sorted out, preferably one by one. Although you portray some characters very well, there are always one or two that make people... Confused. 3. There are too many martial arts scenes. This is a problem, too many dance and fight sequences, although they look exciting. But in the eyes of outsiders, it actually looks like a boring word count. People simply don't have that much energy to think about these actions. When watching martial arts movies, the pictures are basically exciting, but when it comes to descriptions... The few martial arts scenes are okay, but if there are too many... I can't say anything~
It looks okay, I hope the writing style can be more flexible
I feel that sometimes the writing style is very rigid and only uses a few fixed words, especially in the first few chapters when the male protagonist is a child. I hope the author can pay attention to it. The plot seems to be very immersive. I will follow it first and read it for a while before commenting.
The author will update it sometime, it's not enough to read.
Let's briefly analyze the plot so far.
From the first chapter, the author seems to have begun to foreshadow who was Fei's family killed? After a series of twists and turns, he was adopted by He Xiaoyun and met Xiao Luoyu (who felt like the heroine). Then he used a scene change to jump directly to the future 9 years before the two grew up, but it was not all smooth sailing. As soon as they returned, the master was attacked and he was forced to let the two escape. He and the enemy died together (but looking at the latest chapter and the tenth chapter already showed that the master was not dead), and then the plot deepened and the two were attacked by that half-beast and half-demon ( I really don't know how to pronounce that word) After being rescued by Takizawa, what was Fei's phantom when he was unconscious? So I have begun to think that his life experience may be extraordinary. Here I have to praise the Si Li chapter and the Fudie chapter. They are really good and the lyrics are very real. It seems that the background and experience of the characters in this book are not simple. In short, there are a series of plot twists and turns in the middle (the author really knows how to make things happen...). Now the male protagonist has to fight the sword master He Yan of Blade of Wind again. I am looking forward to it. I can understand the plot, it's fairly rounded, right? The Burning Stone War hasn't broken out yet, but it's getting more and more interesting later on. Come on, author, I'll just comment on these for now. 😘
Updates have been suspended recently. Sorry everyone, I have started to save manuscripts and sign contracts.
Because the old updates are intermittent, I am now starting to save manuscripts frantically, so updates will be discontinued recently.
The author wrote it very carefully and put a lot of effort into it. I give you my recommendation vote.
come on
Come on, come on, come on＾0＾~
The first 1-5 chapters have been completely revised
Finally, the first few chapters have been completely revised, the details have been optimized, and the setting of the plot of Nufen has also been changed. Now we will continue to steadily update the main plot with the end of Fudie's retrospective chapter. In addition, the trailer of the Collapse Chapter was recycled for optimization and modification. The main plot is about to approach "Southern Kingdom·Fantasy Train" and the battle for the Burning Stone will begin soon.
The author's writing is profound and smooth, but the updates are not very powerful.
I decided to read it after reading the introduction. Like it.
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