The Record of a Concubine Cultivating Immortality
About This Novel
When Qin Rongqian traveled through time for many years and tested his spiritual roots, he discovered that he was actually the heroine of a novel called The Legend of the Immortal Daughter. She was a charming and talented concubine who was on the road to becoming an immortal. What should I do? She could only practice hard! However, it's really strange, how come there is someone walking with her on this road of cultivating immortality and never leaving?
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personal opinion
This is just my feeling after reading this book. I am just a layman and don't quite understand the author's writing level. I am expressing my feelings as a reader. I liked the character of the heroine very much at first, but when I first set foot in the sect, I had some opinions. The heroine helped her family members climb the ladder. I didn't understand this. Isn't the test set by the sect something that they hope they can overcome? It is a test of character, and maybe luck, so it could also be luck that they were brought up there. , So I convinced myself, although I was still a little uncomfortable. Although cultivating immortals is not ruthless and desireless, I can't focus too much on it. The heroine's actions made me think she was a little too much, so I won't mention it for now. The second is the psychology of the heroine bringing her friends together. She knows that they may get farther and farther apart in the future, but she doesn't want to lose her friends, so what should she do? But this is the normal state of human nature, why should it be like that? Besides, you protected her all the way and let her follow her. Isn't it a little bad to do things that your level can do next to people of your level, but I can understand it, it can be done, and then I feel that the heroine pays too much attention to the family, so forget it, but the family seems to be okay with her, well, that's okay, to sum up My opinion about the heroine may be that she is too emotional, but I feel that not every protagonist is exactly what I want. I think she should be pretty good. Dear author, I have said that I am a layman, a high school student who is not very good at Chinese, and I am not busy making objective evaluations. What I want to say is that I think your articles are beautiful and powerful. However, as I have been reading novels for so many years, I think your content is a bit cumbersome and has some priorities. It feels like there is no distinction, and the writing is very good, but overall I feel that there are no corresponding events about the heroine. Although I don't know how many corresponding events are, this is the feeling. It has always been... I have no words. It's just that the other supporting characters are already very small, and they must be described in detail even if they are not worth describing in detail. However, none of these can stop me from wanting to read this book now
I hope the heroine specializes in cultivating immortals. Isn't cultivating immortals delicious? What kind of male protagonist do you want?
I hope the heroine specializes in cultivating immortals. Isn't cultivating immortals delicious? What kind of male protagonist do you want?
Tips
The heroine's design was basically broken in the early stage. She was too good-natured to distinguish between right and wrong. She was very smart at one moment and stupid at the other. The article was too deliberately descriptive. Many authors who could have been completely skipped seemed to like to elaborate. Remember, this is a fairy tale.
jade pendant
We strongly demand that the jade pendant belongs to our heroine, not the virgin heroine. Do you develop feelings just because of a hug from your father? The heroine traveled through time and had nightmares from her past life, yet she still had feelings for her father. I was speechless! You can accept a weak relationship, but you can't accept a virgin heroine. Since cultivating immortals is all about personal destiny, don't pay too much attention to family matters! ! !
Damn, I think the image of the heroine you created is like a doormat who has to endure everything.
Come on, author, go for it!
Actually, I don't really like to watch fairy tales, but I will still take a look because of you. You write it yourself. This is your book. There will always be people who like it and people who don't. If you like it, stick with it. I still like your other farming novel, but it's a pity that you abandoned it
So verbose! ! ! ! !
Really wordy
Come on, lie down and talk about this book.
Overall, it's not a good read, and it's not particularly bad. Some people like it, and some people hate it, but I don't control the comments. I have deleted one person in the comment section who advertised Douyin, and replied to another person who directly greeted me with bad words, and banned her. Then I don't care about anything else. If the chapter comments disappear, when I go to correct typos in the plot, I change the next paragraph and they disappear automatically. Because I know a lot about it, I rarely ask you for monthly tickets, subscriptions, etc. The long comment that got the first likes from Qidian was not written by me. When I saw it, I still thought, wow, this girl is so nice. I didn't even think about it when I wrote it. You know, if you comment, I will correct typos and so on. Sometimes it is a mistake in the plot. I have to read hundreds of thousands of words and then correct it. It's very tiring, and besides correcting mistakes, I'm too lazy to do anything else. Although sometimes it is a bit sad to be affected. What I can guarantee is that no matter what my situation is, I will continue to update and work hard to write. Because I am very happy when I see people liking the characters in the book. Some people don't like it because my writing is not good enough, but I have a long time to improve. I will write better and better in the future, and one day I will write a world that more people like!
There are too many narrations, which makes it a bit unbearable and boring.
There are too many narrations, which makes it a bit unbearable and boring.
It turns out that the heroine is a walking spiritual flesh
It always feels like a double heroine. Even though the plot description about the current heroine accounts for a large proportion, the original heroine also accounts for a lot. To be honest, the character of the heroine is not my type. She is naive at times and seriously lacks love (she has two souls in her body, which have lasted for three lifetimes in total, and she is still so single and stupid. She already knows what attributes that scumbag father is, and she occasionally reveals her yearning for fatherly love. Remember, you are a time traveler and a cultivator of immortality.). She is not as tough as the original heroine. There is a lot of verbosity, sometimes an entire chapter, or even several chapters in a row, is like a long discussion.
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Official(131)Scraped 8d ago
personal opinion
This is just my feeling after reading this book. I am just a layman and don't quite understand the author's writing level. I am expressing my feelings as a reader. I liked the character of the heroine very much at first, but when I first set foot in the sect, I had some opinions. The heroine helped her family members climb the ladder. I didn't understand this. Isn't the test set by the sect something that they hope they can overcome? It is a test of character, and maybe luck, so it could also be luck that they were brought up there. , So I convinced myself, although I was still a little uncomfortable. Although cultivating immortals is not ruthless and desireless, I can't focus too much on it. The heroine's actions made me think she was a little too much, so I won't mention it for now. The second is the psychology of the heroine bringing her friends together. She knows that they may get farther and farther apart in the future, but she doesn't want to lose her friends, so what should she do? But this is the normal state of human nature, why should it be like that? Besides, you protected her all the way and let her follow her. Isn't it a little bad to do things that your level can do next to people of your level, but I can understand it, it can be done, and then I feel that the heroine pays too much attention to the family, so forget it, but the family seems to be okay with her, well, that's okay, to sum up My opinion about the heroine may be that she is too emotional, but I feel that not every protagonist is exactly what I want. I think she should be pretty good. Dear author, I have said that I am a layman, a high school student who is not very good at Chinese, and I am not busy making objective evaluations. What I want to say is that I think your articles are beautiful and powerful. However, as I have been reading novels for so many years, I think your content is a bit cumbersome and has some priorities. It feels like there is no distinction, and the writing is very good, but overall I feel that there are no corresponding events about the heroine. Although I don't know how many corresponding events are, this is the feeling. It has always been... I have no words. It's just that the other supporting characters are already very small, and they must be described in detail even if they are not worth describing in detail. However, none of these can stop me from wanting to read this book now
I hope the heroine specializes in cultivating immortals. Isn't cultivating immortals delicious? What kind of male protagonist do you want?
I hope the heroine specializes in cultivating immortals. Isn't cultivating immortals delicious? What kind of male protagonist do you want?
Tips
The heroine's design was basically broken in the early stage. She was too good-natured to distinguish between right and wrong. She was very smart at one moment and stupid at the other. The article was too deliberately descriptive. Many authors who could have been completely skipped seemed to like to elaborate. Remember, this is a fairy tale.
jade pendant
We strongly demand that the jade pendant belongs to our heroine, not the virgin heroine. Do you develop feelings just because of a hug from your father? The heroine traveled through time and had nightmares from her past life, yet she still had feelings for her father. I was speechless! You can accept a weak relationship, but you can't accept a virgin heroine. Since cultivating immortals is all about personal destiny, don't pay too much attention to family matters! ! !
Damn, I think the image of the heroine you created is like a doormat who has to endure everything.
Come on, author, go for it!
Actually, I don't really like to watch fairy tales, but I will still take a look because of you. You write it yourself. This is your book. There will always be people who like it and people who don't. If you like it, stick with it. I still like your other farming novel, but it's a pity that you abandoned it
So verbose! ! ! ! !
Really wordy
Come on, lie down and talk about this book.
Overall, it's not a good read, and it's not particularly bad. Some people like it, and some people hate it, but I don't control the comments. I have deleted one person in the comment section who advertised Douyin, and replied to another person who directly greeted me with bad words, and banned her. Then I don't care about anything else. If the chapter comments disappear, when I go to correct typos in the plot, I change the next paragraph and they disappear automatically. Because I know a lot about it, I rarely ask you for monthly tickets, subscriptions, etc. The long comment that got the first likes from Qidian was not written by me. When I saw it, I still thought, wow, this girl is so nice. I didn't even think about it when I wrote it. You know, if you comment, I will correct typos and so on. Sometimes it is a mistake in the plot. I have to read hundreds of thousands of words and then correct it. It's very tiring, and besides correcting mistakes, I'm too lazy to do anything else. Although sometimes it is a bit sad to be affected. What I can guarantee is that no matter what my situation is, I will continue to update and work hard to write. Because I am very happy when I see people liking the characters in the book. Some people don't like it because my writing is not good enough, but I have a long time to improve. I will write better and better in the future, and one day I will write a world that more people like!
There are too many narrations, which makes it a bit unbearable and boring.
There are too many narrations, which makes it a bit unbearable and boring.
It turns out that the heroine is a walking spiritual flesh
It always feels like a double heroine. Even though the plot description about the current heroine accounts for a large proportion, the original heroine also accounts for a lot. To be honest, the character of the heroine is not my type. She is naive at times and seriously lacks love (she has two souls in her body, which have lasted for three lifetimes in total, and she is still so single and stupid. She already knows what attributes that scumbag father is, and she occasionally reveals her yearning for fatherly love. Remember, you are a time traveler and a cultivator of immortality.). She is not as tough as the original heroine. There is a lot of verbosity, sometimes an entire chapter, or even several chapters in a row, is like a long discussion.
