
Zhuo Hua, the Heroine Who Wears Books
by Yan Fanqi
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Must read before entering the pit: 1. Because this is my first time trying this kind of writing, I have never written anything before, and I didn't expect to be able to sign a contract at first. I just suddenly had an idea, and I had nothing to do during the epidemic, so I started writing without finishing the outline. So if it's not well written, you don't have to read it, but don't curse people, okay? 2. Because things in 3D are very busy, this update is very delayed and I won't give up! Won't give up! Won't give up! 3. Because I delayed it for a long time, I forgot a lot of it, and the writing at the end was a bit messy. But because there are too many, there is no way to change them. (This is also because the outline is not finished yet.) Therefore, after the heroine arrives in the fairy world, she will re-write the outline, which is considered a new stage, and then she will work on it. 4. I really don't want to go backstage because I'm afraid that seeing bad comments will bring me down~ 5. I hope everyone can tolerate me, thank you. 6. In addition, I would like to say thank you and apologize to the little cuties who have always supported me. Thank you for accompanying me to grow up and tolerate my many shortcomings. I also want to say "sorry" to everyone for my procrastination and avoidance. 7. Finally, I hope that everyone will always be happy and everything will go well (sympathy) Here is the introduction: Time travel to become the eponymous supporting actress in the script you just read who didn't end well? Fortunately, nothing happened yet In this world of cultivating immortals that is full of dangers, she just wants to work hard to survive. I thought everything was just a coincidence, but later I found out that it was a destiny that had already been written. Watch her step by step on her own path of cultivating immortality and becoming a god!
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Pitfall guide or lightning protection warning? A must-see! ! !
①About the male protagonist and cp issues It's decided, there will be a male protagonist, but no CP! To explain, this book focuses on friendship, family, and love. The romance line will not be the lead writer and the scenes will be allocated to the supporting characters. But if you really want to see the male and female protagonist in the cp direction, you can also bring it in. But the main text will not follow the love line! I won't walk the love line! I won't walk the love line! The heroine concentrates on her career. As for the final decision, it was also because I personally felt that it was a bit strange to write a love line in Xiuxian novels, and I was afraid that if there was a love line, the novel would collapse. But after the ending, there will be a sequel, and there will be an emotional line in the sequel. If you don't like emotional lines, just watch the ending. ②The male protagonist problem The male protagonist is not one and the same person. As for the meaning, I think some people can guess it, but I can't say it yet because it will involve spoilers. Tip: It has appeared so far, more than once. Don't guess at anyone alone. ③About the original heroine and the villain in the novel The original heroine and the current heroine will become friends. Again, there is a reason why the original heroine became the heroine. I can't write her as a bad person. (I was almost persuaded by your recent comments to open a Lily branch) What is the importance of the text? I don't want the bad guys to be bad for no reason. I hope they can be written with a certain reason, but I don't know if the writing can keep up. ④About various scheming and conspiracy parts This is a bit difficult for me, because I can't think of it, so I might not be able to write it. So there may not be much about this aspect in the article... ⑤Length Because this article will not end when it is written in the fairy world, but will go all the way to the divine world, so it may be longer. ⑥About settings Many of the settings in this article are my own random thoughts. Do not compare them with the settings or reality of other cultivation novels. Fairy tales and fantasy novels are inherently wild and unconstrained, so don't go into them too deeply. ⑦Main drama The type of article is a drama, so there may be tears, laughter, joy, and sadness in the middle. ⑧Loophole Because the world of this article is too big, I tend to forget some places, and there may be loopholes. If you find any, you can tell me and I will try my best to correct it. ⑨If readers who happen to see my article but don't like it want to fork it quietly, don't curse or give low scores, thank you. ⑩ That's all I can think of for now. If I think of anything else, I'll write it down below. If you have any questions, you can ask them directly below. I'll answer them if they don't involve spoilers. Thank you all for your support, twitter~❤
Let me popularize Qiqi in my eyes to Xinjimei!
First of all, it's sand sculpture + shameless + gentleness + cuteness + occasionally strange brain circuits + occasional neurosis = contradictory Qiqi A little girl who is carefree, but still feels sad because of other people's dislike. A little idiot who occasionally falls in love with and kills everyone. She is a patient girl who will reply to basically everyone's comments and questions after seeing them. Although she is very lazy, she always doesn't want to add updates, but she never delays them. She likes to hear people praise her for her shamelessness. For an author who considers readers very important, she will basically satisfy any requirements that do not affect the outline. Here comes the point! Don't guess her plot, you will never guess what is going on in this woman's mind! The person you thought was an important figure was written off to death by her. When you were crying so much that you felt that you had no love anymore, she used another method to restore her life in another state? ? ? There are a lot of foreshadowings in many of the previous chapters, but you still can't guess. But this woman likes to reveal spoilers in comments! ! ! Even though I couldn't guess it after looking at it.
Regarding today's discovery of plagiarism
First of all, I am very grateful for the information provided by Erbao Dandan. When I first learned about it, I thought it was just some settings that were similar, because in fact, many people's settings in the articles on cultivating immortals are similar. (However, readers who have read my article from beginning to end should also have discovered that I try my best to avoid cultivating immortals with the public in many aspects. The setting of the article is the same. For example, in the first selection, I fell into a hole instead of climbing a mountain, everyone must practice magic... Etc.) But when I found that article, I was actually quite angry, because it no longer had the same setting, but almost copied and pasted the entire article, changed her name, and it became her article. For every writer, their articles are their own efforts, and every character in my writing is my biological child. So I reported it to the editor in my team and made a palette (although it was not completely finished but it was pretty clear), but now I can't find it. She took it off the shelves, and I won't say who it was. I was very angry at the time, but after thinking about it I wasn't so angry anymore. First of all, since you copy my article, you must be my readers. Your willingness to copy it proves that you think my writing is okay, otherwise you will not copy mine, so thank you very much for your affirmation of me. I don't know how old you are or if this is your first time plagiarizing. I want to tell you that you will not make any progress by plagiarizing other people's articles. You may not write well, but you can practice your writing slowly. Plagiarism will make you stagnant. If you are discovered, you will be looked down upon by others. Moreover, plagiarizing other people's articles is an infringement of other people's copyright, and you must bear corresponding responsibilities. So I hope you can develop your own thinking, form your own style, and write your own articles in the future. Wouldn't this give you a greater sense of accomplishment? Uh-huh, I'm so angry when I say this. The one whose name was changed after copying it got 9.9 Points, while mine got more than 8 points. What happened to the name I chose? ? ? Doesn't it sound good? ? ? Since writing this book, I have written down several chapters in my memo, including my ideas, my outline, some of my settings and subplots. Before I started this book, I also took a lot of notes about herbs, levels, etc. I only used two notebooks. So, you should be able to understand why I was angry at first🌚 Okay, that's all. I hope you can see it and look forward to your new life.
[Answer Post] Why is there a male protagonist but no CP?
Readers often wonder what it means to have a male protagonist but no CP. Today I will give a systematic answer. This article is originally about two protagonists, but it uses the female character's perspective as the main narrative line. The male role is also very important in the article. He runs through the entire story, and many of the foreshadowings of this article are on him. When the mystery is revealed later, it may be narrated using his sight as the main perspective. So he is also the protagonist. There is a relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, but it is not a romantic relationship. It doesn't mean that as long as there is a male protagonist in the article, he must be the other half of the female protagonist. It doesn't mean that the male and female protagonist must be Xipi who has love. For example, I read a book before where the male protagonist's mother became younger and went to the same school as the male protagonist. His mother was the female protagonist and he was the male protagonist. They were both protagonists, but they had a mother-son relationship. I had hesitated before whether to count him as the male protagonist or an important supporting role. But I went through the synopsis carefully and found that it would be a bit "unconscionable" to say that he is a supporting role😂 Maybe because there are very few authors as unique as me, some people may accept incompetence. But there's nothing I can do about it. I've almost decided the ending and there's no way I can change it. Please understand. Finally, let me say it again, there is no love in the main plot. If you can't finish your career, how can you have the energy to fall in love 😂 ps: I'm still single, she can't even think about falling in love
Just when I suddenly want to write a long review✨
I am probably one of the earliest readers of Xiaoqi. I followed the book not long after I heard the news about it. But since it's a brand new place, it's a new beginning. When we first got to know each other, his writing skills were probably even lower than those of a young person? Haha, don't hit me. I have witnessed Da Da's growth along the way, from not being very popular to gradually having people read your books, to having people who like you, to having people willing to read books written by you. Specially happy for you. Of course, because I have known you for a long time, I know your laziness more clearly, so I didn't expect that you could keep updating and write more than 1,000 words per chapter. Although it may be because I have to sign the contract. I was actually surprised when I first learned that you were going to write about cultivating immortality. I never thought that you would write this kind of article because you had never tried it before, not even close to it. So I am worried about you because I am afraid that you will be scolded. But after you wrote it, I think it's actually pretty good. I don't know how to count my writing skills as young, novels, and I'm not a student of writing. If I can read it and understand the story, I think there's nothing wrong with it. The big article makes me feel comfortable, so I give you a five-star review to give you a little more confidence. Next, let's talk about the article. Maybe because I have been reading your book for a long time, I can better understand some of your points. When surrounded by children, it actually doesn't matter what the heroine's previous life was. The thinking of adults is different from that of children. The heroine has lived the life of a pampered child in the past few years in the world of cultivation, with no entanglements of interests or intrigues. She can act coquettishly with her mother and enjoy being loved. As for the heroine's past life, although she was an orphan, the dean's grandpa also regarded her as his granddaughter. The grandpa gave her the affection that her parents could not give, so it cannot be the same as the setting of children coming out of orphanages in other novels. Previously, the heroine was a naughty and coquettish person in front of her family, but a bit calm outside. But after getting to know Luo Yang, I felt more lively. It's just that the heroine hasn't come into contact with the dark side of the world of cultivation yet, so it's estimated that there may be a change in the future. Then there's Ah Yao. I didn't like him at first. He immediately cut off the heroine's consciousness regardless of who he was. In my heart, he is more annoying than a naughty child. But later I discovered that he was just a little arrogant and not very sensible kid who wanted to save face. I guess it should have been abandoned. After all, although his master asked her to protect someone, he still waited alone for so many years. And when the heroine is in pain while practicing the exercises, he also cares about the heroine and realizes his own uselessness. At that moment I suddenly felt a little sorry for him. When the heroine said that she missed him, he suddenly blushed and pretended to be serious, and when he praised the heroine openly and secretly, he suddenly felt that he was a little cute. Then suddenly I didn't hate him so much. Then the original heroine was scared to tears by Luo Yang during their first official meeting. She was very curious about the heroine and afraid of Luo Yang next to the heroine. He's still a kid right now, but he will probably change in the future. At present, he and the heroine don't have much interaction. According to the current situation, there should be no bad relationship in the future. I thought she would be a white lotus, but I didn't expect her to be a strong yet timid little crybaby. I thought he was a fool, but he is not stupid at all. I think this kind of character design is quite good and refreshing. As for the elder brother, the younger sister controls him. The cp with Luo Yang's happy enemy actually feels a bit sweet. I always feel that my brother's vision in the secret realm foreshadows something. Let's look at it later. There are also other minor characters, such as Su Tong who is dissatisfied with his spiritual roots and depressed, Wen Yu, a genius boy who is cold-faced and straightforward, Su Zimu, a shy little boy, Chang Su, who has a hot temper and is direct and has no intentions, and Bai Lian Anshan, a prosperous boy who is good at pretending to be weak to win sympathy. Each character has his own independent image and characteristics. I don't know if some of what I said is right or not, I just wrote down my opinions and thoughts. You always say that meeting us is the luckiest thing in your life. In fact, for some people, meeting you is the same. Although you don't talk much in the group now, you always give out red envelopes during holidays. You haven't even made any money from us and even sent us red envelopes. I remember when we first met, I would sometimes talk to you about things that bothered me, but you never thought I was annoying. You would patiently enlighten me when I was under great pressure. Then you like to hold things back when you have something to do. I remember that you wrote a study method specifically for senior high school students. You said that you improved a lot of points by learning in this way. Occasionally I wonder how there can be such a nice (stupid) person like you. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. Maybe some people will scold you in the future, and some people will think that your writing is rubbish (although not yet, but I still want to give you a vaccination in case someone is looking for trouble), but I hope you will not be discouraged. There are always people who like you and people who don't like you in this world. So, come on! In the long years to come, I hope more people will see your goodness.
Please, wouldn't it be nice to read the pit warning before reading the article?
There is a male protagonist, but no CP. This has been explained many times. I don't want to explain it anymore. The details are clearly written at the top of the comment. The female protagonist is dedicated to her career! ! ! No love! ! ! (No one has stipulated that the male and female protagonists must be lovers, right? How about breaking this inherent thinking😭) The original heroine is a very good person! He and the heroine are friends! Don't ask why the relationship is so good, just ask because they are Yan Gou! Of course, the most important thing is because of the reason why he saved her that time. The reason why Luo Yang came to strike up a conversation in the first place was indeed because he simply felt that Zhuo Hua had an appetite for her. (If you want to be crooked, face the wall!) Don't confuse scripts with reality! ! ! Many things may not be true! ! ! What you think is real is probably fake! Even if you think it's fake, it's probably true! The writing style is immature ⚠️Things are carefully considered⚠️This is my first attempt⚠️It is not a cool article⚠️I have scolded myself, please let it go! I'm too scheming to figure it out! Although I have watched The Legend of Zhen Huan 800 times, it still did not provide any help to my IQ. When the school arranged for an internship in a foreign company, I personally experienced the dangers of society, but it still did not help me in any way! What can I do? I'm desperate too! The heroine is just an ordinary person! I know what I wrote is not good. There is no need to curse people if you don't like it. Just don't read it. We all can't see it but keep it in mind. I'm sorry for wasting some of your time, but I also understand that every work is the hard work of every author no matter what. It's not easy for every author. It takes us several hours to write what you read in a few minutes (especially for someone like me who is extremely slow in coding). Please don't have too much malice towards us. Of course, please have the utmost kindness not only to us, but also to celebrities, public figures and even the people around you. "You can blurt out compliments, but think twice before slandering." Of course, if you still want to scold me, there's nothing I can do about it. However, I won't scold you either. Putting aside the fact that I cannot scold you, my character and education do not allow me to do so. So, I, I will delete your comment🤔 Although it makes me feel uncomfortable that you gave me a low score, the works I sent out are just like this, so there is nothing I can do about it. I can only keep exploring and make little progress, so that you can slowly become a little bit satisfied. The summary is: don't bother if you don't like it, don't bother each other❤️ If you like it, I'd be honored. If you don't like it, I hope I can write something that satisfies you in the future. Finally, I hope everyone who reads Xiaoqi's article can be in a good mood! I wish you all the best!
The heroine is not as good as the cp, the cp story is too terrible, please give it a boost, the author has collected it and developed it
Don't talk about how lonely it is to cultivate immortality on your own for so many years, or to have a male protagonist or something like that. The heroine can obviously meditate and practice for 8 hours to become stronger, but once she falls in love, she only has 6 hours to meditate and practice to become stronger, and she still has two hours to get entangled with the CP and pursue her in love. . (There are so many romance novels, please let me go) It's true that once a man or woman falls in love, they will always have each other in their eyes. When they look at each other, they will have such a look of infatuated happiness on their faces that they will involuntarily lower their IQ and risk it even if they don't know it. It has to be staged that when you are injured, I am nervous and grief-stricken, and when I am injured, you are nervous and cry bitterly. The most ridiculous thing is that the villain is so stupid that he waits until the hero and heroine have finished showing off their love and swallowed each other's medicine to get their anger levels high before he slaps him with a look of disdain. As a result, he was beaten to death by the male and female protagonist whose anger level increased. . (So it's really scary to talk about CP articles, it just shows off your IQ.) What I admire the most is the kind of male and female protagonists who only spend half the time practicing and practicing while they are in love, and the male and female supporting characters who are so powerful that they can kill other people crazy and practice training all day long. (Then why practice hard? You can reach the pinnacle of life by falling in love) I am really the kind of reader who expects nothing from a story without CP, and is disappointed and complains when I see it. In real life, I personally refuse to talk about relationships (it's really terrible). When we are sweet, our minds can make each other silly and happy, but when we are hurt, we are simply hysterical and bald.
Happy birthday Qiqi🎂
Happy birthday, little cutie, I wish you better and better. 🎂🎂🎂
Finished reading
The heroine is a bit immature. In terms of character, since she was a first-line actress in her previous life, she must at least pay attention to the art of speaking. Although there are many people in the entertainment industry who can't talk but think, the heroine came out of an orphanage. How can she feel unexperienced? Modern Internet slang and swear words are spoken with open mouth, which makes people feel that the first sense is not good. Maybe the author wants to use buzzwords to distance himself from readers, but in fact many people still don't accept it well. After all, online ridicule is ridicule. If you really say it like this in real life, it would be second to none. To be honest, the rhythm of the first few chapters is good, and the lack of text makes people want to continue reading. However, you still have to pay attention to the language and plot. I cannot say that the heroine must be liked by everyone, but at least, after staying in the world of cultivation for so many years, she should change her speech and try not to speak in a cheerful way. If you want to use Internet lingo, just complain in your heart. The author can read more orthodox fairy tales to hone his writing skills. After all, the first time I wrote it, there were indeed some shortcomings. I accept your setting and look forward to your growth. The above is my personal opinion. I sincerely put forward my suggestions from the perspective of an old reader who likes to read fairy tales. If you don't like it, don't spray it.
Lily(a kind of flower)
I also don't like stories that focus on emotions. It's obviously a grand, unconstrained fantasy about immortality, aiming at magical imaginations and situations that don't exist in reality. But at the beginning of falling in love, the immortal is really too wise. However, it does not prevent me from giving birth to hundreds of millions of gossips and aunt's laughter. I don't like reading romance, but I like to add some CP to add some flavor, such as Zhuo someone and Xuan someone. You see, it's not too intellectual and won't affect anything. It's harmful, but it's also a little sweet, right?
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Pitfall guide or lightning protection warning? A must-see! ! !
①About the male protagonist and cp issues It's decided, there will be a male protagonist, but no CP! To explain, this book focuses on friendship, family, and love. The romance line will not be the lead writer and the scenes will be allocated to the supporting characters. But if you really want to see the male and female protagonist in the cp direction, you can also bring it in. But the main text will not follow the love line! I won't walk the love line! I won't walk the love line! The heroine concentrates on her career. As for the final decision, it was also because I personally felt that it was a bit strange to write a love line in Xiuxian novels, and I was afraid that if there was a love line, the novel would collapse. But after the ending, there will be a sequel, and there will be an emotional line in the sequel. If you don't like emotional lines, just watch the ending. ②The male protagonist problem The male protagonist is not one and the same person. As for the meaning, I think some people can guess it, but I can't say it yet because it will involve spoilers. Tip: It has appeared so far, more than once. Don't guess at anyone alone. ③About the original heroine and the villain in the novel The original heroine and the current heroine will become friends. Again, there is a reason why the original heroine became the heroine. I can't write her as a bad person. (I was almost persuaded by your recent comments to open a Lily branch) What is the importance of the text? I don't want the bad guys to be bad for no reason. I hope they can be written with a certain reason, but I don't know if the writing can keep up. ④About various scheming and conspiracy parts This is a bit difficult for me, because I can't think of it, so I might not be able to write it. So there may not be much about this aspect in the article... ⑤Length Because this article will not end when it is written in the fairy world, but will go all the way to the divine world, so it may be longer. ⑥About settings Many of the settings in this article are my own random thoughts. Do not compare them with the settings or reality of other cultivation novels. Fairy tales and fantasy novels are inherently wild and unconstrained, so don't go into them too deeply. ⑦Main drama The type of article is a drama, so there may be tears, laughter, joy, and sadness in the middle. ⑧Loophole Because the world of this article is too big, I tend to forget some places, and there may be loopholes. If you find any, you can tell me and I will try my best to correct it. ⑨If readers who happen to see my article but don't like it want to fork it quietly, don't curse or give low scores, thank you. ⑩ That's all I can think of for now. If I think of anything else, I'll write it down below. If you have any questions, you can ask them directly below. I'll answer them if they don't involve spoilers. Thank you all for your support, twitter~❤
Let me popularize Qiqi in my eyes to Xinjimei!
First of all, it's sand sculpture + shameless + gentleness + cuteness + occasionally strange brain circuits + occasional neurosis = contradictory Qiqi A little girl who is carefree, but still feels sad because of other people's dislike. A little idiot who occasionally falls in love with and kills everyone. She is a patient girl who will reply to basically everyone's comments and questions after seeing them. Although she is very lazy, she always doesn't want to add updates, but she never delays them. She likes to hear people praise her for her shamelessness. For an author who considers readers very important, she will basically satisfy any requirements that do not affect the outline. Here comes the point! Don't guess her plot, you will never guess what is going on in this woman's mind! The person you thought was an important figure was written off to death by her. When you were crying so much that you felt that you had no love anymore, she used another method to restore her life in another state? ? ? There are a lot of foreshadowings in many of the previous chapters, but you still can't guess. But this woman likes to reveal spoilers in comments! ! ! Even though I couldn't guess it after looking at it.
Regarding today's discovery of plagiarism
First of all, I am very grateful for the information provided by Erbao Dandan. When I first learned about it, I thought it was just some settings that were similar, because in fact, many people's settings in the articles on cultivating immortals are similar. (However, readers who have read my article from beginning to end should also have discovered that I try my best to avoid cultivating immortals with the public in many aspects. The setting of the article is the same. For example, in the first selection, I fell into a hole instead of climbing a mountain, everyone must practice magic... Etc.) But when I found that article, I was actually quite angry, because it no longer had the same setting, but almost copied and pasted the entire article, changed her name, and it became her article. For every writer, their articles are their own efforts, and every character in my writing is my biological child. So I reported it to the editor in my team and made a palette (although it was not completely finished but it was pretty clear), but now I can't find it. She took it off the shelves, and I won't say who it was. I was very angry at the time, but after thinking about it I wasn't so angry anymore. First of all, since you copy my article, you must be my readers. Your willingness to copy it proves that you think my writing is okay, otherwise you will not copy mine, so thank you very much for your affirmation of me. I don't know how old you are or if this is your first time plagiarizing. I want to tell you that you will not make any progress by plagiarizing other people's articles. You may not write well, but you can practice your writing slowly. Plagiarism will make you stagnant. If you are discovered, you will be looked down upon by others. Moreover, plagiarizing other people's articles is an infringement of other people's copyright, and you must bear corresponding responsibilities. So I hope you can develop your own thinking, form your own style, and write your own articles in the future. Wouldn't this give you a greater sense of accomplishment? Uh-huh, I'm so angry when I say this. The one whose name was changed after copying it got 9.9 Points, while mine got more than 8 points. What happened to the name I chose? ? ? Doesn't it sound good? ? ? Since writing this book, I have written down several chapters in my memo, including my ideas, my outline, some of my settings and subplots. Before I started this book, I also took a lot of notes about herbs, levels, etc. I only used two notebooks. So, you should be able to understand why I was angry at first🌚 Okay, that's all. I hope you can see it and look forward to your new life.
[Answer Post] Why is there a male protagonist but no CP?
Readers often wonder what it means to have a male protagonist but no CP. Today I will give a systematic answer. This article is originally about two protagonists, but it uses the female character's perspective as the main narrative line. The male role is also very important in the article. He runs through the entire story, and many of the foreshadowings of this article are on him. When the mystery is revealed later, it may be narrated using his sight as the main perspective. So he is also the protagonist. There is a relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, but it is not a romantic relationship. It doesn't mean that as long as there is a male protagonist in the article, he must be the other half of the female protagonist. It doesn't mean that the male and female protagonist must be Xipi who has love. For example, I read a book before where the male protagonist's mother became younger and went to the same school as the male protagonist. His mother was the female protagonist and he was the male protagonist. They were both protagonists, but they had a mother-son relationship. I had hesitated before whether to count him as the male protagonist or an important supporting role. But I went through the synopsis carefully and found that it would be a bit "unconscionable" to say that he is a supporting role😂 Maybe because there are very few authors as unique as me, some people may accept incompetence. But there's nothing I can do about it. I've almost decided the ending and there's no way I can change it. Please understand. Finally, let me say it again, there is no love in the main plot. If you can't finish your career, how can you have the energy to fall in love 😂 ps: I'm still single, she can't even think about falling in love
Just when I suddenly want to write a long review✨
I am probably one of the earliest readers of Xiaoqi. I followed the book not long after I heard the news about it. But since it's a brand new place, it's a new beginning. When we first got to know each other, his writing skills were probably even lower than those of a young person? Haha, don't hit me. I have witnessed Da Da's growth along the way, from not being very popular to gradually having people read your books, to having people who like you, to having people willing to read books written by you. Specially happy for you. Of course, because I have known you for a long time, I know your laziness more clearly, so I didn't expect that you could keep updating and write more than 1,000 words per chapter. Although it may be because I have to sign the contract. I was actually surprised when I first learned that you were going to write about cultivating immortality. I never thought that you would write this kind of article because you had never tried it before, not even close to it. So I am worried about you because I am afraid that you will be scolded. But after you wrote it, I think it's actually pretty good. I don't know how to count my writing skills as young, novels, and I'm not a student of writing. If I can read it and understand the story, I think there's nothing wrong with it. The big article makes me feel comfortable, so I give you a five-star review to give you a little more confidence. Next, let's talk about the article. Maybe because I have been reading your book for a long time, I can better understand some of your points. When surrounded by children, it actually doesn't matter what the heroine's previous life was. The thinking of adults is different from that of children. The heroine has lived the life of a pampered child in the past few years in the world of cultivation, with no entanglements of interests or intrigues. She can act coquettishly with her mother and enjoy being loved. As for the heroine's past life, although she was an orphan, the dean's grandpa also regarded her as his granddaughter. The grandpa gave her the affection that her parents could not give, so it cannot be the same as the setting of children coming out of orphanages in other novels. Previously, the heroine was a naughty and coquettish person in front of her family, but a bit calm outside. But after getting to know Luo Yang, I felt more lively. It's just that the heroine hasn't come into contact with the dark side of the world of cultivation yet, so it's estimated that there may be a change in the future. Then there's Ah Yao. I didn't like him at first. He immediately cut off the heroine's consciousness regardless of who he was. In my heart, he is more annoying than a naughty child. But later I discovered that he was just a little arrogant and not very sensible kid who wanted to save face. I guess it should have been abandoned. After all, although his master asked her to protect someone, he still waited alone for so many years. And when the heroine is in pain while practicing the exercises, he also cares about the heroine and realizes his own uselessness. At that moment I suddenly felt a little sorry for him. When the heroine said that she missed him, he suddenly blushed and pretended to be serious, and when he praised the heroine openly and secretly, he suddenly felt that he was a little cute. Then suddenly I didn't hate him so much. Then the original heroine was scared to tears by Luo Yang during their first official meeting. She was very curious about the heroine and afraid of Luo Yang next to the heroine. He's still a kid right now, but he will probably change in the future. At present, he and the heroine don't have much interaction. According to the current situation, there should be no bad relationship in the future. I thought she would be a white lotus, but I didn't expect her to be a strong yet timid little crybaby. I thought he was a fool, but he is not stupid at all. I think this kind of character design is quite good and refreshing. As for the elder brother, the younger sister controls him. The cp with Luo Yang's happy enemy actually feels a bit sweet. I always feel that my brother's vision in the secret realm foreshadows something. Let's look at it later. There are also other minor characters, such as Su Tong who is dissatisfied with his spiritual roots and depressed, Wen Yu, a genius boy who is cold-faced and straightforward, Su Zimu, a shy little boy, Chang Su, who has a hot temper and is direct and has no intentions, and Bai Lian Anshan, a prosperous boy who is good at pretending to be weak to win sympathy. Each character has his own independent image and characteristics. I don't know if some of what I said is right or not, I just wrote down my opinions and thoughts. You always say that meeting us is the luckiest thing in your life. In fact, for some people, meeting you is the same. Although you don't talk much in the group now, you always give out red envelopes during holidays. You haven't even made any money from us and even sent us red envelopes. I remember when we first met, I would sometimes talk to you about things that bothered me, but you never thought I was annoying. You would patiently enlighten me when I was under great pressure. Then you like to hold things back when you have something to do. I remember that you wrote a study method specifically for senior high school students. You said that you improved a lot of points by learning in this way. Occasionally I wonder how there can be such a nice (stupid) person like you. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. Maybe some people will scold you in the future, and some people will think that your writing is rubbish (although not yet, but I still want to give you a vaccination in case someone is looking for trouble), but I hope you will not be discouraged. There are always people who like you and people who don't like you in this world. So, come on! In the long years to come, I hope more people will see your goodness.
Please, wouldn't it be nice to read the pit warning before reading the article?
There is a male protagonist, but no CP. This has been explained many times. I don't want to explain it anymore. The details are clearly written at the top of the comment. The female protagonist is dedicated to her career! ! ! No love! ! ! (No one has stipulated that the male and female protagonists must be lovers, right? How about breaking this inherent thinking😭) The original heroine is a very good person! He and the heroine are friends! Don't ask why the relationship is so good, just ask because they are Yan Gou! Of course, the most important thing is because of the reason why he saved her that time. The reason why Luo Yang came to strike up a conversation in the first place was indeed because he simply felt that Zhuo Hua had an appetite for her. (If you want to be crooked, face the wall!) Don't confuse scripts with reality! ! ! Many things may not be true! ! ! What you think is real is probably fake! Even if you think it's fake, it's probably true! The writing style is immature ⚠️Things are carefully considered⚠️This is my first attempt⚠️It is not a cool article⚠️I have scolded myself, please let it go! I'm too scheming to figure it out! Although I have watched The Legend of Zhen Huan 800 times, it still did not provide any help to my IQ. When the school arranged for an internship in a foreign company, I personally experienced the dangers of society, but it still did not help me in any way! What can I do? I'm desperate too! The heroine is just an ordinary person! I know what I wrote is not good. There is no need to curse people if you don't like it. Just don't read it. We all can't see it but keep it in mind. I'm sorry for wasting some of your time, but I also understand that every work is the hard work of every author no matter what. It's not easy for every author. It takes us several hours to write what you read in a few minutes (especially for someone like me who is extremely slow in coding). Please don't have too much malice towards us. Of course, please have the utmost kindness not only to us, but also to celebrities, public figures and even the people around you. "You can blurt out compliments, but think twice before slandering." Of course, if you still want to scold me, there's nothing I can do about it. However, I won't scold you either. Putting aside the fact that I cannot scold you, my character and education do not allow me to do so. So, I, I will delete your comment🤔 Although it makes me feel uncomfortable that you gave me a low score, the works I sent out are just like this, so there is nothing I can do about it. I can only keep exploring and make little progress, so that you can slowly become a little bit satisfied. The summary is: don't bother if you don't like it, don't bother each other❤️ If you like it, I'd be honored. If you don't like it, I hope I can write something that satisfies you in the future. Finally, I hope everyone who reads Xiaoqi's article can be in a good mood! I wish you all the best!
The heroine is not as good as the cp, the cp story is too terrible, please give it a boost, the author has collected it and developed it
Don't talk about how lonely it is to cultivate immortality on your own for so many years, or to have a male protagonist or something like that. The heroine can obviously meditate and practice for 8 hours to become stronger, but once she falls in love, she only has 6 hours to meditate and practice to become stronger, and she still has two hours to get entangled with the CP and pursue her in love. . (There are so many romance novels, please let me go) It's true that once a man or woman falls in love, they will always have each other in their eyes. When they look at each other, they will have such a look of infatuated happiness on their faces that they will involuntarily lower their IQ and risk it even if they don't know it. It has to be staged that when you are injured, I am nervous and grief-stricken, and when I am injured, you are nervous and cry bitterly. The most ridiculous thing is that the villain is so stupid that he waits until the hero and heroine have finished showing off their love and swallowed each other's medicine to get their anger levels high before he slaps him with a look of disdain. As a result, he was beaten to death by the male and female protagonist whose anger level increased. . (So it's really scary to talk about CP articles, it just shows off your IQ.) What I admire the most is the kind of male and female protagonists who only spend half the time practicing and practicing while they are in love, and the male and female supporting characters who are so powerful that they can kill other people crazy and practice training all day long. (Then why practice hard? You can reach the pinnacle of life by falling in love) I am really the kind of reader who expects nothing from a story without CP, and is disappointed and complains when I see it. In real life, I personally refuse to talk about relationships (it's really terrible). When we are sweet, our minds can make each other silly and happy, but when we are hurt, we are simply hysterical and bald.
Happy birthday Qiqi🎂
Happy birthday, little cutie, I wish you better and better. 🎂🎂🎂
Finished reading
The heroine is a bit immature. In terms of character, since she was a first-line actress in her previous life, she must at least pay attention to the art of speaking. Although there are many people in the entertainment industry who can't talk but think, the heroine came out of an orphanage. How can she feel unexperienced? Modern Internet slang and swear words are spoken with open mouth, which makes people feel that the first sense is not good. Maybe the author wants to use buzzwords to distance himself from readers, but in fact many people still don't accept it well. After all, online ridicule is ridicule. If you really say it like this in real life, it would be second to none. To be honest, the rhythm of the first few chapters is good, and the lack of text makes people want to continue reading. However, you still have to pay attention to the language and plot. I cannot say that the heroine must be liked by everyone, but at least, after staying in the world of cultivation for so many years, she should change her speech and try not to speak in a cheerful way. If you want to use Internet lingo, just complain in your heart. The author can read more orthodox fairy tales to hone his writing skills. After all, the first time I wrote it, there were indeed some shortcomings. I accept your setting and look forward to your growth. The above is my personal opinion. I sincerely put forward my suggestions from the perspective of an old reader who likes to read fairy tales. If you don't like it, don't spray it.
Lily(a kind of flower)
I also don't like stories that focus on emotions. It's obviously a grand, unconstrained fantasy about immortality, aiming at magical imaginations and situations that don't exist in reality. But at the beginning of falling in love, the immortal is really too wise. However, it does not prevent me from giving birth to hundreds of millions of gossips and aunt's laughter. I don't like reading romance, but I like to add some CP to add some flavor, such as Zhuo someone and Xuan someone. You see, it's not too intellectual and won't affect anything. It's harmful, but it's also a little sweet, right?







