I Quit after Becoming the Main Control Group of Cultivators
About This Novel
After experiencing the destruction of the village, Ji Changyue realized that she was the control group of the heroine in a novel about a heroine cultivating immortality. The same family was destroyed. The heroine defied heaven to save her mother, and became a disciple of the Yunshang Immortal Sect. Later, due to her outstanding talent, she opened the way to immortality in one fell swoop, and she and her beloved elder brother ascended to immortality. After Ji Changyue killed her younger brother from the same village, she relied on the jade pendant she stole from unknown sources to become the chief disciple of the Yunshang Immortal Sect, which was also the wife of the heroine's senior brother. Unfortunately, she was born with a disabled body and could not practice cultivation. Because her husband did not like her and the sect ignored her, she gradually became paranoid and crazy. She fell into the ghost world and died of ghosts eating her heart. When Ji Changyue learned of her original fate, she immediately wanted to smash the jade pendant. A mortal's lifespan is only a hundred years, wouldn't it be good for her to live freely in the mortal world? Why rush to be a clown? However, it took Ji Changyue a long time to understand that the reincarnation of cause and effect is never out of control. The proud man of heaven has become a despicable thief. Those who are unwilling to accept their fate think they will see the light of day, but in the end they become mud under their feet.
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I wonder if there is a male protagonist? Is there a cp? I am a non-CP person, so I am afraid of entering the wrong door.
Is the content about a fight between the heroine and the original heroine? I don't want to watch a show where the heroine always compares or even hates others, especially if she hangs around the same guy.
It's pretty, but not very smooth.
I feel like the author's writing is not strong enough, it doesn't look very interesting, and the plot is not good enough. For example, in the secret realm, you are always with a large army, and you don't look for "unique" opportunities yourself, and you don't reflect the "aura" of the protagonist. There are also many plots for other people. The scenes are not about the heroine. They are all about the heroine solving other people's problems. There is very little about how to find her own opportunities and how to cultivate herself. The second is that the details are not handled well. Many places look inexplicable. For example, there are exercises in the jade pendant space, and the protagonist has also learned them, but the grade is not clearly stated. Also, since there are books about talismans in it, and there are also talismans left over from before, it is not clear whether there are other formations for refining weapons and alchemy. If I want to make alchemy later, I will only think of buying it outside, and I don't have the space to look for it. As for foundation building, the foundation is built in two or three sentences, which seems very unsatisfactory. I don't know what happened to the broken spirit root. There is no description of how to stabilize the strength after building the foundation. The Mortal Realm is well written in the previous chapter. The camera focuses on the heroine, and her unwillingness, perseverance to live, and her plans for herself are all written in great detail. There is also a golden finger like a jade pendant as the climax. Readers are easily attracted by watching it. But later on when I got to the world of cultivating immortals, it was a bit unsatisfactory.
I hope the author will update it soon! ! !
Hope there is no cp. . . Say goodbye to the Holy Mother, try to focus on your career, anyway, don't have a cp
Author, your names are so simple.
I still hope the heroine is a swordsman
Looks good, please give me more updates.
The setting is very novel and the plot is interesting, but there are some typos that need to be corrected. Ask for more, ask for more, ask for more, ask for more, ask for more, ask for more, ask for more.
Actually, I don't understand the last three sentences in the introduction, and did the heroine really steal this jade pendant?
Damn, the heroine is probably a swordsman, right?
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I wonder if there is a male protagonist? Is there a cp? I am a non-CP person, so I am afraid of entering the wrong door.
Is the content about a fight between the heroine and the original heroine? I don't want to watch a show where the heroine always compares or even hates others, especially if she hangs around the same guy.
It's pretty, but not very smooth.
I feel like the author's writing is not strong enough, it doesn't look very interesting, and the plot is not good enough. For example, in the secret realm, you are always with a large army, and you don't look for "unique" opportunities yourself, and you don't reflect the "aura" of the protagonist. There are also many plots for other people. The scenes are not about the heroine. They are all about the heroine solving other people's problems. There is very little about how to find her own opportunities and how to cultivate herself. The second is that the details are not handled well. Many places look inexplicable. For example, there are exercises in the jade pendant space, and the protagonist has also learned them, but the grade is not clearly stated. Also, since there are books about talismans in it, and there are also talismans left over from before, it is not clear whether there are other formations for refining weapons and alchemy. If I want to make alchemy later, I will only think of buying it outside, and I don't have the space to look for it. As for foundation building, the foundation is built in two or three sentences, which seems very unsatisfactory. I don't know what happened to the broken spirit root. There is no description of how to stabilize the strength after building the foundation. The Mortal Realm is well written in the previous chapter. The camera focuses on the heroine, and her unwillingness, perseverance to live, and her plans for herself are all written in great detail. There is also a golden finger like a jade pendant as the climax. Readers are easily attracted by watching it. But later on when I got to the world of cultivating immortals, it was a bit unsatisfactory.
I hope the author will update it soon! ! !
Hope there is no cp. . . Say goodbye to the Holy Mother, try to focus on your career, anyway, don't have a cp
Author, your names are so simple.
I still hope the heroine is a swordsman
Looks good, please give me more updates.
The setting is very novel and the plot is interesting, but there are some typos that need to be corrected. Ask for more, ask for more, ask for more, ask for more, ask for more, ask for more, ask for more.
Actually, I don't understand the last three sentences in the introduction, and did the heroine really steal this jade pendant?
Damn, the heroine is probably a swordsman, right?
