The Cultivation of the First Female Immortal
by Xiluo
About This Novel
Born in the world of immortality, Lu Yunyao's grandfather was the lord of a city, his father was a master of weapon refining, and his twin brother was an out-and-out sister-in-law. My mother... Well, my mother died young, but my mother's family is not simple either. All in all, Lu Yunyao is a solid third-generation cultivator! Moreover, she has excellent qualifications, is born with great talent, and has excellent luck. She needs resources and backstage! Well, this is the story of a very heroic heroine who practices hard and diligently, and then becomes the number one female fairy in the Five Worlds of Wenyan. [PS: There is no male protagonist in this article!
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Official(220)Scraped 26d ago
I feel like the heroine is a bit...
The whole article seems a bit naive, the time design is too fast, and it is described from a third perspective. I don't know the heroine's thoughts clearly, and I feel that the heroine is a bit... She won't take revenge after someone hurts her and she solves it... As a third-generation cultivator, loved by thousands of people, and very talented, I haven't seen many fairy tales in it. As someone who has read a lot of counterattack fairy tales, this is a very novel novel. I was attracted by the introduction in the first place 😂 After reading about a hundred chapters, I can't stand the heroine's character of not taking revenge even after being harmed. But this is just me and the style of this book is inconsistent 😂 Overall, this article is a mixed bag of good and bad...
Damn, let's choose one to be the male protagonist.
Having a male protagonist can add a charm and make people more lovable.
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This book is very good
In fact, I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals, but most of those novels cover up the advantages of the heroine, and only fight back slightly when provoked by others. Although the heroine's waistcoat is always revealed in the end, it is very unsatisfactory to read. For example, let's take the heroine's spiritual roots. Other novels have five spiritual roots, and then for some reason they turn into chaotic spiritual roots. She is always bullied by others but cannot tell the truth. But this novel is much better, with solid fire spiritual roots. You may read other novels and think that the heroine must be low-key, but who of you is willing to hide your talent and make others think you are useless? Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it
Great support! ! !
Actually, what attracts me is just the name of the First Fairy. When I started this introduction, I thought there was still a male protagonist, but I saw the last row of words, yes, it was the last row of words. If I hadn't seen that row of words, I might have quit and wouldn't have been able to read this non-CP novel. It's really hard to find a non-CP novel these days. So I really support Da Da, and I said this very clearly. This book has no male protagonist, and there are some fairy tales. Don't write romance novels under the cover of fairy tales. This will make people feel like this. There is no feeling of immortality at all, and sometimes you have to walk some roads alone, right? Hold high without cp! ! Great support! ! ! Come on! ! ! ! ! !
A girl's mother passed away, and then her father came to see the heroine half a month later. The heroine actually recognized her father like this? My mother who has been together for five years! So resilient? Moreover, he seemed to be the one who abandoned her mother. Even if she didn't hate her, she wouldn't like her very much, right? I'm just asking, just for a moment, don't spray me, what is the heroine's character?
No! This is cute, but if she wasn't from the protagonist group, I would say she is narcissistic (double-standard women don't accept refutation?)
It feels like the original text in a quick travel story about being counterattacked by a female partner
His mother died, and his father, whom he had never met before, turned around and followed him back with a smile. Heartless. The rest of it feels like a mindless bragging of the heroine, who is all kinds of awesome and arrogant. Maybe I would have liked this book when I first read it in the first year of junior high school, but now I really can't stand it.
I hope readers who read the book in the future will see what I wrote. Why is the rating so high? I really can't stand it
E,,,, seems to be the second time I came in, and was persuaded to leave for the same reason. I can't figure out why the heroine accepted her mother's death so quickly and had an epiphany. This epiphany is really superfluous. But when I put it down to write something later, when I entered the sect's mental test, I thought of his mother, and then I figured it out. I liked her, and later the father who forced her mother to harm her mother and her brother by cold poison came, and he accepted it without thinking, without any entanglement. No matter whether he traveled through time or not, whether he was a child or not, he took his mother away when he grew up, or he left to protect himself, and he had some conscience. Please collect her body first and then admit to that father. Really, are you smart? Especially in the comment section there were people defending her. . . . . As expected of someone who loves to read about dribbling and running around with a ball, I can read it without thinking. Isn't this kind of behavior disgusting? It's really not worth it for her mother. Some people argue that their mother is happy, are you her mother? It is possible that her mother liked her father and took good care of the child after giving birth. That is because the child is her own flesh and blood relative. She returned to the clan for the future of the child, not to get back together. Really, I feel that writing about her mother dying on the road was just to avoid the awkwardness of getting along with his father later. Such a picture is really abrupt, so many readers can't stand it after seeing it. It really challenges the bottom line of human nature, and the heroine is too brainless. . That's all. I hope readers who read the book in the future can learn from what I wrote and don't fall into this trap. Challenge your three views and have a brainless heroine. Is that kind of dad in vain?
Precognitive dream?
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Official(220)Scraped 26d ago
I feel like the heroine is a bit...
The whole article seems a bit naive, the time design is too fast, and it is described from a third perspective. I don't know the heroine's thoughts clearly, and I feel that the heroine is a bit... She won't take revenge after someone hurts her and she solves it... As a third-generation cultivator, loved by thousands of people, and very talented, I haven't seen many fairy tales in it. As someone who has read a lot of counterattack fairy tales, this is a very novel novel. I was attracted by the introduction in the first place 😂 After reading about a hundred chapters, I can't stand the heroine's character of not taking revenge even after being harmed. But this is just me and the style of this book is inconsistent 😂 Overall, this article is a mixed bag of good and bad...
Damn, let's choose one to be the male protagonist.
Having a male protagonist can add a charm and make people more lovable.
Book Review Rules
1. We will not accept negative reviews with low scores of three stars or below. If you have any opinions, you can raise them, but posts that are outright trash and disgusting will be deleted directly. 2. It is prohibited to post works and characters that are not related to this book. If found, they will be deleted directly. 3. It is forbidden to recommend books in any form, which is similar to asking for help in a book shortage, this book is not as good as a certain book series, etc. If you find it, it will be deleted directly. 4. It is prohibited to promote piracy and malicious spamming. If found, it will be deleted directly. 5. You don't need to go to the book review section to say that you want to abandon the article. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. You can delete it directly from the bookshelf. 6. Regarding repeated charges: The gifted book coupons have a time limit (three types: 7 days, 15 days, and 30 days). Chapters you have read after the time limit must be paid again before you can read it. However, chapters paid for with book coins are permanent and you can go back and read them at any time. 7. In addition, the system sometimes automatically deletes some comments that contain banned words, and frequent login changes may also affect normal operations. Unless the above rules are violated, the administrator will not delete posts. Hope everyone knows, thank you.
This book is very good
In fact, I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals, but most of those novels cover up the advantages of the heroine, and only fight back slightly when provoked by others. Although the heroine's waistcoat is always revealed in the end, it is very unsatisfactory to read. For example, let's take the heroine's spiritual roots. Other novels have five spiritual roots, and then for some reason they turn into chaotic spiritual roots. She is always bullied by others but cannot tell the truth. But this novel is much better, with solid fire spiritual roots. You may read other novels and think that the heroine must be low-key, but who of you is willing to hide your talent and make others think you are useless? Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it
Great support! ! !
Actually, what attracts me is just the name of the First Fairy. When I started this introduction, I thought there was still a male protagonist, but I saw the last row of words, yes, it was the last row of words. If I hadn't seen that row of words, I might have quit and wouldn't have been able to read this non-CP novel. It's really hard to find a non-CP novel these days. So I really support Da Da, and I said this very clearly. This book has no male protagonist, and there are some fairy tales. Don't write romance novels under the cover of fairy tales. This will make people feel like this. There is no feeling of immortality at all, and sometimes you have to walk some roads alone, right? Hold high without cp! ! Great support! ! ! Come on! ! ! ! ! !
A girl's mother passed away, and then her father came to see the heroine half a month later. The heroine actually recognized her father like this? My mother who has been together for five years! So resilient? Moreover, he seemed to be the one who abandoned her mother. Even if she didn't hate her, she wouldn't like her very much, right? I'm just asking, just for a moment, don't spray me, what is the heroine's character?
No! This is cute, but if she wasn't from the protagonist group, I would say she is narcissistic (double-standard women don't accept refutation?)
It feels like the original text in a quick travel story about being counterattacked by a female partner
His mother died, and his father, whom he had never met before, turned around and followed him back with a smile. Heartless. The rest of it feels like a mindless bragging of the heroine, who is all kinds of awesome and arrogant. Maybe I would have liked this book when I first read it in the first year of junior high school, but now I really can't stand it.
I hope readers who read the book in the future will see what I wrote. Why is the rating so high? I really can't stand it
E,,,, seems to be the second time I came in, and was persuaded to leave for the same reason. I can't figure out why the heroine accepted her mother's death so quickly and had an epiphany. This epiphany is really superfluous. But when I put it down to write something later, when I entered the sect's mental test, I thought of his mother, and then I figured it out. I liked her, and later the father who forced her mother to harm her mother and her brother by cold poison came, and he accepted it without thinking, without any entanglement. No matter whether he traveled through time or not, whether he was a child or not, he took his mother away when he grew up, or he left to protect himself, and he had some conscience. Please collect her body first and then admit to that father. Really, are you smart? Especially in the comment section there were people defending her. . . . . As expected of someone who loves to read about dribbling and running around with a ball, I can read it without thinking. Isn't this kind of behavior disgusting? It's really not worth it for her mother. Some people argue that their mother is happy, are you her mother? It is possible that her mother liked her father and took good care of the child after giving birth. That is because the child is her own flesh and blood relative. She returned to the clan for the future of the child, not to get back together. Really, I feel that writing about her mother dying on the road was just to avoid the awkwardness of getting along with his father later. Such a picture is really abrupt, so many readers can't stand it after seeing it. It really challenges the bottom line of human nature, and the heroine is too brainless. . That's all. I hope readers who read the book in the future can learn from what I wrote and don't fall into this trap. Challenge your three views and have a brainless heroine. Is that kind of dad in vain?
Precognitive dream?
