Konoha's Entry System Ninja

Who do you think you are? What makes you think that Sarutobi Hiruzen would have a big fight with Danzo over a ninja school student who only showed a little talent. Why do you think Tsunade will definitely help you? You are just a brat. Why do you dare to challenge Danzo so boldly? Who do you think you are? You are not afraid that a fire will break out in the orphanage the next day. You are not afraid that he will kidnap you secretly, plant a curse seal on you, or die unexpectedly in a certain accident, or deprive you of your money. Blood gold, so don't treat everyone as a fool. In Chinese society, if you offend someone, that person will throw dirty water on you, let alone a powerful person in Naruto, or a famous Danzo in the ninja world, who wants to take advantage of you or kill you easily.

My only hope is that it won't be a harem story. Nowadays, a lot of them are that way. I'm sick of it.

The creation of Fire Release is too outrageous. It can speed up, teleport, and fly. It also has the Fire Release Chakra mode. First of all, the physical fitness is not good. The Fire Release on the surface of the body is cooked by itself. It is not a fruit in One Piece. If you don't write Wind Release and Thunder Release, you create it yourself and make it so disgusting that you abandon it.

The grenade was so ridiculous that I didn't want to watch it for a moment. Do you think the technology of the ninja world is very poor? They all have guns. Well, after they developed it, they directly gave it to Tiantian, a poisonous point, and it was a useless plot, just for the sake of word count. Pig's Feet learned a few C-level ninjutsu, and was immediately praised to the sky.

There is something really special about the protagonist's character. Personally, I feel that 50% of Sasuke Uchiha's "Ninja Road" aura + 1000% Kakashi Hatake's coquettishness = Shuichi Hoshita, the protagonist of this book.

I would like to ask, in the world of Naruto, is the more populous the blood family, the better? So why are those families so stubborn? Are the Hinata family afraid of rumors? The side-eye roll is still a roll-eye, right? Wouldn't it be nice if the whole world was filled with blank eyes and blood? Isn't it bad that the whole world is full of blood chakra eyes? Are you afraid of being suppressed? An entire family clings to a village? Don't you know that eggs are not put in one basket? Every ninja village and every daimyo has several tribesmen there. The enemy will not kill anyone on the battlefield. I will be responsible for the investigation with a white eye. There are dozens of escape routes. How dare the third generation force Neji's father to die? Konoha dares to suppress Hinata? The heavyweight strategic ability of Byakugan is a resource that is naturally protected. How can it be suppressed at any time like Konoha did? What are you thinking about? Make Konoha useless anytime, anywhere

Everything else is good until Chapter 20. The only issue is the timeline. Nonou alone is okay. He doesn't have many roles. He is just a few years behind him. Shisui is also very different. They all went from being younger than Obito to being older than Obito. Other than that, the writing is good.

I haven't watched it yet, but the synopsis looks pretty good, but I need to ask the heroine first.

Chapter 11: A halo of wisdom enveloped the entire audience. Author, you... How did you figure out that the pharmacist, as an undercover intelligence officer who has undergone rigorous training and has been given a forbidden spell on his tongue, would tell the protagonist the root information? No matter how you look at it, this is unreasonable. The key point is that Danzo actually believed it. He, a man who has been scheming for thousands of years and calculated every day, actually believed it so easily. What's more important is that all this was made up by his own mind... This plot is no longer poorly written or awkward, it's simply outrageous, so fucking outrageous. Take my advice and come back and rewrite this chapter! It's okay if you don't change. Our mountains are high and the road is far away. Goodbye!

It's full of loopholes. The first one is Yakushi Noono, the director of the orphanage. She was probably still a child at this time. Moreover, Shisui is older than Kakashi, and he is speechless. Let's have a rough understanding of the original timeline before writing a book.