Urban Free Killer

The author's writing style is very good, the characters are very vivid, and the plot is not much to comment on. It is just an ordinary enjoyable novel. But the fighting scenes are not enough, and sometimes the plot jumps too fast between the upper and lower chapters. It doesn't mean that you can't keep up. It's just that if you think about it, we are here to read a brainless novel. If you have to come here, you have to solve a linear equation of one variable before you want to do anything. Overall, it's great. Although it has shortcomings, it has unlimited potential (as for the bad ending, I think it's because the author was tired of writing, just like when he was a child)

The writing is okay. The first plot is well written, but the later part feels a bit weak. The part where the protagonist is reborn and takes revenge is very interesting, and the characters' emotions are okay. Later on, the protagonist should be written more powerfully, so that he doesn't feel like resisting anyone directly.

The ending is so fucking written!

What a great start! The more I look at it, the more outrageous it becomes! Where is Xiaoyao? Where is the killer? Already off the main line! The more I look at it, the more it looks like the theme of a happy life!

In fact, I think this book is quite well written, at least when I read it it felt like I wanted to keep reading. It just feels like the author has lost confidence, and all the plots that could be developed have been rushed through and ended as soon as possible. I hope the author can give himself some confidence, come on!

In fact, the author can, but the protagonist he writes has no advantage at all in being reborn. Since he is reborn, he must be proud of being reborn. There is no reason to be cowardly or cowardly. In fact, the author does not understand the concept of rebirth at all. I hope the author can read my message. After all, it is not easy to write so much. I hope the author can read more other books, define it, and come up with his own style.

Is it interesting for you to write a book like this?

What ending is this🙈🙈

The finale is too concise, this is too watery

It would be nice to write the ending in more detail.