
Eldest Grandson
by Wentan
About This Novel
Jinjiang annual gold list works. The sinister and vicious second prince VS his eldest grandson disguised as a man. She can take the imperial examination, become an official, and become an official because she is the eldest grandson. She can't cry, she can't be timid, she can't settle for mediocrity, because she is the eldest grandson. Until the secret of her life experience is discovered, she and the entire family are facing catastrophe - "If the family is not implicated, Chang Ning will take his life to accompany him." "But I don't want your life." I want you.
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Sun Ping, the direct eldest son--
She can manage the family, protect her husband, and be ranked among the top nine ministers, because she is the eldest grandson! I can't love, I don't dare to hate, I can't sing in harmony, because she is the eldest grandson! She was used by traitors to misrepresent the enemy's situation, and her family and the world would be subverted-- "I am guilty." "Zhao Changning, my life belongs to you, a mere throne is nothing." The new emperor came to the throne, and the world was initially settled. She was favored by the Holy Spirit, and her official career was prosperous. She rose to prominence at a young age. In just a few years, she went from Shaocheng to Shaoqing and even to Temple Qing. What remained unchanged was her determination not to let go of an unjust, false, or wrongful conviction. No matter whether she was facing a general with a heavy army or a civilian with no power, she would treat them equally, not punishing them unjustly, and not letting them go. Zhao Qingtian's reputation grew day by day, and she became an upright and good official trusted by the people. But there are too many temptations to be an official in the court. Some people give money, some give jewelry, some give women, some give gifts to men, and some even give gifts to male pets? Although she refused them one by one, she still made the jealous king in the palace very angry: Is she an official, or is she just attracting bees and butterflies? "Zhao Changning, I don't have any requirements for you. Don't betray me and give me a son. I will let you be the ninth prince." "It's not rare, I don't need your help, I will do it myself!"
good looking
Actually, I didn't want to see the main storyline of Zhu Mingchi and Zhao Changning's relationship 😂 If Uncle Qi hadn't done those things, I would be a huge fan of Uncle Qi! ! ! I am the one who takes Uncle Qi as the male lead! ! After all, the mysterious and handsome, erudite and warm image of the seventh uncle in front of me really makes me a fan✨✨Prince Xi is also warm, but Nuan seems to be only towards Chang Ning, but at that time he didn't know that Chang Ning was a girl (I suspected that his thoughts towards Chang Ning were not pure, in It seems to me that it is fake and warm.), Although he was defeated in the main text, I still feel that without Zhu Mingchi, Changning's fate would not be easy (compared to Zhu Mingchi, there is always a more dangerous atmosphere behind Zhu Mingxi's gentleness) The extra chapter is very exciting! ! !
I see people asking this all the time in the comments (well, classmates who also read it also asked me...), Please explain. First of all, the first chapter and the extra chapter Love Across the Mountains and Seas both describe the first life. In the first life, due to various reasons, the male protagonist was killed during the rebellion, Zhu Mingxi succeeded in seizing the throne, and the whereabouts of the seventh uncle are unknown. (The title of the first chapter, Past and Present Life, also suggests that this is a rebirth article) The rest of the text describes the second life (after rebirth). The two people who were reborn were Chang Ning and Zhu Mingqian. However, for some unknown reason, the heroine retained fewer memories, and she did not know the existence of the previous life, and only regarded it as a prophecy or warning from a dream. Zhu Mingqian, on the other hand, has a high probability of retaining most of his memories and knowing the existence of his previous life. First of all, Zhu Mingqian mentioned that he dreamed of the crown prince succeeding to the throne. Secondly, in the main text, Zhu Mingqian's eyes and psychological description when watching Changning leave for the last time have hints, saying that he still remembers the scene when he first met Zhao Changning, the Minister of Dali Temple (at the time, he thought it was a bug and later realized it) (The function of the first extra chapter is to explain Zhu Mingqian's performance in the main text and complete the content of the first life...) Let's talk about after rebirth, because Chang Ning had the reminder from the dream, he did not loyal to the prince from the beginning like in the first life, but dealt with Xi and Chi. Therefore, he had grudges with the male protagonist before he took the throne. Then, like the butterfly effect, a little change caused a completely different ending for him (it may also be because the heroine in the first life did not save Lin Man, so no one discovered the enemy) Last but not least, the first chapter and the extra chapter are about the first life, and the second chapter of the main text is about the second life of rebirth. Although the heroine never knows that she has been reborn, it is indeed a rebirth story (no one should understand this... I am exhausted)
A little disappointed 😞 (Text only)
The beginning is very good, the plot is smooth, and the family portraits are described in detail. The second and third bedrooms in the big house are all flesh-and-blood people, but in the second half, they all become paper figures. . . The more I write later, the worse it gets, and it falls short of standards. The eldest son of the Zhao family, Dou, who was the heirloom of poetry and calligraphy in Beijing, had three daughters in a row and was afraid that he would not be able to hold his head up in her husband's family, so she hid the fact that the Zhao family raised the third daughter, Zhao Changning, as a man. It is to obtain fame and glory, to honor the ancestors, and no longer need to be disliked and made difficult by the second and third brothers of the Zhao family... Zhao Changning entered the complex Dali Temple as a prostitute, and a series of tangled stories happened with the prince and the second prince... I thought I had read a good article, not Mary Sue, not contrived, and the plot was flowing. The further I read, the more I felt the writing was falling apart. The first half was relatively bland, but at least the foreshadowing was laid and the plot was smooth. The second half became more and more falling apart, turning it into a Mary Sue novel! The author has a big layout at the front. I thought the plot will unfold slowly in the back. For example, King Zhu Ming Qianyu, the author has vaguely foreshadowed it. He seems to have traveled through time or was reborn. This seems to be written casually. There is no development and no follow-up. I really don't know what this foreshadowing is for. If you write mediocre at the beginning, forget it. If you write well at the beginning, you have raised the readers' expectations. I hope you will write equally well later. If you like women disguising themselves as men and plotting tactics, it's really better to watch it when it's raining. The ability to predict dreams has also appeared in Fujimi, who has a long way to go, and Fujimi uses his ability to predict dreams very well. He will later use this point to create a vivid and vivid image of the heroine's father. The precognitive dreams in this article are almost meaningless. Zhao Changning has two precognitive dreams in the article. One is when Zhu Mingchi becomes the emperor, which is true, and the other is when Zhu Mingxi becomes the emperor, which is false. The first time is a precognition, and the second time is just a dream, which gives people a feeling of anticlimactic. Everyone loves me Zhao Changning's confession: The purpose of arranging the dignified Jin Yiwei commander Chen Zhao to torture Zhao Changning, the imperial official, was just to ask Emperor Zhu Mingchi to save me heroically. It has been planned for many years, and even the high-ranking censor is doing it for me. Zhu Mingchi, who defeated the former prince, outlasted the old emperor, and dared to lead troops to surround the palace and seize the throne, was a lover, and he fell in love with the minister who wanted to kill him - me. The general, who holds a heavy army and hangs among the flowers, has no thought of food and drink after seeing me dressed as a woman, and loves me to death. So what if the emperor's loyal guards still fall in love with me.
I love my eldest grandson so much. I like this type of thing. Although I love Mary Sues! ! ! Do you have any other novels about women dressing up as men and going to court? Please recommend them. Thank you! ! !
It was already the severe winter in Peiping in December, and the Forbidden City was filled with chilly weather. It had just snowed heavily, and the ridges in the distance, the stretches of palace on both sides of the road, were all covered with snow. Zhao Changning looked up and saw the creeping and dim building with the high eaves and flying ridges. The golden light breaking through the dark clouds shines on the dragon in relief, the dragon's head is solemn, and the endless white marble steps lead to the high vermilion palace wall. After the brutal killing, everything was still so calm, even peaceful.
good
After reading it in its entirety, I felt it was okay. The heroine rises and falls in the officialdom for the sake of her family and righteousness, and she sticks to her position without losing her sophistication. When the heroine said before about the sisters "why herself", she really felt sorry for the heroine. But she herself is very lucky that she is not bound by the limited space of her daughter's home and can carve out her own world. She has an ambition that is not inferior to that of a man. When the people slander the heroes who protect the country, she will be angry and unfair. I think the plot has developed very well up to this point. The second uncle and second aunt at home, the mother and sister, and the boss in the officialdom are all very well-rounded characters. She wanted to break away from the shackles of her "daughter body" and the shackles of officialdom politics, but for some reason in the later stage, the heroine "compromised" instead? Under the protection of a series of "big bosses", it seems like she can't do anything. The switch to the halo of the heroine and the emotional line between the male and female protagonists... Instead buried the previously depicted pattern. Instead, the male and female protagonists "eagerly" began to "fall in love" and reached the point of "parting between life and death." At the end, the male protagonist misunderstood that the female protagonist wanted to kill him, so he planned to shoot an arrow through the female protagonist's hand (accidental injury) and "imprison" her next to him... I thought it was a BE, or see each other again... In the end, he quickly forgave, and soon had a baby, and then the female protagonist who wanted to break out of the bondage "disappeared"... Although it was written for romance, I feel like the author didn't just want to write about sweet candy at the beginning, right? It would be better if the later chapters were made longer and the emotional line should not be too urgent and could be drawn slowly.
love
At first I thought the male protagonist was Uncle Qi, but I thought he was very suitable to be the male protagonist. I thought it was the prince... Then I realized it was Zhu Mingchi. To be honest, I think what I was curious about was when I was fourteen... Did modern Changning travel through time at that time? Uncle Qi is still like this...? Paranoid. And did Uncle Qi just decide to take this country because Chang Ning and Zhu Mingchi were actually married and had a skin-to-skin kiss? ......Why? Because Zhu Mingxi is the prince and has authority, why should he help him ascend to the throne? In the previous life, Zhu Mingchi believed in Changning and then lost. In this life, he didn't believe in Changning. Is it because Changning traveled through time? You're getting closer to him, right... Forget it, I was confused when I looked at it, but I was actually still curious about the story of Chang Ning and Uncle Qi... And the story of Chang Ning and Zhu Mingchi in the previous life. Finally, what did Chang Ning and Qi Shu say? Did I not look carefully? I am so curious.
Actually, I don't particularly like Chang Ning's emotional line.
I prefer that Chang Ning can be an official and be promoted continuously to support a big family and realize her lofty ambitions. It would be great if Zhang Ruojin married her. Although it is impossible, I feel that Zhang Ruojin is also very pitiful. Just because she has a sweetheart, she was angered and was destined for the rest of her life.
Highly recommended
1. The background of official positions and examinations in the Ming Dynasty is clearly explained and standardized, and will not mislead readers. 2. Both the plain and the extreme are handled very well. No matter how you write it, there is a feeling that your heart is being grasped. 3. It does not have the usual routine of Mary Sue romantic dramas. The image of the male protagonist is very unique, and the contrast between men and women and the emotions in it are both subtle and clear. 4. The names are also well chosen. Zhao Changning, Chang Huai, Zhou Chengli, etc. Are relatively friendly and real. 5. The heroine's multiple emotional lines really make readers anxious and excited, haha 6. The description of the scenery is excellent and the author's writing style is good.
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Official(255)Scraped 22d ago
Sun Ping, the direct eldest son--
She can manage the family, protect her husband, and be ranked among the top nine ministers, because she is the eldest grandson! I can't love, I don't dare to hate, I can't sing in harmony, because she is the eldest grandson! She was used by traitors to misrepresent the enemy's situation, and her family and the world would be subverted-- "I am guilty." "Zhao Changning, my life belongs to you, a mere throne is nothing." The new emperor came to the throne, and the world was initially settled. She was favored by the Holy Spirit, and her official career was prosperous. She rose to prominence at a young age. In just a few years, she went from Shaocheng to Shaoqing and even to Temple Qing. What remained unchanged was her determination not to let go of an unjust, false, or wrongful conviction. No matter whether she was facing a general with a heavy army or a civilian with no power, she would treat them equally, not punishing them unjustly, and not letting them go. Zhao Qingtian's reputation grew day by day, and she became an upright and good official trusted by the people. But there are too many temptations to be an official in the court. Some people give money, some give jewelry, some give women, some give gifts to men, and some even give gifts to male pets? Although she refused them one by one, she still made the jealous king in the palace very angry: Is she an official, or is she just attracting bees and butterflies? "Zhao Changning, I don't have any requirements for you. Don't betray me and give me a son. I will let you be the ninth prince." "It's not rare, I don't need your help, I will do it myself!"
good looking
Actually, I didn't want to see the main storyline of Zhu Mingchi and Zhao Changning's relationship 😂 If Uncle Qi hadn't done those things, I would be a huge fan of Uncle Qi! ! ! I am the one who takes Uncle Qi as the male lead! ! After all, the mysterious and handsome, erudite and warm image of the seventh uncle in front of me really makes me a fan✨✨Prince Xi is also warm, but Nuan seems to be only towards Chang Ning, but at that time he didn't know that Chang Ning was a girl (I suspected that his thoughts towards Chang Ning were not pure, in It seems to me that it is fake and warm.), Although he was defeated in the main text, I still feel that without Zhu Mingchi, Changning's fate would not be easy (compared to Zhu Mingchi, there is always a more dangerous atmosphere behind Zhu Mingxi's gentleness) The extra chapter is very exciting! ! !
I see people asking this all the time in the comments (well, classmates who also read it also asked me...), Please explain. First of all, the first chapter and the extra chapter Love Across the Mountains and Seas both describe the first life. In the first life, due to various reasons, the male protagonist was killed during the rebellion, Zhu Mingxi succeeded in seizing the throne, and the whereabouts of the seventh uncle are unknown. (The title of the first chapter, Past and Present Life, also suggests that this is a rebirth article) The rest of the text describes the second life (after rebirth). The two people who were reborn were Chang Ning and Zhu Mingqian. However, for some unknown reason, the heroine retained fewer memories, and she did not know the existence of the previous life, and only regarded it as a prophecy or warning from a dream. Zhu Mingqian, on the other hand, has a high probability of retaining most of his memories and knowing the existence of his previous life. First of all, Zhu Mingqian mentioned that he dreamed of the crown prince succeeding to the throne. Secondly, in the main text, Zhu Mingqian's eyes and psychological description when watching Changning leave for the last time have hints, saying that he still remembers the scene when he first met Zhao Changning, the Minister of Dali Temple (at the time, he thought it was a bug and later realized it) (The function of the first extra chapter is to explain Zhu Mingqian's performance in the main text and complete the content of the first life...) Let's talk about after rebirth, because Chang Ning had the reminder from the dream, he did not loyal to the prince from the beginning like in the first life, but dealt with Xi and Chi. Therefore, he had grudges with the male protagonist before he took the throne. Then, like the butterfly effect, a little change caused a completely different ending for him (it may also be because the heroine in the first life did not save Lin Man, so no one discovered the enemy) Last but not least, the first chapter and the extra chapter are about the first life, and the second chapter of the main text is about the second life of rebirth. Although the heroine never knows that she has been reborn, it is indeed a rebirth story (no one should understand this... I am exhausted)
A little disappointed 😞 (Text only)
The beginning is very good, the plot is smooth, and the family portraits are described in detail. The second and third bedrooms in the big house are all flesh-and-blood people, but in the second half, they all become paper figures. . . The more I write later, the worse it gets, and it falls short of standards. The eldest son of the Zhao family, Dou, who was the heirloom of poetry and calligraphy in Beijing, had three daughters in a row and was afraid that he would not be able to hold his head up in her husband's family, so she hid the fact that the Zhao family raised the third daughter, Zhao Changning, as a man. It is to obtain fame and glory, to honor the ancestors, and no longer need to be disliked and made difficult by the second and third brothers of the Zhao family... Zhao Changning entered the complex Dali Temple as a prostitute, and a series of tangled stories happened with the prince and the second prince... I thought I had read a good article, not Mary Sue, not contrived, and the plot was flowing. The further I read, the more I felt the writing was falling apart. The first half was relatively bland, but at least the foreshadowing was laid and the plot was smooth. The second half became more and more falling apart, turning it into a Mary Sue novel! The author has a big layout at the front. I thought the plot will unfold slowly in the back. For example, King Zhu Ming Qianyu, the author has vaguely foreshadowed it. He seems to have traveled through time or was reborn. This seems to be written casually. There is no development and no follow-up. I really don't know what this foreshadowing is for. If you write mediocre at the beginning, forget it. If you write well at the beginning, you have raised the readers' expectations. I hope you will write equally well later. If you like women disguising themselves as men and plotting tactics, it's really better to watch it when it's raining. The ability to predict dreams has also appeared in Fujimi, who has a long way to go, and Fujimi uses his ability to predict dreams very well. He will later use this point to create a vivid and vivid image of the heroine's father. The precognitive dreams in this article are almost meaningless. Zhao Changning has two precognitive dreams in the article. One is when Zhu Mingchi becomes the emperor, which is true, and the other is when Zhu Mingxi becomes the emperor, which is false. The first time is a precognition, and the second time is just a dream, which gives people a feeling of anticlimactic. Everyone loves me Zhao Changning's confession: The purpose of arranging the dignified Jin Yiwei commander Chen Zhao to torture Zhao Changning, the imperial official, was just to ask Emperor Zhu Mingchi to save me heroically. It has been planned for many years, and even the high-ranking censor is doing it for me. Zhu Mingchi, who defeated the former prince, outlasted the old emperor, and dared to lead troops to surround the palace and seize the throne, was a lover, and he fell in love with the minister who wanted to kill him - me. The general, who holds a heavy army and hangs among the flowers, has no thought of food and drink after seeing me dressed as a woman, and loves me to death. So what if the emperor's loyal guards still fall in love with me.
I love my eldest grandson so much. I like this type of thing. Although I love Mary Sues! ! ! Do you have any other novels about women dressing up as men and going to court? Please recommend them. Thank you! ! !
It was already the severe winter in Peiping in December, and the Forbidden City was filled with chilly weather. It had just snowed heavily, and the ridges in the distance, the stretches of palace on both sides of the road, were all covered with snow. Zhao Changning looked up and saw the creeping and dim building with the high eaves and flying ridges. The golden light breaking through the dark clouds shines on the dragon in relief, the dragon's head is solemn, and the endless white marble steps lead to the high vermilion palace wall. After the brutal killing, everything was still so calm, even peaceful.
good
After reading it in its entirety, I felt it was okay. The heroine rises and falls in the officialdom for the sake of her family and righteousness, and she sticks to her position without losing her sophistication. When the heroine said before about the sisters "why herself", she really felt sorry for the heroine. But she herself is very lucky that she is not bound by the limited space of her daughter's home and can carve out her own world. She has an ambition that is not inferior to that of a man. When the people slander the heroes who protect the country, she will be angry and unfair. I think the plot has developed very well up to this point. The second uncle and second aunt at home, the mother and sister, and the boss in the officialdom are all very well-rounded characters. She wanted to break away from the shackles of her "daughter body" and the shackles of officialdom politics, but for some reason in the later stage, the heroine "compromised" instead? Under the protection of a series of "big bosses", it seems like she can't do anything. The switch to the halo of the heroine and the emotional line between the male and female protagonists... Instead buried the previously depicted pattern. Instead, the male and female protagonists "eagerly" began to "fall in love" and reached the point of "parting between life and death." At the end, the male protagonist misunderstood that the female protagonist wanted to kill him, so he planned to shoot an arrow through the female protagonist's hand (accidental injury) and "imprison" her next to him... I thought it was a BE, or see each other again... In the end, he quickly forgave, and soon had a baby, and then the female protagonist who wanted to break out of the bondage "disappeared"... Although it was written for romance, I feel like the author didn't just want to write about sweet candy at the beginning, right? It would be better if the later chapters were made longer and the emotional line should not be too urgent and could be drawn slowly.
love
At first I thought the male protagonist was Uncle Qi, but I thought he was very suitable to be the male protagonist. I thought it was the prince... Then I realized it was Zhu Mingchi. To be honest, I think what I was curious about was when I was fourteen... Did modern Changning travel through time at that time? Uncle Qi is still like this...? Paranoid. And did Uncle Qi just decide to take this country because Chang Ning and Zhu Mingchi were actually married and had a skin-to-skin kiss? ......Why? Because Zhu Mingxi is the prince and has authority, why should he help him ascend to the throne? In the previous life, Zhu Mingchi believed in Changning and then lost. In this life, he didn't believe in Changning. Is it because Changning traveled through time? You're getting closer to him, right... Forget it, I was confused when I looked at it, but I was actually still curious about the story of Chang Ning and Uncle Qi... And the story of Chang Ning and Zhu Mingchi in the previous life. Finally, what did Chang Ning and Qi Shu say? Did I not look carefully? I am so curious.
Actually, I don't particularly like Chang Ning's emotional line.
I prefer that Chang Ning can be an official and be promoted continuously to support a big family and realize her lofty ambitions. It would be great if Zhang Ruojin married her. Although it is impossible, I feel that Zhang Ruojin is also very pitiful. Just because she has a sweetheart, she was angered and was destined for the rest of her life.
Highly recommended
1. The background of official positions and examinations in the Ming Dynasty is clearly explained and standardized, and will not mislead readers. 2. Both the plain and the extreme are handled very well. No matter how you write it, there is a feeling that your heart is being grasped. 3. It does not have the usual routine of Mary Sue romantic dramas. The image of the male protagonist is very unique, and the contrast between men and women and the emotions in it are both subtle and clear. 4. The names are also well chosen. Zhao Changning, Chang Huai, Zhou Chengli, etc. Are relatively friendly and real. 5. The heroine's multiple emotional lines really make readers anxious and excited, haha 6. The description of the scenery is excellent and the author's writing style is good.

