My Elves

Xiaoyao in the anime is basically a person who doesn't understand anything. Xiaoyao is either a top student or a scumbag. Anyone who has watched the anime should know this. Safiya is another character. Did the author make something wrong? Chisato's daughter is Haruka, not Odamaki's daughter. Has the author actually read the anime and manga? The messy settings are the settings of Xiaoyao and Safiya mixed with some other things? (Question) By the way, because the heroine is Xiaoyao, I don't want to read the abandoned book. What can I do if I don't abandon the book even though I'm married... People who like me shouldn't criticize...

Every PM article with more than a million words is the author's hard work. We don't have to read it or make comments if it doesn't suit your taste, but please don't be overly aggressive or malicious. Every PM article author should be loved and cared for. This one is too immature, but it can fatten up the author. Read this one. Who doesn't have the developmental stage? Will you write this kind of book after everything is over?

I really can't stand it when I read chapter 20. It's just a fire chicken, and I even added a nickname in parentheses. I'm really speechless. I won't change it even after I said it. It's too much to mention two Arceus.

Here we talk about the relationship between elves and humans, but here we talk directly about the relationship between elves and masters. Totally off topic, rubbish.

I quite like the protagonist's character, but I really can't say anything about his IQ. Several legendary elves as partners could be suppressed and beaten by some who only had championship-level strength and were not even quasi-gods. But he also needs to grow up, so I can accept it.

The writing style of the book written by the author is good, but the direction and development of the content and the plot in some parts... I should say, I should be able to accept it, but it makes me feel panicked, and there is always an unspeakable anger... Of course, this is just my personal opinion (after all, I have only recently become obsessed with Pokémon fan fiction), but I still support the author. I am just telling you my feelings about this book. It is not that I hate it, but I just don't like the settings between the characters. Because I always like to put myself in when reading novels, which allows me to better imagine the scenes described by the author, so I always feel that it is strange that the protagonist of Pokémon fan fiction has an emotional development...

If nothing else, I just want to ask, was Pigfoot also a primary school student before he traveled through time? The thinking is a bit childish!

When I saw the introduction, I was inexplicably reminded of Vine Snake abandoning its trainer~~

Doesn't Rayquaza need the finishing touch to super evolve?

The description of the protagonist is not very good either. As an elf trainer, shouldn't you trust your elf more? Should you listen to their opinions?