This is Really the Sharingan

After reading the first ten chapters, I discovered a problem. The author wanted to make fun, light-hearted and humorous complaints, but the author did not find a clear direction or artistic conception at all. The plot was too embarrassing, and some parts were too poisonous. For example, he told others that his power was Naruto all the time, which made the protagonist appear to be particularly wise. I haven't read them all. Please tell me if there are any late-filling incidents.

I no longer want to look back at my previous novels. I closed the book after reading it a few days ago. Why are so many books sealed?

This book is actually quite good. It is the first book I have read to the end. Let me tell you a story: There is a couple. The man is very cowardly and always lets his girlfriend try before doing anything. The girlfriend is very dissatisfied with this. Once, the two of them went to sea. When they returned, a hurricane destroyed the boat. Fortunately, the girlfriend grabbed a piece of wood to save their lives. The girlfriend asked her boyfriend: "Are you afraid?" The boyfriend took out a fruit knife from his arms and said, "Afraid, but if a shark comes, I will use this to deal with it." The girlfriend just shook her head and smiled bitterly. The girlfriend was finally rescued, and everyone on the deck was in silence. The captain sat next to the girl and said, "Miss, your boyfriend is the bravest person I have ever seen." "No, he is a coward." The girl said coldly. "How can you say that? We have been watching you with telescopes just now. We clearly saw him severing his wrists with a knife after pushing you away. Sharks are very sensitive to the smell of blood. If he doesn't do this to buy time, you may never appear on this ship..." When the girlfriend heard the truth, it was like a bolt from the blue. She was devastated and heartbroken. She just wanted to jump into the sea and die with her boyfriend immediately. At the critical moment, the captain grabbed her: "If I were you, I would definitely live well and fill up the sea with an excavator to avenge your boyfriend." The girlfriend was silent for a few seconds and asked calmly: "Which company has the best excavator technology?" The captain: "Look for Lan Xiang from Shandong, China!"

If there is a female protagonist, I hope it is a single female protagonist. There are so many harem stories nowadays that I feel like vomiting (눈_눈)(●-●)

I remember very clearly the one magatama insight, the second magatama copy, and the three magatama illusions. As a result, many novels with Sharingan were written that two magatama can perform illusions. Sasuke's three magatama were opened during the duel with Naruto in the Valley of the End. Before that, there were only two magatama. At that time, you can copy the taijutsu, and Baidu also wrote about the two magatama copy and three magatama illusions.

I sent it several times but still can't get it out...

Even late at night, I still read the author's book, come on! I heard that if you post a picture, you will get likes (๑¯ํ ³ ¯ํ๑), likes and comments (۳˚Д˚)۳

Generally speaking, the writing is very good. As long as it doesn't suck later, just keep following this plot. It won't be too much. It will definitely become good in the future. It requires both quality and quantity. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It is said that 300 years ago, in a temple built on a mountain peak, the kind and kind old monk faced the young monk's request and told his story in desperation. The old monk said: Once upon a time, there was a mountain, and there was a temple on the mountain. There was an old monk and a young monk in the temple. The old monk was telling the young monk a story. What was he telling? It tells the story that once upon a time there was a temple on a mountain. There was an old monk and a young monk in the temple. The old monk was telling a story to the young monk. What was he telling? It's about...

Is it the distortion of human nature or moral corruption? This is still the case with humans. One person said that this book is not good, and then a lot of people appeared and said, "Whether you want to read it or not, don't read it, bb, etc. If you have the ability, you can write it yourself, be a good person, etc." Then some people followed suit. In the novel app, we are readers. What are these online articles for? They are for us readers. Book reviews are for readers to tell the bad things about their works. If the author cannot accept the bad things about his work, then what progress can be made? (Of course, there are those who like it and those who don't, and everyone has their own preferences.) Many authors are like this. They write well at the beginning, but they fail after a hundred words, due to various problems. The above is nonsense I said. Regarding Jianxian, what kind of people are like in the real world, people who know more will understand.