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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of story books The advantage is that the author is very attentive to the study of Naruto. There is nothing wrong with the overall Naruto framework. It is based on AB's settings. This is really an advantage. The most taboo thing about writing Naruto is to randomly change the settings. I hope the author will stick to it. There are some shortcomings. To be honest, the emotional scene with Ye Cang is a bit awkward. What's more, Naruto is originally a tragedy. Nowadays, novels will try to be happy. I hope the author can add some. We have seen too many tragedies. Let's be happy.

In the Nine Heavens, Lingxiao Palace, the immortal classes were on both sides, Liu Xuande and the Jade Emperor looked at each other. The Jade Emperor caressed the male and female swords gently and said with emotion: "When I gave you these divine weapons, I didn't expect you to make them grow much. After all, you were just a straw mat seller at the time and didn't have much money to buy materials." He stared deeply at Xuande and found that he couldn't see through him. The Jade Emperor shook his head: "I didn't expect that you could refine it to this point. It's even comparable to the Mo Xie Divine Sword. Compared with the Xuanyuan Sword, it's only a hair away!" Xuande remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish speaking. "Amazing! Amazing!" The Jade Emperor exclaimed: "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless sword?" Xuande was silent, he knew all this. "However," the Jade Emperor changed his subject: "It is difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with five kinds of natal divine flames for a hundred years before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword." The Jade Emperor looked at Xuande, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but continue: "These five divine flames are the Crystal Flame, Hunyuan Flame, Fengluo Flame, Tianxing Flame and Sith Flame. Except for the first one I have, the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Liu Bang has it. Do you understand?" Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said slowly: "I have all the last four, only the first one is missing." The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment. "How is it possible!? Those four divine flames!? How could he have them!? Is it Kong Ming!?" The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask: "You came to me just for the Crystal Flame?" Xuande nodded and said slowly: "Yes, I came here just for the water experience."

Dear readers who are passing by👿, can anyone give me some recommendation votes and favorites for this poor me?😇 My test results are very poor. I don't know if there will be another round of recommendations. Please help me😊

I can bear it when the protagonist digs out his eyes casually, I can bear it when his eyes are combined to give him the reincarnation eye, and I can bear it when he gives him the eye roll. What do you mean by giving him the reincarnation eye? ? ? Can the Tenseigan be used by people other than the Hyuga family? ? ? Regardless of whether it can be used or not, if you have more than a dozen pairs of reincarnation eyes in your village, you can single-handedly challenge other ninja villages and their combat power will collapse. So there can be no more two stars.

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I recommend this book to my reading list. I read the introduction and found it very interesting and attracted me. I'm going to read this book too. It's good. The logic is very strict. It's much better than many Naruto novels. However, the writing style in the first few paragraphs is a bit green and there are too many psychological descriptions, but it's understandable. After all, I have also tried to write a book, but my brain turned to mush when I faced the computer coding. It must be my first time to write a book, and it is not easy! As for the follow-up, I think that according to the setting of the protagonist, we can take a stable and skinny route. After all, it would be a pity not to commit suicide if we are not willing to die. However, this is just my subjective opinion. As for how to write it, that's up to you. I don't force it, just don't write it badly. Everyone, help me get up there! ! !

This book is extremely poisonous. The protagonist revealed his secret from the beginning, and saved her again and again for an anime character he liked in his previous life. I really can't stand it anymore, so I'll take my leave now!

The plot is obviously good, but it has to be about emotions. It's not that you can't write about emotions, it's just that your writing is too bad. Many male authors are not good at writing emotional essays, so they just write them off in one stroke. And the author comes up with a paragraph every now and then. Now it is not so much a sentimental article as it is a dog food article and a pornographic article. It has no literature, no artistry, and no entertainment.

Author, could you please come out and have a chat?

The author is a eunuch, what should I do?