Pastoral Wedding

I skipped through it, but I can barely read it. There are indeed some places in the middle that don't connect the previous chapters to the next. The male protagonist rarely appears, and it feels like there is no male protagonist. The heroine really has a hand in everything and feels like she can do anything. The heroine has a great aura but no money. When she turns around to buy a mountainous area, she finds nanmu. This is incredible luck.

First of all: Is there a male protagonist in this novel? I have read more than 140 chapters. The male protagonist has appeared at most 5 times and his identity is unknown. Sometimes he is a bandit and sometimes he is the general's entourage. There is no story line at all. Secondly: the writing is messy, didn't the Chinese teacher teach you to use punctuation marks? Also: I can't connect. I'm talking about looking for a maid. In the next chapter, my best friend dies! Inexplicable? How did you die? Why are you still pregnant? Entrusted to the heroine? Nothing is introduced. It's inexplicable. Many chapters are like this. Otherwise, you won't be able to understand every word. It's such a mess. Really, any novel can be turned into a book. Can you please check it before uploading it? The whole book is fine at the beginning, but starts to lose its seriousness in the middle and becomes a mess.

Can a four-month-old child have two teeth?

Why is it so messed up? There are some places where the preface and the follower are inconsistent.

The heroine is so self-righteous that she wants to have a hand in everything.

Click on the novel screen and keep jumping

The heroine's mother is so brainless

Can an average man live in a familiar home, let alone one with three daughters?

Check-in is here, today's nine recommendation votes have been given, I hope the rest of this book will become more and more exciting!

Overall it's pretty good and worth a look, but some of the content in the middle is a bit laggy.