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There are basically no problems with the logic of the sentences in this book, but in some places too much psychology is used without movements or expressions, which is not enough to describe the characters in a detailed and specific manner. Moreover, because sometimes God's vision is used, the description of the third-person characters is removed, leaving the characters in the work with only form but no spirit. It is recommended that the author should use more descriptions of actions, expressions, environment, language (less or less language), etc., As well as descriptions of touch, smell, and hearing in this comprehensive character description, and add less judgmental God's perspective to judge a certain character. The real character is not what the author said, but the character's own behavior (naturally including psychology). At this level of description, go to the next level and use storylines to shape a "real" character image. The so-called novel is a story. A good story needs a plot. Novels win with story and plot, followed by writing style. The plot needs a general direction, which is the main line. The so-called main line is what the heroine has experienced and become. This experience involves many branch lines, characters and events in the branch lines, etc. They are not arranged randomly, but arranged with purpose to serve the main line. "Wen does not like peace" is a saying of Confucius, and I think it makes sense. The dislike of flatness here should be the root of the novel, that is, in the novel it represents the plot. The plot does not like flatness and does not need flatness. Only in this way can it be easier to push the article to another level. As for the plain ones, they are also needed, but what is plain is not the plot, but the writing style. The true meaning can be seen in the plainness. So I personally feel that articles need to be flat, but also need to be uneven. Writing is good, but in essence, a story sometimes doesn't even need any writing. All it needs is a twists and turns and a fascinating plot to make it an article that you can read and understand what you want to say. The author's plot is average, but the main reason is that he doesn't use enough rendering to express the plot, nor does he use enough description to create the characters. Therefore, the author can start from these two aspects.

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