Douluo: after Passing Through the Book, I Became Shrek's Eldest Sister
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[Dear missionaries, welcome to Douluo Continent. [The role played by the tasker: a ruthless, talkative, cold-tongued elder sister][There may be problems in the current world story: the male protagonist is too strong; the female supporting role is meaningless; the remaining protagonists' emotional lines are perfunctory and simple, and they are paired...][I hope that the tasker can balance and modify the world without affecting the development of the story and the progress of the main line, so as to make the world of Douluo Continent more compelling! Old scholar Lu Ye: ... You are so big, you are so handsome. What kind of coolness do you need for an ancient Tom Su Nan's exciting article? ·The text has been completed. There is no cp, but the heroine once had Bai Yueguang (who has died and cannot be resurrected). Novel modification. This work is full of complaints about the original work and a lot of magical changes. Book fans should be careful as they will dismantle the original CP and follow the protagonist in the first half. No abuse, no licking, no female play, win-win cooperation, two-way running, NPC awakening. ·The new book "Douluo 2: All members except Huo Yuhao travel through time" has been released~ Welcome to follow up ·"Demining Guide": 1. This article is not a cool article. If you like to read cool articles written by a brainless system, please move here. The system in this article is one of the villains, not a cheat. 2. This work is an exercise for the author to describe group portraits. He will focus on the portrayal of group portraits and put less emphasis on personal emotional drama. Sorry for the privacy 3. It mainly focuses on a younger brother who is the heroine of everyone, including Tang San, so don't question the author anymore about Li San. I think this relationship status is rather the other way around.
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Official(63)Scraped 23d ago
Urgent update! ! !
Of all the Douluo fanfics I've read, this one is the best. He really does what the introduction says, neither licking nor torturing. It's worth reading. A little spoiler: The protagonist once met Tang San in the Tangmen plane, but he didn't remember this little guy at all.
I briefly read a short part of the chapters. Maybe it was because I had some expectations that I shouldn't have after reading the introduction, so I wanted to clear the air. If you can't accept it, you can run away. Although the heroine has complained many times about the male channel author's description of female characters, the author's description of the heroine's appearance has moved towards a different kind of male bonding. The difference is probably that it is more euphemistic and does not exceed physical limits, and the aesthetics are different, but the essence is an obvious gaze. Although it is described that the heroine has high prestige and strict management, Dai Mubai, who has been disciplined for several years, will still take the twins to the hotel to meet Tang San and be slapped in the face, while Ma Hongjun still chats up girls and is still interested in strange girls. This is because the heroine will immediately reprimand and beat them whenever they make mistakes and they respect the heroine more than the dean. In addition, the heroine inexplicably said to Zhu Zhuqing at the beginning that I would take care of your man for you, but the author described in the article Dai Mubai's jealousy because the heroine paid attention to Tang San. The heroine's own evaluation of Dai Mubai was indeed disgusting, but the author would call him a cat. In addition, the impression value is understandable, but it is really difficult to understand the setting that patching the world requires brushing up the male protagonist's favorability. Rather than repairing the world, the author's expectations for the heroine are more to let her attack other people if she is not happy: Tang San who directly gives the favorability value, Dai Mubai who is jealous of the heroine, Oscar Ma Hongjun who becomes his younger brother, and Ning Rongrong who treats the heroine as "mother" ... If it were another fanfic, I should have quit when I saw the description of the heroine's appearance. However, because of the tasks that the heroine has to do, her discomfort with the description of the male Ning in the original work, and her dissatisfaction with the abnormal settings that should not exist in the original work, I still tried to read a few more chapters. I can only say that reading these chapters made me feel more uncomfortable than reading those fanfics that were directly written off. I felt like I was being tricked into killing myself.
The Saint of Wuhun Palace does not want to make Wuhun Palace stronger, but only wants to lead the protagonist group to defeat Wuhun Palace. People in Douluo Mainland can only worship one teacher in their lifetime. It can also be understood that they can only join one organization. This is too poisonous, and the fantasy world is not a mortal world. The class is too obvious. Even if there are no nobles, the status difference between soul masters and ordinary people is too big. Drag a group of nobles to defeat Wuhun Palace which is based on civilians and then establish a republic? What do you think? You can't build a republic like this. Unless you break the rules and change the cultivation system, either everyone can practice or no one can practice. The idea of the Republic is good, but the route is not correct.
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The first time I watched it was because I came across a tweet video. I expressed interest in this kind of article that completely matched my mental state, so I downloaded QQ to read it and filled up VIP for it. At that time, I saw the recruitment of four-attribute clans, and suddenly I felt like I was caught in a big net. From easily crushing the cool appearance to facing stronger opponents step by step, and more difficult troubles, everyone is slowly growing up. I remember that when Tang San saw the book for the first time, he really felt like the locks of reincarnation were beginning to connect, and then when the book was finished, everything seemed to have become a Möbius strip, constantly jumping out and looping back again. After I read "Conquering Yang Wudi", I stopped reading it (and I didn't have to). I thought the author had stopped reading. I suddenly got bored recently, so I went to look through my browsing history, and found the only book owned by my annual VIP VIP from a pile of books. I found that it was already finished. I opened it with excitement, but found that I had forgotten all the previous plots, so I had to start from the beginning. Seriously, no one has ever told me that it is so refreshing to read the ending directly, and my thinking is coherent. The emotional line is also clean and tidy, there is no weird emotional line of being together for others. I can't describe what I read. This is the Shrek Seven Monsters I want to read. After reading the serialization of this book, I went to find a Douluo fan. I didn't say anything when I read it. I picked out a few female videos from the cracks little by little. I was scorched on the outside and tender on the inside because of the love of the little wife. After reading this book, I felt a sad feeling that a confidant is hard to find
CP about the protagonist
I really want to know if Lulu has CP? [Emot=default,55/]Now based on the story of Lu Lu and Shen Yue, as well as the two-way running in the introduction (I don't know if this two-way running refers to Lulu and Shen Yue or the various CPs in the original work ), I personally think it may be Lu Lu and Shen Yue, even though Shen Yue has only appeared in the illusion so far. So Lu Lu has no CP, and Shen Yue just has good memories and regrets? Or are Shen Yue and Lu Lu a couple?
I'd say it looks good, it's pretty good, but I just want to ask, the author's protagonist has traveled through several worlds and all of them have traveled to a peaceful world. Does the soul power point to the 30th level of Gaotang and still make a trace of blood? The soul skills were all familiar to him in the world before, and he could still produce a trace of blood. This was too much to give up, and it didn't mean that Tang San was too cheating.
Haha, I love it so much. I have been reading it recently. The story is very interesting
Lu Lu and Shen Yue are really at odds with each other
The author writes very well and the characters are very fleshed out
I am a fan of comics (I don't protect the Third Young Master). The original Tang San was okay in the early stage, but collapsed very badly in the later stage. I can see that many people are hating Tang San. The author wrote it very well, that is, Tang San in the early stage of the original work is sober and resourceful. The awakening of the female character is also very well written. Although it is very touching to sacrifice oneself for the other party, I still hope that Xiao Wu has a calm, elegant and strategizing side. The author is amazing, and he is following the updates every day. I hope you continue to work hard qaq
Baby, you write well I went to Myanmar in my last life, and they sent me back overnight because I only cared about my sister.
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Official(63)Scraped 23d ago
Urgent update! ! !
Of all the Douluo fanfics I've read, this one is the best. He really does what the introduction says, neither licking nor torturing. It's worth reading. A little spoiler: The protagonist once met Tang San in the Tangmen plane, but he didn't remember this little guy at all.
I briefly read a short part of the chapters. Maybe it was because I had some expectations that I shouldn't have after reading the introduction, so I wanted to clear the air. If you can't accept it, you can run away. Although the heroine has complained many times about the male channel author's description of female characters, the author's description of the heroine's appearance has moved towards a different kind of male bonding. The difference is probably that it is more euphemistic and does not exceed physical limits, and the aesthetics are different, but the essence is an obvious gaze. Although it is described that the heroine has high prestige and strict management, Dai Mubai, who has been disciplined for several years, will still take the twins to the hotel to meet Tang San and be slapped in the face, while Ma Hongjun still chats up girls and is still interested in strange girls. This is because the heroine will immediately reprimand and beat them whenever they make mistakes and they respect the heroine more than the dean. In addition, the heroine inexplicably said to Zhu Zhuqing at the beginning that I would take care of your man for you, but the author described in the article Dai Mubai's jealousy because the heroine paid attention to Tang San. The heroine's own evaluation of Dai Mubai was indeed disgusting, but the author would call him a cat. In addition, the impression value is understandable, but it is really difficult to understand the setting that patching the world requires brushing up the male protagonist's favorability. Rather than repairing the world, the author's expectations for the heroine are more to let her attack other people if she is not happy: Tang San who directly gives the favorability value, Dai Mubai who is jealous of the heroine, Oscar Ma Hongjun who becomes his younger brother, and Ning Rongrong who treats the heroine as "mother" ... If it were another fanfic, I should have quit when I saw the description of the heroine's appearance. However, because of the tasks that the heroine has to do, her discomfort with the description of the male Ning in the original work, and her dissatisfaction with the abnormal settings that should not exist in the original work, I still tried to read a few more chapters. I can only say that reading these chapters made me feel more uncomfortable than reading those fanfics that were directly written off. I felt like I was being tricked into killing myself.
The Saint of Wuhun Palace does not want to make Wuhun Palace stronger, but only wants to lead the protagonist group to defeat Wuhun Palace. People in Douluo Mainland can only worship one teacher in their lifetime. It can also be understood that they can only join one organization. This is too poisonous, and the fantasy world is not a mortal world. The class is too obvious. Even if there are no nobles, the status difference between soul masters and ordinary people is too big. Drag a group of nobles to defeat Wuhun Palace which is based on civilians and then establish a republic? What do you think? You can't build a republic like this. Unless you break the rules and change the cultivation system, either everyone can practice or no one can practice. The idea of the Republic is good, but the route is not correct.
nice
The first time I watched it was because I came across a tweet video. I expressed interest in this kind of article that completely matched my mental state, so I downloaded QQ to read it and filled up VIP for it. At that time, I saw the recruitment of four-attribute clans, and suddenly I felt like I was caught in a big net. From easily crushing the cool appearance to facing stronger opponents step by step, and more difficult troubles, everyone is slowly growing up. I remember that when Tang San saw the book for the first time, he really felt like the locks of reincarnation were beginning to connect, and then when the book was finished, everything seemed to have become a Möbius strip, constantly jumping out and looping back again. After I read "Conquering Yang Wudi", I stopped reading it (and I didn't have to). I thought the author had stopped reading. I suddenly got bored recently, so I went to look through my browsing history, and found the only book owned by my annual VIP VIP from a pile of books. I found that it was already finished. I opened it with excitement, but found that I had forgotten all the previous plots, so I had to start from the beginning. Seriously, no one has ever told me that it is so refreshing to read the ending directly, and my thinking is coherent. The emotional line is also clean and tidy, there is no weird emotional line of being together for others. I can't describe what I read. This is the Shrek Seven Monsters I want to read. After reading the serialization of this book, I went to find a Douluo fan. I didn't say anything when I read it. I picked out a few female videos from the cracks little by little. I was scorched on the outside and tender on the inside because of the love of the little wife. After reading this book, I felt a sad feeling that a confidant is hard to find
CP about the protagonist
I really want to know if Lulu has CP? [Emot=default,55/]Now based on the story of Lu Lu and Shen Yue, as well as the two-way running in the introduction (I don't know if this two-way running refers to Lulu and Shen Yue or the various CPs in the original work ), I personally think it may be Lu Lu and Shen Yue, even though Shen Yue has only appeared in the illusion so far. So Lu Lu has no CP, and Shen Yue just has good memories and regrets? Or are Shen Yue and Lu Lu a couple?
I'd say it looks good, it's pretty good, but I just want to ask, the author's protagonist has traveled through several worlds and all of them have traveled to a peaceful world. Does the soul power point to the 30th level of Gaotang and still make a trace of blood? The soul skills were all familiar to him in the world before, and he could still produce a trace of blood. This was too much to give up, and it didn't mean that Tang San was too cheating.
Haha, I love it so much. I have been reading it recently. The story is very interesting
Lu Lu and Shen Yue are really at odds with each other
The author writes very well and the characters are very fleshed out
I am a fan of comics (I don't protect the Third Young Master). The original Tang San was okay in the early stage, but collapsed very badly in the later stage. I can see that many people are hating Tang San. The author wrote it very well, that is, Tang San in the early stage of the original work is sober and resourceful. The awakening of the female character is also very well written. Although it is very touching to sacrifice oneself for the other party, I still hope that Xiao Wu has a calm, elegant and strategizing side. The author is amazing, and he is following the updates every day. I hope you continue to work hard qaq
Baby, you write well I went to Myanmar in my last life, and they sent me back overnight because I only cared about my sister.
