Passion Fruit Love
About This Novel
That day, the sky was very blue. That day, the clouds were very light. That day, she walked up to him in a white dress. The familiar face made him stunned, and he pursued her fiercely, using all his strength. People said that the young master who used to be ruthless, unjust and repulsive suddenly turned into a disgusting young boy after meeting her. But one day, his old friend who had been away for many years came back with his most unbearable memories...
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Official(2)Scraped 4d ago
A little opinion
I rarely read this type of article, so I will just comment casually. Judging from the first three chapters alone, the reading fluency is not bad, but the name appears too frequently at the beginning of the paragraph, so it is reasonable to change it to he or she. I think the writing is pretty good. If you haven't signed the contract, the most important thing is that there are no conflicts, twists, or contradictions in the first three chapters. If you want to sign the contract quickly, you must show the selling points. A dull beginning will lose points. However, I don't know how long the author wants to write. If it doesn't work, just apply for 50,000 words. I don't know if this is the first time for the author to write a book, but I just want to say, don't stop updating, and stick to finishing the book. Come on＾0＾~
Great author, your writing is getting better and better later on, come on, for some reason I feel that as sweet as it is in the front, it will be so cruel in the back, don't
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Official(2)Scraped 4d ago
A little opinion
I rarely read this type of article, so I will just comment casually. Judging from the first three chapters alone, the reading fluency is not bad, but the name appears too frequently at the beginning of the paragraph, so it is reasonable to change it to he or she. I think the writing is pretty good. If you haven't signed the contract, the most important thing is that there are no conflicts, twists, or contradictions in the first three chapters. If you want to sign the contract quickly, you must show the selling points. A dull beginning will lose points. However, I don't know how long the author wants to write. If it doesn't work, just apply for 50,000 words. I don't know if this is the first time for the author to write a book, but I just want to say, don't stop updating, and stick to finishing the book. Come on＾0＾~
Great author, your writing is getting better and better later on, come on, for some reason I feel that as sweet as it is in the front, it will be so cruel in the back, don't
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