Douluo: Take Huo Yuhao as Your Disciple at the Beginning

Super bad, Huo Yuhao would like to ask the male protagonist to pretend that he doesn't understand anything. Are you so embarrassed to be someone's teacher? Are you still trying to get Huo Yuhao's first soul ring, white? It's the first time I've seen a disciple be so tricked. Also, how is it possible that Tianmeng Ice Silkworm would be exposed to the male protagonist so easily? With Tianmeng Ice Silkworm's terrifying mental power, it was easy to knock out the novice male protagonist at the beginning. After successfully recruiting a disciple, the male protagonist awakens to be a more powerful spiritual martial spirit than Huo Yuhao. Aren't you curious about Tianmeng Bingsi? It's just in the first few chapters that there are so many stupid points. You don't need to read the rest to know that there are many poisonous points.

What happened if the author changed people? The writing gets worse and worse.

Why do I feel that it is so different from the previous books? I have read the author's previous books and followed it, but after reading 20 chapters of this one, I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has no soul power at the beginning and has to rely on tricking Yu Hao to become his apprentice. It's okay, but what does it mean to let him absorb the soul ring for ten years? Even if he knew that Tianmeng would appear, he couldn't fool Yuhao with a ten-year soul ring. How could he say that the persona he created was a young master of a top force? The young master of a top force asked his apprentice to absorb a ten-year soul ring? It's even more outrageous to fool Di Tian later. Regardless of whether he can beat him or not, he is backed by an 800,000-year-old ferocious beast. As long as he doesn't fight to death and wants to run away, there will be no problem. But it's outrageous for the protagonist to give up. He also said that he can let the spirit beast break through from 90,000 years to 800,000 years. At this time, can he let you go? Di Tian is outrageous and still wants to cooperate? What benefits does the Star Dou Forest have in exchange for the secret method that can allow a soul beast to break through from 90,000 years to 800,000 years? To put it bluntly, what qualifications does Di Tian have to cooperate? Although the secret method and power are all fake, will Ditian not be afraid? If you can raise one 800,000-year-old, you can raise several. How many of the trash from Xingdou can stop it? The protagonist has this (fake) background and still puts himself on the weak side when negotiating? The logic really doesn't make sense and it makes me feel uncomfortable.

Unreasonable settings and illogical logic

The more I read this book, the more disgusting and poisonous it becomes.

Just cheating on the exam, just like Shrek

In my opinion it's pretty good, but the pace gets faster later

I haven't read this book yet, but I have read the previous Dragon and Phoenix Legend, and I thought it was very good. However, when I read the book review section, I felt that it was not as good as before, and I also started writing systematic articles. I personally prefer settings where a strong person has a hint of power, and I should choose settings or powers that are not particularly well-known in the world where the protagonist lives. This can be regarded as injecting some freshness into such a cold meal. Some of the writing methods in the middle can be integrated into the writing methods of previous works, which can be regarded as an attempt or breakthrough. If you want a systematic text, I recommend summoning the strong at the beginning. The secret setting in "The Top Abandoned Young Man", another novel I like, can be turned into the ultimate martial spirit in the world of Douluo. After all, it is just a trace of power. The writing in the middle can refer to the author's previous writing. In the later or final moments Immediately arrange some accidents or situations, let those people fuse and summon the power of the strong man to resolve the crisis, and then feel that it is fate, leave some of the skills they have used and use their own mystical power to build a secret realm of the same attribute and leave. As for what happens next, it depends on the author.

The author wants to recruit disciples, let's take him Ye Guyi and Ji Juechen.

The introduction is still incredible, and after reading it, I have no desire to continue reading.