
My Black Technology Glasses
by He Yike
About This Novel
Li Mowen burned three sticks of incense in front of the Patriarch in despair. He got black tech glasses. Through the glasses, he can actually see everyone's talents, specialties, bad luck, health, and life direction... "Master, I've been having a hard time lately, can you give me some advice?" An emotional variety show host rushed to the store late at night just to get a clue. Li Mowen glanced at the green characters on the other person's head [Emotional Expert: 69] [Dancer: 89] He smiled slightly and said four words: "Dancing is not as good as falling in love!" From then on, he knew all the secrets with his fingers and embarked on the road to counterattack to the top of life. Group number: 702-438-148
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Official(88)Scraped 21d ago
There are problems with the characters and routines
Generally speaking, fortune tellers basically only tell fortune, luck, wealth, etc. Even if they are great, they can only tell a person's fortune. Fortune tellers are not doctors. At most, they will only remind others to go to the hospital for a checkup in the near future. They will not directly remind others that you have any illness. This is the first one. The second is the problem of personality. If the protagonist just wants to carry forward the ancestral shop, there is no need to look for it one by one on the street. The protagonist also writes on the door of the shop that he will only be counted as a destined person. There are many destined people in the world, and it does not necessarily have to be found on the street. In the Internet age, it is good or bad, because no matter how many street customers you have, people will lick you once you count them. But people's hearts will change, just like the protagonist told the investment person that there are recent investments. Be cautious about risks, but people don't take it to heart at all, and then the problem comes. The first few times I didn't buy the stock, I felt uncomfortable and started to make trouble. People on the street also said the same thing. You said that you will develop followers later and explain to others that it doesn't make sense at all. Just like you had the first time, people will continue to lick you after the truth comes out. Will it still be as meaningful as a wallflower next time whether it is real or fake? So if you are writing about the fortune telling industry, you only need to know one thing. Fortune telling is not a fast-moving consumer goods. No matter how many people you develop, it will be useless. To be considered a destined person, you must have the appearance of a destined person. There is also a fortune teller who can also calculate the symptoms of others, and a person's accurate talent. This is not called fortune telling, this is called the future. No one is a fool. It is impossible that no one can think of whether you will have problems. If you meet someone who is jealous, they will not care how good you are at fortune telling. If writing this kind of article is based on fortune telling, you can write about Feng Shui, magic weapons, etc. Don't write about things that are not relevant at all. It looks boring.
to author
How should I put it, if the full score is 100, then the author's writing style must be at least 90 points or above. At least a picky person like me did not find any flaws in the writing style. But, it's too samey-yet, and before a hundred chapters, it will make people want to read more and more. After a hundred chapters, it starts to get boring. It is recommended that if you can't innovate, then finish the book around 200 chapters. At least at this point, there is a 70% chance that it will be a masterpiece. But one thing is very important. When you finish it, you must leave readers with a lingering feeling. Then they will continue to read your new book, and they will continue to read your new book without finishing it, and then they will read your next book. Repeat the cycle, improve, and innovate. Even if you make a little progress, it will add up to a big progress. It is not impossible to become a god in the future.
I leave an ancient prophecy here. Within one hundred to two hundred years, girls will be exchanged with boys. The boys will be responsible for being beautiful and beautiful, while the girls will be responsible for seduce men and start a family. In the future, what parents should worry about is not that the boys will not be able to marry, but that the cute boys in their own family will be seduced by the girls from that family without knowing it... Bs
It should be innovative!
I have read the protagonist and plug-in settings in this article a few years ago. It's basically the same, and the scene in the protagonist's shop is also exactly the same. But it just changed the appearance of the plug-in, one uses a mobile phone to read photos, and the other uses glasses to read photos. I don't know which book was written by the author. Maybe the author re-wrote it, so just pretend I didn't say it. If not, you're borrowing too much from it. After reading a hundred chapters, the plot has barely changed. Is the similarity too high?
The beginning is okay, but the style is gone at the end. Note the style. If the style of writing is gone, then what else should I read?
I feel like the protagonist is quite useless and doesn't know how to use black technology.
Why doesn't the author act like a fortune teller in real life, but tell the whole story? Do you think the country won't pay attention to the protagonist? When the time comes, the glasses will be taken away by the state.
If a person replies to you instantly, it can only mean that the person is playing with his mobile phone.
It's very interesting and not childish. Kudos to the author!
choice
I have been hesitating whether to vote for Yihu or this book...
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Official(88)Scraped 21d ago
There are problems with the characters and routines
Generally speaking, fortune tellers basically only tell fortune, luck, wealth, etc. Even if they are great, they can only tell a person's fortune. Fortune tellers are not doctors. At most, they will only remind others to go to the hospital for a checkup in the near future. They will not directly remind others that you have any illness. This is the first one. The second is the problem of personality. If the protagonist just wants to carry forward the ancestral shop, there is no need to look for it one by one on the street. The protagonist also writes on the door of the shop that he will only be counted as a destined person. There are many destined people in the world, and it does not necessarily have to be found on the street. In the Internet age, it is good or bad, because no matter how many street customers you have, people will lick you once you count them. But people's hearts will change, just like the protagonist told the investment person that there are recent investments. Be cautious about risks, but people don't take it to heart at all, and then the problem comes. The first few times I didn't buy the stock, I felt uncomfortable and started to make trouble. People on the street also said the same thing. You said that you will develop followers later and explain to others that it doesn't make sense at all. Just like you had the first time, people will continue to lick you after the truth comes out. Will it still be as meaningful as a wallflower next time whether it is real or fake? So if you are writing about the fortune telling industry, you only need to know one thing. Fortune telling is not a fast-moving consumer goods. No matter how many people you develop, it will be useless. To be considered a destined person, you must have the appearance of a destined person. There is also a fortune teller who can also calculate the symptoms of others, and a person's accurate talent. This is not called fortune telling, this is called the future. No one is a fool. It is impossible that no one can think of whether you will have problems. If you meet someone who is jealous, they will not care how good you are at fortune telling. If writing this kind of article is based on fortune telling, you can write about Feng Shui, magic weapons, etc. Don't write about things that are not relevant at all. It looks boring.
to author
How should I put it, if the full score is 100, then the author's writing style must be at least 90 points or above. At least a picky person like me did not find any flaws in the writing style. But, it's too samey-yet, and before a hundred chapters, it will make people want to read more and more. After a hundred chapters, it starts to get boring. It is recommended that if you can't innovate, then finish the book around 200 chapters. At least at this point, there is a 70% chance that it will be a masterpiece. But one thing is very important. When you finish it, you must leave readers with a lingering feeling. Then they will continue to read your new book, and they will continue to read your new book without finishing it, and then they will read your next book. Repeat the cycle, improve, and innovate. Even if you make a little progress, it will add up to a big progress. It is not impossible to become a god in the future.
I leave an ancient prophecy here. Within one hundred to two hundred years, girls will be exchanged with boys. The boys will be responsible for being beautiful and beautiful, while the girls will be responsible for seduce men and start a family. In the future, what parents should worry about is not that the boys will not be able to marry, but that the cute boys in their own family will be seduced by the girls from that family without knowing it... Bs
It should be innovative!
I have read the protagonist and plug-in settings in this article a few years ago. It's basically the same, and the scene in the protagonist's shop is also exactly the same. But it just changed the appearance of the plug-in, one uses a mobile phone to read photos, and the other uses glasses to read photos. I don't know which book was written by the author. Maybe the author re-wrote it, so just pretend I didn't say it. If not, you're borrowing too much from it. After reading a hundred chapters, the plot has barely changed. Is the similarity too high?
The beginning is okay, but the style is gone at the end. Note the style. If the style of writing is gone, then what else should I read?
I feel like the protagonist is quite useless and doesn't know how to use black technology.
Why doesn't the author act like a fortune teller in real life, but tell the whole story? Do you think the country won't pay attention to the protagonist? When the time comes, the glasses will be taken away by the state.
If a person replies to you instantly, it can only mean that the person is playing with his mobile phone.
It's very interesting and not childish. Kudos to the author!
choice
I have been hesitating whether to vote for Yihu or this book...
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🎮<Urban Fortune Telling↗9⃣↖2019-07-25> Reasons for recommendation: This book talks about fortune-telling, but in fact it is just selling dog meat over sheep's heads, and there is not much work like a fortune teller at all. In fact, it would be more appropriate to say "prophecy" or "superpower". Pig's trotters get a pair of eyes that can predict the future events of others, and then use predictions to change them, or pretend to be cool, and then connect them through small stories that are not pig trotters. This is the whole story of this book. At present, the second function of the eyes is to detect human diseases. The third function is to discover people's potential. Therefore, this book is really not a book about feudal superstition. On the contrary, the short stories about non-pig's feet are well written, and some of them are quite touching. Very good.




It's not that kind of nonsense. Still relatively reliable. I feel like I can keep watching.




Fortune telling? The kind that changes your destiny!




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