Journey Through Ancient Times to Present Stars

It feels a bit baffling. It's long-winded where it should be brief, and vague where it should be detailed. As for the writing style, I don't want to comment on it at all.

The content is very bland. I wrote some things before the time travel that I feel are not very good and should be passed over in one stroke. Some things are dull, so I shouldn't focus on the writing and ink. I should just go over them in a glance.

The article is too protracted, has no starting point, and no main line. The author is probably a novice.

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Not bad, come on

The author has made the framework too big, which makes the content not so full. Secondly, it is a bit indifferent. Most of them describe the little things between the heroine and the little sisters, but these little things are written in extremely detail. The road to stardom is basically blurred. It is not about the friendship between sisters, and it is not necessarily about the road to fame. It may be that the author's writing style is still very immature in his first novel.

The author can't distinguish priorities and makes it look like there are multiple female protagonists. Very bad

To be honest, this novel is indeed the worst novel between ancient times and modern times that I have read in the past ten years. I endured reading more than 100 chapters and the heroine has not yet made her debut. The male protagonist also feels weak. He always emphasizes how beautiful the heroine and the female supporting characters are over and over again. The heroine's IQ does not look like she has been an imperial concubine.

Keep up the good work

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