
Evolution of the Bloodline of the Heavens
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Zheng Xuan gets the bloodline evolution system of the heavens and travels through the adventures of the little carp, transforming into a scoundrel and traveling through the heavens to evolve his own bloodline. PS: Traveling through the world is mostly animation and novels. The Adventures of Little Carp, Chinese Boy, and Jackie Chan Adventures have been confirmed, but there is no female protagonist.
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Official(274)Scraped 21d ago
In my childhood memories, Taoism and Buddha are great and good people.
The eating machine in The Adventures of Lolo, Eat fruits in Fruit Treasure Special Attack, In the first part of Pig Man, I learned the lesson of subduing the dragon with eighteen palms. In Ultraman Tiga, eat monsters.
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1: The protagonist is a foodie, and he is a foodie who is not particular about it. I can't explain why he is not particular about it. Don't ask, you will understand after reading it carefully. I just finished reading the first three chapters now Suggestion: Give the protagonist more emotion in the following text, don't let the protagonist only know "eat" 2: The protagonist does not understand what sustainable development is. In the middle section of Chapter 8, it is understandable that the enemy was accidentally wiped out and then the waste was reused and eaten. However, in Chapter 11, a small sea monster only has 10 evolution points and an adult sea monster has 300 evolution points. Even if the small sea monster is disabled. There are also 100 evolution points, and you can basically get 10 to 30 times the benefits of a young sea monster. Then if the plot requires it later, if God helps the young sea monster, the benefits will be doubled... Although the risk is a bit high, but the protagonist is not always in this world, so what are you afraid of? Now see Chapter 11 Suggestion: Write more "unexpected factors" in the following article so that the protagonist does not seem too boring on the way to becoming stronger. For example, if the opponent becomes stronger inexplicably, the protagonist can make some "windfall" Three: Personally speaking, between the protagonists who keep their word and the protagonists who do not keep their word, I prefer the protagonist who keeps his word. Even if the protagonist needs to devour the three-headed phoenix, there is no need to write it out. Instead, writing it out will show that the protagonist has no wisdom, only kills in his heart, and has completely become a "killing tool" for the system to clean up carbon-based creatures. For example, this paragraph "The three-headed phoenix is the most powerful, and it is placed last at the volcanic Tianchi where the real dragon sacrificed itself to seal it." After it was written, the protagonist was shown to be just a tool that only knows how to devour and has no ability to think independently. Also, the protagonist is destined to eat the three-headed phoenix, and the three-headed phoenix is also destined to prevent the protagonist from eating. There is no other way, but "different ways do not work together." The three-headed phoenix is destined to save those weak creatures. Do you remember how the three-headed phoenix got injured? Those who were injured while saving those weak creatures can be seen from this point, even if the protagonist said it before "Haha, believe it or not, go back and tell the three-headed phoenix that I just want the dragon scales. Don't mess with the river. As long as the little carps don't bother me anymore, I won't care about them either." In this sentence, the three-headed phoenix will still intervene, so the three-headed phoenix is destined to be eaten. Now see Chapter 13 Suggestion: There are some things that the protagonist does not need to "do and think about personally". Things will develop to that point automatically. Because the concepts are different and the paths are different, the protagonist is destined to become the hostile target of the "world". Four: Chapter 15, this is probably the last chapter of this volume, and also the most out-of-the-box chapter. First of all, I had so much fun eating that I finished it all at once. In fact, the plot could break down here. First of all, eating the leader of the entire world would take a long time, right? After all! The protagonist will not move forward Then, a long time has passed since the plot just happened to pass. Isn't that too much? In this case, it's not too much to just say that a volcano erupted, right? , When the three-headed phoenix was rescuing the fish, he happened to see the protagonist eating "a lot" of fish. The three-headed phoenix comes to stop it, so that it can "justifiably" eat the three-headed phoenix, and then use four paragraphs to go to the volcano Tianchi and cross it, or cross it directly. Are you, like me, confused after reading Chapter 15? For example, the protagonist of that world and the dragon gate haven't crossed it, etc. I think the protagonist is on the path of the Sky-Swallowing Python and will never return.
What world will you go to next?
The Origin of the White Snake, Corpse Brother, Age of the Gun God, Super Seminary, Godzilla, Pacific Rim, Swallowing the Stars?
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Official(274)Scraped 21d ago
In my childhood memories, Taoism and Buddha are great and good people.
The eating machine in The Adventures of Lolo, Eat fruits in Fruit Treasure Special Attack, In the first part of Pig Man, I learned the lesson of subduing the dragon with eighteen palms. In Ultraman Tiga, eat monsters.
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nice
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
personal thoughts
1: The protagonist is a foodie, and he is a foodie who is not particular about it. I can't explain why he is not particular about it. Don't ask, you will understand after reading it carefully. I just finished reading the first three chapters now Suggestion: Give the protagonist more emotion in the following text, don't let the protagonist only know "eat" 2: The protagonist does not understand what sustainable development is. In the middle section of Chapter 8, it is understandable that the enemy was accidentally wiped out and then the waste was reused and eaten. However, in Chapter 11, a small sea monster only has 10 evolution points and an adult sea monster has 300 evolution points. Even if the small sea monster is disabled. There are also 100 evolution points, and you can basically get 10 to 30 times the benefits of a young sea monster. Then if the plot requires it later, if God helps the young sea monster, the benefits will be doubled... Although the risk is a bit high, but the protagonist is not always in this world, so what are you afraid of? Now see Chapter 11 Suggestion: Write more "unexpected factors" in the following article so that the protagonist does not seem too boring on the way to becoming stronger. For example, if the opponent becomes stronger inexplicably, the protagonist can make some "windfall" Three: Personally speaking, between the protagonists who keep their word and the protagonists who do not keep their word, I prefer the protagonist who keeps his word. Even if the protagonist needs to devour the three-headed phoenix, there is no need to write it out. Instead, writing it out will show that the protagonist has no wisdom, only kills in his heart, and has completely become a "killing tool" for the system to clean up carbon-based creatures. For example, this paragraph "The three-headed phoenix is the most powerful, and it is placed last at the volcanic Tianchi where the real dragon sacrificed itself to seal it." After it was written, the protagonist was shown to be just a tool that only knows how to devour and has no ability to think independently. Also, the protagonist is destined to eat the three-headed phoenix, and the three-headed phoenix is also destined to prevent the protagonist from eating. There is no other way, but "different ways do not work together." The three-headed phoenix is destined to save those weak creatures. Do you remember how the three-headed phoenix got injured? Those who were injured while saving those weak creatures can be seen from this point, even if the protagonist said it before "Haha, believe it or not, go back and tell the three-headed phoenix that I just want the dragon scales. Don't mess with the river. As long as the little carps don't bother me anymore, I won't care about them either." In this sentence, the three-headed phoenix will still intervene, so the three-headed phoenix is destined to be eaten. Now see Chapter 13 Suggestion: There are some things that the protagonist does not need to "do and think about personally". Things will develop to that point automatically. Because the concepts are different and the paths are different, the protagonist is destined to become the hostile target of the "world". Four: Chapter 15, this is probably the last chapter of this volume, and also the most out-of-the-box chapter. First of all, I had so much fun eating that I finished it all at once. In fact, the plot could break down here. First of all, eating the leader of the entire world would take a long time, right? After all! The protagonist will not move forward Then, a long time has passed since the plot just happened to pass. Isn't that too much? In this case, it's not too much to just say that a volcano erupted, right? , When the three-headed phoenix was rescuing the fish, he happened to see the protagonist eating "a lot" of fish. The three-headed phoenix comes to stop it, so that it can "justifiably" eat the three-headed phoenix, and then use four paragraphs to go to the volcano Tianchi and cross it, or cross it directly. Are you, like me, confused after reading Chapter 15? For example, the protagonist of that world and the dragon gate haven't crossed it, etc. I think the protagonist is on the path of the Sky-Swallowing Python and will never return.
What world will you go to next?
The Origin of the White Snake, Corpse Brother, Age of the Gun God, Super Seminary, Godzilla, Pacific Rim, Swallowing the Stars?
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