
Simultaneous Travel: Sharing the Chaotic Body at the Beginning
by Cursed Dreams And Passing River
About This Novel
Traveling through all the worlds at the same time, sharing physiques, talents, memories... In the world that covers the sky, Xia Yi is an innate and flawless body of chaos. He ascends the Nine Dragons to pull the coffin, and approaches the Beidou Star Territory. He suppresses the strong men of all races, defeats all the geniuses of his generation, and sweeps across the forbidden area of life. Swallowing the world, winning the first place in the universe genius battle, the world master reversed and beheaded the venerable, and became invincible in the starry sky. In the world of eternal life, resurrect the tree of the world, practice the three thousand avenues, become a heavenly king and an immortal king, and step into the realm of eternal life. The Immortal Realm, the Yang God, the Perfect World, the Holy Ruins, the Supreme Being... Looking back at dusk, Xia Yi in every world has stood at the top of his own world...
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Official(111)Scraped 3d ago
It's too messy. Several worlds keep jumping around. One world should be written in the main, and the other worlds should be summarized in two or three chapters. This way it won't be messy. The author writes a dozen chapters in one world and then jumps to another world and writes a dozen chapters. It's equivalent to writing several worlds at the same time. It's too messy.
I kept jumping back and forth between several worlds. This world was just interesting, so I immediately started writing about other worlds, without any desire to continue reading.
Author, you have stopped updating again. Last time, you stopped updating for almost three months. Now you want to stop updating for a longer period of time? Send me your home address and I'll send you the blade. Resume updates quickly.
The writing is okay, but the conversion of combat power is very wrong. The other two worlds are too strengthened, and the immortality is cut too hard.
Jiang Taixu is the author Bai Yueguang? ? ? All kinds of mindless gifts, half of your body was beaten to pieces, and then they gave you Douzi Mi, saved people, sent holy fruits, divine springs, pills, saved others, Taoist companions, helped beat people, helped fight against the Ji Dao Emperor's soldiers, and then gave you the Dou Zi Mi, wow, the male protagonist is really It's so profitable. Is the author a descendant of Jiang Taixu? The original Jiang Taixu is not so disgusting, right? The Jiang family is basically rotten to the end, and the combat power conversion is outrageous. The Great Sage compares to the peak of the title of king. So, how about the Great Emperor vs. The Lord of the Universe? Quasi-Emperor vs. Master of the Universe? ? Why don't you compare yourself with the True Immortal Lord Hunyuan? ?
My brother strongly recommends Star Transformation, Immortal Rebellion, and Holy King. I feel like it could be a bit about cultivating immortals.
Cover the sky. At first I thought the main character was a pure virgin. But later on I started not eating beef again. It's uncomfortable to look at like this. You are either a holy mother or you don't eat beef in the first place. It looks awkward when you do both.
It feels like there is no priority and it looks very confusing. It is recommended to write mainly about Zhetian and less about other things.
The third level of immortality is compared with Zhetian Zhandao. . Are you kidding me? This is too much. I feel like this book won't be long.
The writing of the world line is too confusing. It is enough to write only one world. If you have to write it mixedly, it will be uncomfortable to watch.
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Official(111)Scraped 3d ago
It's too messy. Several worlds keep jumping around. One world should be written in the main, and the other worlds should be summarized in two or three chapters. This way it won't be messy. The author writes a dozen chapters in one world and then jumps to another world and writes a dozen chapters. It's equivalent to writing several worlds at the same time. It's too messy.
I kept jumping back and forth between several worlds. This world was just interesting, so I immediately started writing about other worlds, without any desire to continue reading.
Author, you have stopped updating again. Last time, you stopped updating for almost three months. Now you want to stop updating for a longer period of time? Send me your home address and I'll send you the blade. Resume updates quickly.
The writing is okay, but the conversion of combat power is very wrong. The other two worlds are too strengthened, and the immortality is cut too hard.
Jiang Taixu is the author Bai Yueguang? ? ? All kinds of mindless gifts, half of your body was beaten to pieces, and then they gave you Douzi Mi, saved people, sent holy fruits, divine springs, pills, saved others, Taoist companions, helped beat people, helped fight against the Ji Dao Emperor's soldiers, and then gave you the Dou Zi Mi, wow, the male protagonist is really It's so profitable. Is the author a descendant of Jiang Taixu? The original Jiang Taixu is not so disgusting, right? The Jiang family is basically rotten to the end, and the combat power conversion is outrageous. The Great Sage compares to the peak of the title of king. So, how about the Great Emperor vs. The Lord of the Universe? Quasi-Emperor vs. Master of the Universe? ? Why don't you compare yourself with the True Immortal Lord Hunyuan? ?
My brother strongly recommends Star Transformation, Immortal Rebellion, and Holy King. I feel like it could be a bit about cultivating immortals.
Cover the sky. At first I thought the main character was a pure virgin. But later on I started not eating beef again. It's uncomfortable to look at like this. You are either a holy mother or you don't eat beef in the first place. It looks awkward when you do both.
It feels like there is no priority and it looks very confusing. It is recommended to write mainly about Zhetian and less about other things.
The third level of immortality is compared with Zhetian Zhandao. . Are you kidding me? This is too much. I feel like this book won't be long.
The writing of the world line is too confusing. It is enough to write only one world. If you have to write it mixedly, it will be uncomfortable to watch.









