Become a Detective in the Film and Television World

I hope Luke and Selena can get together (+daily check-in)

The author's writing skills are okay, and the plot development is relatively coherent. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist Goldfinger is not very powerful, with too many restrictions, and the protagonist's strength improves too slowly. After more than a thousand chapters, the strength is slightly stronger than Captain America, and it is easy to deal with ordinary people. However, for Thor, the green and fat level is not enough, and there is no ability to deal with magic. It is easy to kneel when encountering a mage who is proficient in magic at this level. For example, there is no way to deal with abilities such as infinite loop teleportation in the mirror space. The protagonist upgrades by relying on the system to add points of experience in punishing crimes, but the further you go, the more experience time is needed. At this rate, it will take several years to increase the protagonist's strength to death. If you beat him to death with the hammer Thor in the early stage, it will not even be as good as switching to the ax Thor in the later stage. This level of support is completely unable to fight against powerful figures like Thanos who will appear later. How can you protect the people you care about if you don't have the ability to control the battlefield? If the protagonist's strength suddenly breaks down in a triple jump, it feels too fake without any foreshadowing. Overall, it's worth watching.

I haven't read too much yet, but overall the writing is good, the ideas are clear, and the ideas are interesting. However, releasing the robbers in New York is definitely a failure. Many people have this idea. It's not that it can't be released, but that the author didn't handle it well. Many people in the message had the same idea. Everyone was unhappy not because they let the criminals go, but because of the reasons shown by the author. They were just that these criminals were beauties, so they were let go. The rest were like forced explanations. It gave people the impression that if it was a few big men who would not chase after them like the author said, they would definitely catch them if they could. This is differential treatment, and the author made it particularly obvious. If they had any reason to do bad things, or had a relationship with the protagonist before, no one would be angry in this case. After all, there are still favors outside the law, but these people go to robberies just to make money. How is this different from those who are sneaky people? Not killing people is not a reason not to accept legal sanctions, and the author clearly gave a reason for not killing people. And the author's writing skills are not clever enough. If it were written that they ran away based on their ability, or that they gave up because they were too troublesome to catch, or even make their characters better, such as robbing the rich to help the poor, or write some interesting characters, which would be more acceptable to the readers, such as the frankness of admitting that the robbing of the rich was to help the poor? And the author only describes the appearance of these four villains... How does it make people feel that they are worthy of letting go? Besides, this is a long novel and it's pretty and we can't read it. Generally speaking, the villain and the protagonist feel sympathy for each other during the fight. This is a more reasonable routine design. The author has too much foreshadowing, but it does not reflect any advantages of these women except their appearance. To describe the feeling, it's like you don't like carrots, but your mother has to add carrots to the dish, and the cooking method is not very good, so that you can tell at a glance that it is a carrot and taste the carrot in one bite, and she stands next to you with a shovel and tells you that you must eat these carrots. Readers who don't like radishes are forced to leave a batch and stop eating. Those who can stay and eat this plate of carrots are either tolerant due to trust in the author's article, or out of anticipation for the next dish. However, once there are carrots on the next dish, they are likely to flip the table. (ﾉꐦ ๑´Д`๑)ﾉ彡┻━┻Your carrots taste terrible!

Nowadays, there are many people who can write novels that are novel and interesting. But in the current situation where fast food articles are everywhere, I can find a good book that is worth collecting and calling.

What I wrote is now very successful. It's just that Iron Man only appeared in more than a thousand chapters, so you are so good at writing. I think your stage is not here. You should write comics and TV series and be a screenwriter. Only such a stage is worthy of you. You've successfully created a supporting Marvel character. Extras → Follow-up actors (special actors) → Character actors → ?

The protagonist has a detective system (which mainly strengthens the protagonist's learning ability, physical fitness, mental strength, neural reflexes and five senses, and learns friendly skills. The later system provides red names to mark enemies, clones, storage, prisons and other unnatural auxiliary abilities). Currently, the protagonist's strongest state is that he is slightly stronger than Captain America. Super soldier (cannot use magic skills), so many people will say that after more than 1,000 chapters, why can't the protagonist still be in the air every second (after Thor 1, the protagonist still has many American dramas to go), the author has set a bottleneck in the physical growth of the protagonist in order to grasp the balance and prevent the collapse of the plot in the later period, but he can use technology Slowly strengthening the combat power, this book has two free chapters of 10,000 words. The author deleted tens of thousands of words in order to bring the protagonist back into the story, without making Luke a prophetic and prophetic God who loves beeps that readers dislike. , And even deleted the well-known plot in Iron Man to avoid the suspicion of too many words). Of course, the protagonist also has the advantage of traveling through time (secretly buying Stark's shares, just to gain the aura of a big capitalist and protect himself from being oppressed by the government. At the same time, superheroes also need krypton gold ), but the protagonist doesn't talk too much and just knows what he knows. The alien attack is also set to be triggered by his girlfriend's ability to predict the future, making the protagonist remember a small amount of Avengers 1 plot. The background of this book includes American TV series, film and television, Marvel (mutant passerby girls are the donors of the protagonist's superpowers, and those in X-Men) Powerful mutant), DC (Chapter 219 of the mysterious flat-chested long-legged woman suspected of being Wonder Woman, the protagonist's vest Batman, gay friend the Joker, etc... For details of the work, please see the single chapter opened by the author on the Qidian Chinese website, as well as the explanation about the clone not having a green body), so everyone will see that the protagonist is a walking killer. (Kill wherever he goes, just like Conan ), while fighting criminals, he learns various superpowers (the good guy protagonist will give financial compensation, not the Virgin as everyone said, it is just a transaction) The protagonist has three women (underground lovers) and does not forcibly add scenes to them , the protagonist is restricted by the system and can only do good deeds. At the same time, he can do food research and battle armor to suppress evil thoughts in his heart. The protagonist acts decisively, cautiously, and believes in obscene development. It is the last word to not lie down until the end. I have not found anything seriously objectionable in this book. I highly recommend it

There are a lot of supporting roles and vests, but what's the use of having so many teammates? The avatar has full firepower, rests for two hours a day, and has unlimited monster spawning for 22 hours. Is the amount of points gained comparable? If Luke admires them and wants to help them, he can write like this, but now a group of soulless characters, NPCs? Disappointed, thoroughly. If you still have a conscience, gather the story line together and cut it when necessary. There is nothing wrong with using clones to earn points around the world, and it is a perpetual motion machine, but is it necessary to write endlessly? The avatar is just an accessory, a small program. Use the avatar to contact various people and cultivate teammates? What do you think of your teammates? Data? Background board? Cheat! Play! Luke is useless and a scumbag! Points brushing machine! Emotionless upgrade monster!

Still looking forward to it. The author should work hard to code

The protagonist can obviously turn into a vigilante at night to act, but he is always investigating cases, always tied up, and feels like he is always being bossed around, like a dog. Obviously many things do not need to be too complicated, but many things feel redundant. Overall, the author's writing is still very good, and it is worth reading

I don't want to give you a cent. . . . . .