
Practice the Burning Jue at the Beginning of Dou Po
by Long Dream Seven Orifices Heart
About This Novel
An ordinary soul from the earth traveled to Doupo's world. He discovered that there was another soul who was taking the body with him. And that soul also killed the soul of the original owner. He saw such a powerful opponent. He could only take the risk. ...
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Official(27)Scraped 29d ago
The author, the eighth wife, was reincarnated and was verbose to death.
The word count is serious, and she keeps talking to herself. Xiao Xun'er's image is too inconsistent with the original work. The scene where she enters the academy and meets the teacher is a bit outrageous. You can see it after reading the original work. With the protagonist's current talent and strength, even if he wants to enter the academy, he will not be like the protagonist...
There's too much nonsense, I have to write a little bit about everything, it's too bastard
Okay, okay, you are really below the lower limit of my understanding.
Soul Seizing is so poisonous at the beginning, brother, you can do it too. The two people in front are fighting for life and death, while you, the protagonist, are in a daze, still standing there. I'm sick of stupidity, sorry! ! !
Come, the author reads with me, and I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding, day by day and night by day.
I feel that Teacher Yuetong is a bit self-righteous.
Too watery
The number of words is really too low, wouldn't it be enough to just call it Saint? The old man kept adding parentheses, and I got tired of looking at them, so I said goodbye.
No, what's going on with you, Lu Yunxiao?
There are no major drawbacks except that it is very watery.
Come on, author, don't give up
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Official(27)Scraped 29d ago
The author, the eighth wife, was reincarnated and was verbose to death.
The word count is serious, and she keeps talking to herself. Xiao Xun'er's image is too inconsistent with the original work. The scene where she enters the academy and meets the teacher is a bit outrageous. You can see it after reading the original work. With the protagonist's current talent and strength, even if he wants to enter the academy, he will not be like the protagonist...
There's too much nonsense, I have to write a little bit about everything, it's too bastard
Okay, okay, you are really below the lower limit of my understanding.
Soul Seizing is so poisonous at the beginning, brother, you can do it too. The two people in front are fighting for life and death, while you, the protagonist, are in a daze, still standing there. I'm sick of stupidity, sorry! ! !
Come, the author reads with me, and I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding, day by day and night by day.
I feel that Teacher Yuetong is a bit self-righteous.
Too watery
The number of words is really too low, wouldn't it be enough to just call it Saint? The old man kept adding parentheses, and I got tired of looking at them, so I said goodbye.
No, what's going on with you, Lu Yunxiao?
There are no major drawbacks except that it is very watery.
Come on, author, don't give up









