Time Travel at the Same Time: Each One of Me Has a Different Golden Finger

It looked good at the beginning, but it changed immediately later. Was it written by someone else, or was the author's brain confused? I really can't stand the rest of it, the protagonist seems like a different person

Damn, I'm invincible on my own, so I'm going to work as a temporary worker and a dog, but I can't be a ten-year-old? Rubbish

What's going on in these four chapters? Is this Ying Zheng? ? Not to mention my historical aura about him, even when compared with Tian Xing Jiu Ge, it is worlds apart. . .

After Chapter 280, the protagonist becomes Han Fei? He is still a son-in-law, but he has become a pawn in just three chapters.

You're pretty awesome for being able to write chapter 299. When you write about demon slayer, you just write about demon slayer, and you even forcibly raise its martial arts level. You actually dare to touch the Hokage Jounin with a breathing technique. It's hilarious.

I can't stand it anymore. I have many abilities, but I just don't use them. Look at Qu Tong's full-hand use, and look at the protagonist's Bright Soul Technique. I don't need it, so I just put it in the skill list to look good. Although it is convenient to kill the Wang family, but he will be plotted by others later and treat him as a somewhat capable chess piece, why not keep Wang Ye and control him with the Bright Soul Technique. In addition, there are three ten elders in the Feng family, the Lu family, and Ma Xianhong in Biyou Village. Can't Qu Tong control the protagonist with both hands? The protagonist in Naruto has to be a "useful" ninja to express his feelings, so he can't use the Soul Technique on prisoners, such as the Loess Raikage or Minato Namikaze. The ability to make poison can be used on Ma Xianhong with some poison, but in the Great Ninja War, you can't use some poison. If you can't use space, you can accurately poison high-level enemies and poison Sarutobi Hiruzen and others. Ninjas all have high attack and low defense. So, is there any difference between having learned Hirai and not learning it? It's a waste of an opportunity to learn forbidden arts. Then Flying Thunder God, just give Yuhi Kurenai a few marks. Your safety will be basically stable on the way back to the village. You can also directly clone and go back to the village to control the high-level soul arts. Not to mention the Hokage and so on, but you control the mission department and wait.

Starting from Chapter 185, Daozi Bai Jing became Han Fei's staff. Didn't the ghostwriters read the previous ones?

Tian Xing Jiu Ge was very good before. Although there were some minor flaws, it was not a big problem. However, after the Tian Xing chapter, the protagonist's presence plummeted. It was all about the plot, especially after Brother Zheng came out. Not to mention the original work, his expressiveness was like a gangster.

It's really rare for a novel to persuade you to quit in the first chapter. First of all, you can't recognize the characters in it, and then you have already learned breathing techniques and ninjutsu. The protagonist is from a big family and wants to join the Demon Slayer Corps as a retainer. Is the author servile? You might as well write that the main character joins the Demon Slayer Squad because he has no one to rely on and no strength to make sense.

The further you go, the less interesting it becomes. But I still give it five stars.