
A Vacation Through the Courtyard
by Adro
About This Novel
Get on the bus I'm going to drive...
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Official(33)Scraped 7d ago
What's going on? No more updates? It's pretty good. There's a shortage of books.
A young literary author with good writing skills, please proceed with caution
The author's writing is very good, unexpectedly good. I didn't expect that there would be an author with such good writing skills in the Siheyuan fanfic. Although the writing is good, he deliberately chose a hell start and no system, which eliminated a large part of the readers. Later, although he slowly rectified the vampire brother and sister-in-law, and his life slowly became better, he became attached to the literary youth. The bad thing about it is that it deliberately makes the relationship between husband and wife look beautiful and then breaks it into pieces for you to see. It also portrays the protagonist as a truly selfish, ruthless, and irresponsible person, and euphemistically calls it "living your own leisurely life." The moral bottom line of the protagonist is so low that even people like me who have DINK ideas find it difficult to agree with it, and the author's writing style is in vain!
Why do so many idiots write books?
I think this is a serious illness. This book! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I can only say that the protagonist is suitable for being a clique and a thief. Let the protagonist return to the countryside. In those days, it was absolutely fine for the protagonist to return to the countryside. Things happen in the countryside, widow.
I have different views and I really don't know what to write about.
This... This... This... Was poisoned to death, it was simply
I feel like this male protagonist is unkind and ungrateful. His character and his wife are like the same family.
The character doesn't match!
First of all, Pig's Knuckle's predecessor was a successful DINK person, and he had a certain status in modern society? So for such a setting, Pig's Foot later travels to the Siheyuan. Faced with various situations in the Siheyuan, and knowing the plot, why would he choose to ignore or peacefully solve the situation he faces? He opened and shut his mouth to explain his thoughts, saying it over and over again. Che Zulu couldn't stop talking? Does this conform to the author's setting of pig's feet in the opening game? Successful people who have witnessed the prosperity of peaceful times can rise suddenly in peaceful times, so why do they behave like idiots who have never seen the world after time travel? After learning about my situation, why was it so slow to resolve it? How did such a pig's trotter's personality and IQ suddenly emerge in the previous life?
The creativity is quite good and the body style is fresh. Unfortunately, the writing style is a bit poor and not concise enough. It often only takes three sentences to say the meaning of one sentence. The author can look at the works of other fan authors.
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Community(0)
Official(33)Scraped 7d ago
What's going on? No more updates? It's pretty good. There's a shortage of books.
A young literary author with good writing skills, please proceed with caution
The author's writing is very good, unexpectedly good. I didn't expect that there would be an author with such good writing skills in the Siheyuan fanfic. Although the writing is good, he deliberately chose a hell start and no system, which eliminated a large part of the readers. Later, although he slowly rectified the vampire brother and sister-in-law, and his life slowly became better, he became attached to the literary youth. The bad thing about it is that it deliberately makes the relationship between husband and wife look beautiful and then breaks it into pieces for you to see. It also portrays the protagonist as a truly selfish, ruthless, and irresponsible person, and euphemistically calls it "living your own leisurely life." The moral bottom line of the protagonist is so low that even people like me who have DINK ideas find it difficult to agree with it, and the author's writing style is in vain!
Why do so many idiots write books?
I think this is a serious illness. This book! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I can only say that the protagonist is suitable for being a clique and a thief. Let the protagonist return to the countryside. In those days, it was absolutely fine for the protagonist to return to the countryside. Things happen in the countryside, widow.
I have different views and I really don't know what to write about.
This... This... This... Was poisoned to death, it was simply
I feel like this male protagonist is unkind and ungrateful. His character and his wife are like the same family.
The character doesn't match!
First of all, Pig's Knuckle's predecessor was a successful DINK person, and he had a certain status in modern society? So for such a setting, Pig's Foot later travels to the Siheyuan. Faced with various situations in the Siheyuan, and knowing the plot, why would he choose to ignore or peacefully solve the situation he faces? He opened and shut his mouth to explain his thoughts, saying it over and over again. Che Zulu couldn't stop talking? Does this conform to the author's setting of pig's feet in the opening game? Successful people who have witnessed the prosperity of peaceful times can rise suddenly in peaceful times, so why do they behave like idiots who have never seen the world after time travel? After learning about my situation, why was it so slow to resolve it? How did such a pig's trotter's personality and IQ suddenly emerge in the previous life?
The creativity is quite good and the body style is fresh. Unfortunately, the writing style is a bit poor and not concise enough. It often only takes three sentences to say the meaning of one sentence. The author can look at the works of other fan authors.









