
The Female Supporting Role Goes Crazy in the World of Fast Travel
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Official(3)Scraped 8d ago
How should I put it? It looks so depressing. It seems like torture for the sake of torture.
It's weird, the writing is not very good, the logic is not very good, the names are also confusing, the plot is really incoherent, do you have an outline? Is it possible to think less outside the box? It's for readers. If you write it for yourself and understand it according to your own thinking, then just pretend that I didn't say it.
Just a script
You don't need to show your sincerity to eat melon in the plot
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 8d ago
How should I put it? It looks so depressing. It seems like torture for the sake of torture.
It's weird, the writing is not very good, the logic is not very good, the names are also confusing, the plot is really incoherent, do you have an outline? Is it possible to think less outside the box? It's for readers. If you write it for yourself and understand it according to your own thinking, then just pretend that I didn't say it.
Just a script
You don't need to show your sincerity to eat melon in the plot






