
I Set Off a Mysterious Resurgence in Marvel
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Once he traveled through time, Aylin became a member of Midtown. As soon as he opened his eyes, he found the fair-skinned and beautiful Midtown goddess Gwen Stacy, lying on the same bed with him, hugging him tightly. But before he could get excited, the red-lit camera in the room and the whispers outside the door sent a biting chill into Aylin's heart.
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Official(53)Scraped 21d ago
First, the word "water" is a drama. I'm not afraid of you "water". You can change the word "water". It's just the smelly and long name of SHIELD. The two of you still use the full name in one sentence. Isn't it embarrassing? Coulson: What about our Homeland Defense...? Protagonist: What about your Homeland Defense Bureau? Coulson: We don't need the military. Our Homeland Defense Bureau is best at rescuing people. Protagonist: Okay, then your Homeland Defense Bureau... Isn't it embarrassing and causing drama? Secondly, it is said to be a mysterious element, but it feels like it is just too popular, and it doesn't work even after drinking a fortune teller's potion. If Tony goes missing, why don't you do some divination and give him a one-time missing person paper crane drawn from a lottery? Looking at it now, apart from drinking the magic potion, I don't see any elements related to mystery. I have never used divination once, and I used the potion to stun the dagger in the fight. What does it have to do with mystery?
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Even if it's not so rigorous, please don't be so outrageous. The protagonist at the beginning of the chapter, an ordinary person, actually relied on his "will" to withstand strong aphrodisiacs? ? ? Author, are you kidding me? I have personally experienced anesthesia. After using it for only two or three seconds, I don't know anything else. Strong aphrodisiacs, since they are strong, are two or three levels worse than narcotics, and they are not something that an ordinary person like you can withstand.
I originally came here for the mystery, but in the end, the protagonist made a magical operation and turned himself into an invader of the earth. He gained the vigilance and murderous intention of the Ancient One. Do you still want to develop well on the earth? No matter how hard it is, the Earth doesn't even understand it. It turns the Earth's guardians into enemies and can't survive. The Avengers just started planning to open a map and run away to the universe. It's really stupid. If you directly give the formation to Gu Yi, you will not only have a backer. When the time comes, you will have Gu Yi's back and change the formation to absorb energy. Which demon dares to come to you for trouble? Ancient Yi will agree to a request within his power. You don't want the time stone, but you want a few extraordinary items. It's no problem. He has lived for hundreds of years and is the guardian of the earth. Demon gods can make wool. The existence of the enemy, you don't take advantage of the opportunity to grab a few artifacts, and you have to force others to rob. The armor fragments are exchanged for the magic circle, and a complete artifact is not exchanged for more. Not only does it lose more resources, but it also makes enemies with the most powerful guy. A good backer turns into an enemy. It's a stupid thing. For one dollar, you lost ten million. How can you imagine the author of this operation?
Some suggestions that are not suggestions, well written (may be useful, may not be useful)
The writing is very good, but I think the growth of the protagonist in more than seventy chapters is a bit slow. Whether it is the fortune teller sequence or other auxiliary combat capabilities, it is a bit slow. In the third chapter, I have already taken the magic potion of the fortune teller sequence. It is already seventy chapters and I am not even able to master the lowest level ability of the sequence. It is more or less weak. Secondly, the description of (tentative heroine) Gwen is a bit lacking, and it has appeared in chapter thirty. Not to mention Gwen hasn't become Spider-Man yet, but at least two crisis heroines have done little harm. Gwen and her mother are almost dead, but Gwen hasn't become Spider-Man yet. Their relationship with the protagonist has progressed to the point where they kissed each other very quickly. In the end, the clown potion was drawn out very early because the fortune teller sequence was not absorbed properly and it couldn't be used. It wouldn't take nearly a hundred chapters to take the clown potion, and the protagonist would have to be a weakling for thirty chapters.
I feel like the author hasn't read much about Lord of Mysteries and insists on writing about mysteries
This introduction is quite attractive, well, it attracts old critics
The content is good and the story is good, but please don't write about mystery. All Yiyun readers will not be able to figure out what kind of fanfic you are writing.
All in the Marvel world
It's hard to understand why you're using something as unstable as a magic potion.
Can we not write about Gwen? I don't even know how many protagonists have been fucked by me! It's embarrassing to see Gwen. Imagine a gathering of time-travelers, A: Your wife is Gwen? B: Yes, my wife is also Gwen. C: Our wives are both Gwen, good brothers.
The protagonist is exposed directly from the beginning
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Official(53)Scraped 21d ago
First, the word "water" is a drama. I'm not afraid of you "water". You can change the word "water". It's just the smelly and long name of SHIELD. The two of you still use the full name in one sentence. Isn't it embarrassing? Coulson: What about our Homeland Defense...? Protagonist: What about your Homeland Defense Bureau? Coulson: We don't need the military. Our Homeland Defense Bureau is best at rescuing people. Protagonist: Okay, then your Homeland Defense Bureau... Isn't it embarrassing and causing drama? Secondly, it is said to be a mysterious element, but it feels like it is just too popular, and it doesn't work even after drinking a fortune teller's potion. If Tony goes missing, why don't you do some divination and give him a one-time missing person paper crane drawn from a lottery? Looking at it now, apart from drinking the magic potion, I don't see any elements related to mystery. I have never used divination once, and I used the potion to stun the dagger in the fight. What does it have to do with mystery?
Give some suggestions
Even if it's not so rigorous, please don't be so outrageous. The protagonist at the beginning of the chapter, an ordinary person, actually relied on his "will" to withstand strong aphrodisiacs? ? ? Author, are you kidding me? I have personally experienced anesthesia. After using it for only two or three seconds, I don't know anything else. Strong aphrodisiacs, since they are strong, are two or three levels worse than narcotics, and they are not something that an ordinary person like you can withstand.
I originally came here for the mystery, but in the end, the protagonist made a magical operation and turned himself into an invader of the earth. He gained the vigilance and murderous intention of the Ancient One. Do you still want to develop well on the earth? No matter how hard it is, the Earth doesn't even understand it. It turns the Earth's guardians into enemies and can't survive. The Avengers just started planning to open a map and run away to the universe. It's really stupid. If you directly give the formation to Gu Yi, you will not only have a backer. When the time comes, you will have Gu Yi's back and change the formation to absorb energy. Which demon dares to come to you for trouble? Ancient Yi will agree to a request within his power. You don't want the time stone, but you want a few extraordinary items. It's no problem. He has lived for hundreds of years and is the guardian of the earth. Demon gods can make wool. The existence of the enemy, you don't take advantage of the opportunity to grab a few artifacts, and you have to force others to rob. The armor fragments are exchanged for the magic circle, and a complete artifact is not exchanged for more. Not only does it lose more resources, but it also makes enemies with the most powerful guy. A good backer turns into an enemy. It's a stupid thing. For one dollar, you lost ten million. How can you imagine the author of this operation?
Some suggestions that are not suggestions, well written (may be useful, may not be useful)
The writing is very good, but I think the growth of the protagonist in more than seventy chapters is a bit slow. Whether it is the fortune teller sequence or other auxiliary combat capabilities, it is a bit slow. In the third chapter, I have already taken the magic potion of the fortune teller sequence. It is already seventy chapters and I am not even able to master the lowest level ability of the sequence. It is more or less weak. Secondly, the description of (tentative heroine) Gwen is a bit lacking, and it has appeared in chapter thirty. Not to mention Gwen hasn't become Spider-Man yet, but at least two crisis heroines have done little harm. Gwen and her mother are almost dead, but Gwen hasn't become Spider-Man yet. Their relationship with the protagonist has progressed to the point where they kissed each other very quickly. In the end, the clown potion was drawn out very early because the fortune teller sequence was not absorbed properly and it couldn't be used. It wouldn't take nearly a hundred chapters to take the clown potion, and the protagonist would have to be a weakling for thirty chapters.
I feel like the author hasn't read much about Lord of Mysteries and insists on writing about mysteries
This introduction is quite attractive, well, it attracts old critics
The content is good and the story is good, but please don't write about mystery. All Yiyun readers will not be able to figure out what kind of fanfic you are writing.
All in the Marvel world
It's hard to understand why you're using something as unstable as a magic potion.
Can we not write about Gwen? I don't even know how many protagonists have been fucked by me! It's embarrassing to see Gwen. Imagine a gathering of time-travelers, A: Your wife is Gwen? B: Yes, my wife is also Gwen. C: Our wives are both Gwen, good brothers.
The protagonist is exposed directly from the beginning
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Once he traveled through time, Aylin became a member of Midtown. As soon as he opened his eyes, he found the fair-skinned and beautiful Midtown goddess Gwen Stacy, lying on the same bed with him, hugging him tightly. But before he could get excited, the red-lit camera in the room and the whispers outside the door sent a biting chill into Aylin's heart.




Negative review index ⭐⭐ I can't watch it with even the slightest bit of thought. The original character's personality is distorted, the protagonist's character is a loser, and the emotional drama is all over the place. It's a waste of an hour.




















