Marvel's Supernova

The protagonist's character is too virginal. You also said in the early stage that he is a company employee, not a little girl who has just entered society. I think the character should be a bit tougher. The protagonist's current personality is a little different from the character at the beginning. Judging from your early development, the protagonist should now be a decisive person who kills, rather than a criminal who dares not kill even a criminal who wants to kill himself.

I knew the author wanted to bring Venom and the protagonist together. Let me tell you, if you keep doing this, no one will really read your book. Sorry, Venom's host is called a handsome guy, but Chinese aesthetics really don't call him handsome. Maybe to foreigners, this is a handsome guy, but Chinese people don't think so. Little Plum is handsome.

Author, I have read the chapter where I was forcefully kissed by Venom. Can you tell me whether you are married, single or Lily? Thank you 🙏

I am Qin Shihuang, 2482 years old. I am not fierce, I don't play games, I will stay up late with you, I don't close my eyes 24 hours a day, I don't smoke, I don't drink, I'm not social, I'm not cold, I'm easy to get along with, I have a low sense of humor. Sometimes when I'm happy, I'll give you two terracotta warriors. When I'm angry, I'll make you into a terracotta warrior.

Why do you have to write an ambiguous relationship with Venomous Eddie? I personally feel that it is very poisonous and I gave up immediately after seeing 169.

I shudder just thinking about it! Slip away! ! !

It's just that the routine is a bit old-fashioned... It feels a bit dry... Chapter 44: The Battle with the Iron Overlord fully describes what it means that the villain (protagonist) dies from talking too much. It only takes a few seconds to control the flying knife to wipe out the Iron Overlord, but in the end, he just randomly flies a few knives to persuade Obadiah to surrender... His backhand is self-destruction, so he is very strong, right? ? The telekinesis + mental power can sense his physical condition, and the flying knife stopped on his face... Can he press the self-destruct button? ! How to lose when flying dragon rides on the face? In addition to the protagonist having a protagonist halo, I think in this case, it is not a problem to change the combat power of the same level and kill the protagonist instantly The ancient villain died from talking too much, how can the flying dragon ride face lose, ~ Ignore these things, in fact, this book can also be read

Just seeing the ambiguity with Venom breaks my guard instantly. It's better not to write about feelings than to write about ambiguity with men. The other writing is very good. Bye bye.

Personal feeling is very good

It seems pretty good at the front, but the more you look at it, the more toxic it gets at the back. Does it mean that the protagonist has a matchmaker physique? The princess who brought this couple together, what a princess is, I have no idea at all, it's just daily water, boring. Personally, of course I hope the author can write it well.