Reborn in the Apocalypse, I Turned in the System and Led the Whole Family to Win

He died half a year before the apocalypse. He decided to report it and got the system, but it doesn't mean he can win. The island students were actually injected with viruses by the school doctor's office🦠. The aurora caused the electricity to disappear, and even the powers that had been awakened could be deprived of them without anyone noticing... The heroine gets along very warmly with her family, the relationship between the siblings is very good, the description of natural disasters is also very detailed, and the human hearts before and after the apocalypse are very real. What I don't like the most is that the heroine is a bit too kind, even the Virgin, taking risks to save people. Is it necessary for her to go to the island to investigate? I was also very careless when I went to visit the poisoned student. I was a little too arrogant and didn't see how I could win. Instead, I put myself in all kinds of dangers. I will deduct ten points for this. Overall, you can watch it.

Advantages: 1. The theme is novel and positive: - The setting of the handover system: In many apocalyptic novels, the protagonists mostly rely on the system to become powerful alone or establish their own power. In "Rebirth at the End of the World, I Turned In the System and My Family Will Win", the protagonist Song Xiang's behavior of turning in the system at night breaks the convention. This setting reflects trust and reliance on the country and sublimates the theme of the novel. For example, when Song Xiangwan was reborn, she did not choose to take advantage of the system alone to survive in the apocalypse, but decisively reported it to the country. This behavior showed her patriotism and overall view, and also allowed readers to see a different way of surviving in the apocalypse. - Emphasis on collective strength: Through the choice of the protagonist, the novel conveys that in extreme environments such as the end of the world, collective strength and national support are the key to overcoming difficulties. This is in sharp contrast to some apocalyptic novels that emphasize personal heroism, and can trigger readers to think about values ​​such as unity and trust. 2. The plot is compact and the sense of suspense is strong: - The story is fast-paced: from the protagonist's rebirth, to discovering the system, deciding to report it to the country, to facing various crises in the end of the world, the plot progresses layer by layer without excessive procrastination and lengthyness. For example, in the early stage, the author quickly explains the psychological changes and actions of the protagonist after his rebirth, allowing readers to quickly enter the tense atmosphere of the story. - Clever suspense setting: There are many suspense settings in the novel, such as the secret behind Haicheng's name as the "Death Forbidden Zone", the relationship between the unusual events in Shu and the end of the world, etc. These suspense have always attracted readers' attention, prompting them to keep reading to find answers. Like the description of Haicheng, the author constantly mentions its mystery, but is not eager to reveal the truth, keeping readers curious. 3. Distinctive characters: - The protagonist has a full personality: Song Xiangwan, as the protagonist, is brave, smart and responsible. After her rebirth, she was not defeated by the sufferings in her previous life, but actively prepared for the end of the world. Her bravery is reflected in her courage to face unknown apocalyptic crises and her courage to report the system to the country; her intelligence is reflected in her analysis and judgment of various situations, and her ability to make correct decisions quickly; her responsibility is reflected in her protection of her family and her dedication to the country. - Rich supporting characters: In addition to the protagonist, the supporting characters in the novel also have their own characteristics. For example, Song Xiangwan's family members supported each other in the apocalypse, showing the power of family affection; and the staff of the National Security Intelligence Agency, whose attitude towards the protagonist changed from suspicion to trust, showing their professionalism and dedication in the process. Improvement points and suggestions: Logical rigor needs to be improved: - Setting of system functions: In novels, the functions and rules of the system are sometimes not clear enough, which makes the way the protagonist uses the system seem a bit abrupt in some plots. For example, the system's reward mechanism and the logic of task release are not clear enough. Sometimes the reward the protagonist receives after completing a task seems not to be proportional to the difficulty of the task. It is recommended that the author further improve the settings of the system and clarify the functions and rules of the system so that readers can better understand the interaction between the protagonist and the system. The writing can be further polished: -Details of description: In terms of scene description and character psychological description, it is sometimes too brief and fails to allow readers to fully feel the cruelty of the end of the world and the inner world of the characters. For example, when describing a scene after the end of the world, the author can add some detailed descriptions of the environment, such as dilapidated buildings, deserted streets, people's panic, etc., So that readers can be more immersed in the scene. - Expressiveness of language: The language in the novel is relatively plain and lacks some literariness and appeal. The author can use more rhetorical techniques, such as metaphors, personification, exaggeration, etc., To enhance the expressiveness of the language and make the novel more attractive. Worldbuilding can go much deeper: - Expansion of the background of the apocalypse: The current description of the apocalypse in novels mainly focuses on some superficial phenomena, such as the occurrence of disasters and people's panic. The description of the causes of the apocalypse and the changes in the world structure is not in-depth enough. The author can further expand the background of the apocalypse, explore the deeper reasons behind the apocalypse, and the coping strategies of different countries and regions in the apocalypse, making the world view of the novel more complete. - Improvement of the superpower system: The novel involves the setting of superpowers, but the introduction to the types, levels, and acquisition methods of superpowers is still relatively vague. This makes the reader's understanding of abilities unclear during the reading process, affecting the reading experience. It is recommended that the author improve the setting of the superpower system so that readers can better understand and accept this setting. Overall, this novel would be rated a 7.5 Out of 10. Its advantages include novel themes, compact plots, distinctive characters, and a certain degree of readability and appeal. For readers who like apocalyptic literature and are interested in patriotic themes, this novel is worth reading.

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Out of ten, I rate it ten! Although I have read a lot of apocalyptic articles, this is the first time I saw a plot where the protagonist directly reports to the country and believes in the country after his rebirth. I am really moved by my three views! Based on this, I will give it full marks! Every character is full-bodied, unique, and I like it very much (✪▽✪) But I was really speechless when the heroine went to school and was injected with a virus... There are many ways to avoid injections! But I saw that this seems to be a small foreshadowing later? I just thought I would only write about the domestic and not the international, but then came up ヾ(≧∪≦*)ノ. But there is one thing. Although it mentioned that the sea city was turned into a laboratory due to the infiltration of spies, it ignored a piece of information monitoring, and only wrote about holding an international conference to announce the end of the world, which is not comprehensive. But this is just a small shortcoming, nothing serious. Before the end of the world, the accurate description of time brings a sense of urgency to readers, which is great. ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧This description is also used in many movies. The analogy is also very good at describing the environment ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧ The heroine's character is low-key and high-key😑 Looking forward to follow-up updates, author, cheers~