I'm Back from Hell

If the author removes words like jade fist and jade finger, and describes less body fragrance, I think the senses will be better. I originally thought the heroine was very strong, and the battle was very passionate, but as soon as these words came out, I felt calm instantly. The author's writing style is very good, but these details made me click in and out again and again. I even thought I was watching a male video.

1. This is an apocalyptic novel about the confrontation between humans and gods. It's really exciting to watch Xia Yu grow up step by step until she fights against the gods! 2. There are many characters in this book, but the characterization of the characters is also quite full. Most of the members of Xia Yu's team went through a process from confrontation to inclusion (for example, Chen Wei joined Xia Yu's team after being caught by Xia Yu) 3. Xia Yu is a very complex character. She will not actively bully the weak, but she is not afraid of the oppression of evil forces. If she dares to love or hate, she will be repaid. Then she is a very mysterious person. This mystery is not only reflected in the fact that she has the secret of "rebirth", so she gives people a very mysterious feeling (also because of her rebirth, she constantly provides Zhao Guohui and others with some information about the subsequent fog incident); it is also because her brain circuit is relatively strange, so that no one knows what she is really thinking. (For example, in later chapters, her decision to dismiss Han Sanguang and others made Grace Johnson and some foreign forces incomprehensible.) Overall, the image of such a ruthless but upright character in the apocalypse really struck a chord with me! 4. Xia Tian is a young genius scientist. Many of his inventions also provided a lot of help to mankind in the late post-apocalyptic period. (Such as crystal bombs, bionic cores, intelligent robots, etc.) I always thought the mysterious hacker was Xia Tian at first, but it didn't seem to reveal who the hacker was later (maybe I missed it) 5. Xie Shaokun is the first person to join Xia Yu's team. He was naive, ignorant and reckless at the beginning, and then gradually became more stable after killing his "girlfriend" with his own hands. He is also a growing talent with a complete story line in the book. 6. Xiaonan is a 5-year-old sharpshooter. Because she is too young, she can't understand most of the decisions made by the team, but she will also follow Sister Yu's decision. (As for Xiaonan's description, I personally think the author's writing is a bit ridiculous 😂) 7. Hong She is a very sober low-level person. In the early stage, he played the role of a "villain" who "does dirty work" in the team. He clearly knows how to stay in the team for a long time. But he was also a good and filial son who would save his mother even if it cost him his own life. 8. Han Sanguang is a genius with super-grade talent and the only truly sinister person among the protagonists. He is very afraid of death and cautious in doing things. After careful consideration, it is described more than once in the whole text that he wants to betray the Xia Yu team, or is preparing to betray the Xia Yu team in the future. In the later chapters, it is said that she likes Aigulan. I am a little confused here, and there is no foreshadowing. She said that she has such feelings for Aigulan. And Ayigulan is a mutant. I can only say that his taste is quite unique. 9. Ah Xiong-Su Qian's loyal follower. Tough and equipped with rattan, it can search and attack in a wide range. I think the author can write more details about the relationship between him and Susie. 10. Tan Xiaotong - a girl with strange powers, who practiced weightlifting before the apocalypse broke out. Later in the original article, it was written that she betrayed Xia Yu's team and provided some information about Zhao Guohui with the Seraphim's divine attendant. But in the later stage, there was no mention of anything that harmed Zhao Guohui by her providing this information, or what happened to her later. The original text just said that she died at the end of her life 😂 11. Zhao Guohui is a good leader, upright. He does not accept bribes from others and works fairly and impartially. He is the only most upright good person in this book. He also provided a lot of help to the Xiayu team (of course, it was actually a transaction) 12. Gao Mengmeng - a self-aware mutant, very, very bad! It was written in the previous article that she was scared after being beaten by Xia Yu, and then she did not dare to provoke Xia Yu in a series of actions later, but there was no mention of her fate in the following. 13. Summary: ① From the first chapters, it can be seen that the author's writing level for this type of novel needs to be improved😜 ② The middle words are quite detailed, and the character story lines are also quite full. ③The end of the story was seriously unfinished, the ending was too hasty, and the endings of some supporting characters were not written, so they were summarized in one sentence (of course the author also wrote it in the message box, saying that it was because the editor urged it to be completed, so it was hastily completed) ④I can only say that the author set up this framework too high. The characters were too high. There are too many, and then the skills of writing this type of novel need to be improved, so it is easy to collapse. It is unfinished 😰 ⑤ But this kind of subject matter in the apocalyptic background is still quite rare, such as mist events, alien gods and the like (at least I haven't seen it many times) ⑥ I also look forward to the author's progress. See you next time! 😘

I cried to death. The author you mentioned, the more you change the introduction, the fewer words it will be. Moreover, it has nothing to do with the content of the book. The heroine did kill the man at first, but that has nothing to do with the subsequent plot! What I'm saying is, can we change the introduction to a better one? I'm not saying this is bad. It's just that this introduction doesn't make people want to click on it to read the follow-up. As long as the author puts a little more content, it will be much better. I would like to make suggestions, but I am afraid that I am too judgmental. Anyway, I hope that the author will change the introduction, and it takes seven days to change the introduction, so the author should think about it carefully first. At least, you must include some outline in your introduction. If not, you can write about the heroine's character, and summarize the heroine's experiences. Alas, I feel that I am able to read this book only because of fate.

Returning from the fusion of all worlds and the hell-like apocalypse, he was actually on the bus where he would enter the fog of rules and participate in the first fog event against zombies. Before the apocalypse breaks out, the fog of rules created when the two spaces merge will completely cut off contact between the inside and outside. During this period, if you use the Ancient Guidance Technique and absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, for every additional point of strength you increase, your survival rate in participating in other foggy events will increase by 10%. The powerful instantaneous heat energy detonates the crystal core, which can produce a violent psychic explosion. The more psychic energy in the crystal core, the greater the power of the psychic explosion, and the higher the damage to any living beings that have absorbed psychic energy, such as ghosts, humans, and orcs. Relying on the memory of his previous life, Xia Yu tried his best to protect himself in the misty events one after another. He also absorbed the powers of heaven and earth to improve his strength, mastered the power of rules, and even understood the rules of heaven.

Update quickly, author. Although updates will not be discontinued, a stable update is more likely to win the favor of readers. I hope to see the author's update today. This book is still very interesting and has a good setting. However, the subject matter is a bit unpopular according to others, but I don't think so. Maybe big data tweets are more frequent.

It looks great, come on, come on, come on

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Strong woman, no cp. The setting is novel, each foggy world with different situations, leading the team to become stronger step by step

The introduction to this book has been revised for at least six editions, but the effect is not good. I was really stunned by the introduction. In the comment area, more than one reader said that they almost missed my book because of my introduction. I saw it all and felt even more anxious. But I really can't think of a good one, so I can only post a thread asking for help. I hope I won't be laughed at by my peers... I should be the first one to open a post to ask readers for help, but there is no one else.

😁✨Awesome, this is a fairly new apocalyptic theme ✨.