The Male Protagonist of "quick Travel" is Always Getting Darker
About This Novel
Su Su, the female supporting character in the plot who drives the plot, serves as an accelerant to stimulate the male protagonist and the female protagonist to be together. When necessary, she will viciously abandon and suppress the male protagonist, so that the male protagonist can grow up, become a winner in life, and become a son of a plane blessed with good luck! However, the male protagonist, who cares about the old mother and seems to be raising a son, always turns dark and perverted inexplicably. The heroine always doesn't play according to the routine, which makes her heartbroken, and the male partner always adds drama to her. She feels that it is really difficult for her! Su Yue: Please fall in love with the male protagonist! Female protagonist: I like the male partner and I want to be with him. --Su Yue: Let's break up! Male protagonist: Do you want to leave me? Impossible! Su Su looked at the anklet on her leg in confusion. Which step was wrong? Why is the male protagonist always perverted! Hey, I want to change departments, and I also want to resign!
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Official(314)Scraped 20d ago
Don't hurt me if you don't like it, thank you.
I shape every story very carefully. Sometimes I can spend an entire afternoon struggling with two thousand words in front of the computer. I admit that there are indeed many places that I didn't write well or handle well. I'm sorry. It's because I don't have enough writing skills to express the meaning I want. As a result, what I want to express is different from what you understand. I apologize, I'm sorry. Like, I welcome and thank you, dislike, remove the bookshelf, and thank you for reading. Please don't criticize a story along with the author just because you don't like it. What did I do wrong again? You need to use some excessive words to evaluate me. I am a very easily influenced person, and some excessive comments will affect my subsequent writing of the plot, causing me to get entangled, resulting in changes in the plot of the article and poor quality. In the future, if I see excessive comments, I will delete them directly as I don't want to affect the reading sense of other little cuties. And thanks to other cuties for their support, I will work hard to improve myself and write better stories. Take a bow, I'm really grateful to the little cuties for their support and recommendation votes. I will continue to grow and improve myself to write better. Finally, Qiankun's monkey jungler and my auxiliary town!
You go, you go
Really, I feel like the male protagonist is such a scumbag. . . . . .
The male protagonist is really a scumbag, and the domineering president is really a scumbag. . . . .
Now as long as I don't understand something, just read the comments?
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If this is not love
Chu Xuan - As long as you want it, I will give you my life. King's Landing - Little slave, it's time to go home. Xiao Chi--I'll take him back first. Qiankun--My support is so fierce (ˉ(∞)ˉ)chi Shen Xiu--When will your Majesty marry this king? Jiang Ci - Su Yue, I threw away the scalpel, so don't be afraid of me, okay? Xinghe - you have tried to break into my heart again and again, so what if I make a dress for you? Jun Xian - If you want to leave, then step over my corpse. Su Yue: This person is a bit familiar. Master Ming - Very good, his little slave still remembers him.
Ministers: What is moral integrity? What is moral integrity? Is integrity important to life? Nothing, how miserable! ! ! !
Give me some suggestions
I haven't finished reading it until I reached the middle of the first part. I think the writing is very good. This is the motivation for me to continue reading now. But I always felt that it was very awkward because the script setting was not very good. Since the heroine doesn't want to play with the character setting and has no mission, why does she still have this quick travel department? Since there is this female supporting department, she must counterattack. She does not counterattack, nor does she compete for the heroine's position. She also promotes the male and female protagonists. But even if she does not cross over, the male and female protagonists are meant to be together. Therefore, the setting of this script is very contradictory. It is not OOC, has no tasks, and does not steal people. What is the meaning of her quick travel? Why not change the script? If these stories are all books written by the current heroine, let her experience the life of a supporting actress. And give her some tasks so that the plot will not be boring and the word count can be reduced. There is a cause and effect, just let nature take its course. What I see now is a bit awkward, because now there is an effect but no cause. If there is such a company that does meaningless tasks, it will definitely collapse. I hope the author can give some reasons to make the heroine's quick travel mission more meaningful.
Then you also have a life to feed
I think you may have jumped into someone's trap
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Official(314)Scraped 20d ago
Don't hurt me if you don't like it, thank you.
I shape every story very carefully. Sometimes I can spend an entire afternoon struggling with two thousand words in front of the computer. I admit that there are indeed many places that I didn't write well or handle well. I'm sorry. It's because I don't have enough writing skills to express the meaning I want. As a result, what I want to express is different from what you understand. I apologize, I'm sorry. Like, I welcome and thank you, dislike, remove the bookshelf, and thank you for reading. Please don't criticize a story along with the author just because you don't like it. What did I do wrong again? You need to use some excessive words to evaluate me. I am a very easily influenced person, and some excessive comments will affect my subsequent writing of the plot, causing me to get entangled, resulting in changes in the plot of the article and poor quality. In the future, if I see excessive comments, I will delete them directly as I don't want to affect the reading sense of other little cuties. And thanks to other cuties for their support, I will work hard to improve myself and write better stories. Take a bow, I'm really grateful to the little cuties for their support and recommendation votes. I will continue to grow and improve myself to write better. Finally, Qiankun's monkey jungler and my auxiliary town!
You go, you go
Really, I feel like the male protagonist is such a scumbag. . . . . .
The male protagonist is really a scumbag, and the domineering president is really a scumbag. . . . .
Now as long as I don't understand something, just read the comments?
Building BuildingRecruitment for names
Waiting for countless recommendations for great names! Please feel free to stay! Bazahei!
If this is not love
Chu Xuan - As long as you want it, I will give you my life. King's Landing - Little slave, it's time to go home. Xiao Chi--I'll take him back first. Qiankun--My support is so fierce (ˉ(∞)ˉ)chi Shen Xiu--When will your Majesty marry this king? Jiang Ci - Su Yue, I threw away the scalpel, so don't be afraid of me, okay? Xinghe - you have tried to break into my heart again and again, so what if I make a dress for you? Jun Xian - If you want to leave, then step over my corpse. Su Yue: This person is a bit familiar. Master Ming - Very good, his little slave still remembers him.
Ministers: What is moral integrity? What is moral integrity? Is integrity important to life? Nothing, how miserable! ! ! !
Give me some suggestions
I haven't finished reading it until I reached the middle of the first part. I think the writing is very good. This is the motivation for me to continue reading now. But I always felt that it was very awkward because the script setting was not very good. Since the heroine doesn't want to play with the character setting and has no mission, why does she still have this quick travel department? Since there is this female supporting department, she must counterattack. She does not counterattack, nor does she compete for the heroine's position. She also promotes the male and female protagonists. But even if she does not cross over, the male and female protagonists are meant to be together. Therefore, the setting of this script is very contradictory. It is not OOC, has no tasks, and does not steal people. What is the meaning of her quick travel? Why not change the script? If these stories are all books written by the current heroine, let her experience the life of a supporting actress. And give her some tasks so that the plot will not be boring and the word count can be reduced. There is a cause and effect, just let nature take its course. What I see now is a bit awkward, because now there is an effect but no cause. If there is such a company that does meaningless tasks, it will definitely collapse. I hope the author can give some reasons to make the heroine's quick travel mission more meaningful.
Then you also have a life to feed
I think you may have jumped into someone's trap
