
Online Game Apocalyptic System
About This Novel
Mo Li died two years after the end of the world. I didn't expect that I could be reborn. . The first thing to do after rebirth is to get the cheat code of the online game system. Then I have the opportunity to torture the scumbag man and scumbag girl. Mutated beasts appear in the real world. Fighting monsters in the online game world and upgrading it will transform the village into a paradise unaffected by the apocalypse. Relying on others is something you can never do again. Only by becoming stronger is the last word
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Official(26)Scraped 22d ago
I don't like the three brothers from Qianqiu's family!
I can't tell you any reasons, behavior, behavior, etc. There is a chuunibyou who is more childish than the heroine, a hypocrite who is gentle and has no intention of calculating other people's secrets, and a seemingly pure and innocent prophet. I can't help but make comments without reading any further. To be honest. I find all three types of people disgusting! The heroine should be more careful and work hard to become stronger. Well, it's purely a matter of personal perception. If there are book friends who like the three brothers and don't like my comments, just think of it as a fart.
Why can't I understand? . . . . . .
Actually it's not bad
What can I say about a book? It's the kind of book that you can't understand when you first read it. You can't understand it until you've read a tenth of it. You can't help yourself after reading five-tenths of it. After reading it, you feel like it's over. You haven't read enough yet! Aha that's it! ! !
Rubbish article, the women are too arrogant and the men are too piggy.
It's pretty, but a little messy.
One moment you enter the game, and the next moment it becomes reality. The more you watch, the more annoying you become. If you want the system, then the system. It is obviously the end of the world and you are fighting zombies, but you are entering an illusory game. It becomes annoying just to watch...
Putting the cart before the horse
You are writing about the apocalypse, not about games. You write about the details in the game in such detail, but you only touch on the reality in one stroke. Your outline is off track, and it's too long-winded.
It looks good, but of course there are too many ah ah ah ah ah ah
The sentences are not broken properly, and it is easy to choke to death.
. . . . . . . . . .
There is no separation between games and reality, and it sounds very confusing. Either you draw a dividing line, or you write that you went to the game or returned to reality, otherwise others will feel very confused when listening to the novel. Nothing else wrong
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Community(0)
Official(26)Scraped 22d ago
I don't like the three brothers from Qianqiu's family!
I can't tell you any reasons, behavior, behavior, etc. There is a chuunibyou who is more childish than the heroine, a hypocrite who is gentle and has no intention of calculating other people's secrets, and a seemingly pure and innocent prophet. I can't help but make comments without reading any further. To be honest. I find all three types of people disgusting! The heroine should be more careful and work hard to become stronger. Well, it's purely a matter of personal perception. If there are book friends who like the three brothers and don't like my comments, just think of it as a fart.
Why can't I understand? . . . . . .
Actually it's not bad
What can I say about a book? It's the kind of book that you can't understand when you first read it. You can't understand it until you've read a tenth of it. You can't help yourself after reading five-tenths of it. After reading it, you feel like it's over. You haven't read enough yet! Aha that's it! ! !
Rubbish article, the women are too arrogant and the men are too piggy.
It's pretty, but a little messy.
One moment you enter the game, and the next moment it becomes reality. The more you watch, the more annoying you become. If you want the system, then the system. It is obviously the end of the world and you are fighting zombies, but you are entering an illusory game. It becomes annoying just to watch...
Putting the cart before the horse
You are writing about the apocalypse, not about games. You write about the details in the game in such detail, but you only touch on the reality in one stroke. Your outline is off track, and it's too long-winded.
It looks good, but of course there are too many ah ah ah ah ah ah
The sentences are not broken properly, and it is easy to choke to death.
. . . . . . . . . .
There is no separation between games and reality, and it sounds very confusing. Either you draw a dividing line, or you write that you went to the game or returned to reality, otherwise others will feel very confused when listening to the novel. Nothing else wrong






