After the Doomsday Sun Goes Out
by First Mortal
About This Novel
As the sun burned out its energy, the earth entered a period of extreme heat and drought, and animals and plants almost became extinct. Later, due to the sudden drop in temperature, non-stop heavy rains ushered in, resulting in flooding, and humans could only find shelter in the watery world. As the last trace of warmth from the sun receded, the snowflakes continued to fall, and the entire earth was frozen into a big ice ball. Without food and warm clothing, people had to face new challenges again. As the sun was completely extinguished and no longer transmitted heat, the earth truly entered the Great Dark Age. See how the heroine Liu Xu strives to survive as an extremely ordinary woman when the apocalypse approaches. This article is relatively slow-moving, very civilian, and pays attention to details. Little cuties who like super-realistic fighting and exciting articles can move on.
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Official(114)Scraped 2d ago
Some punctuation marks are redundant.
Remove the punctuation marks where there are hearts to make the text read more smoothly. For example: Still remember that time. Still remember that time. See if there are no punctuation marks between the words and the words, which makes it smoother. If there are any extra punctuation marks, the sentences should be stopped one after another.
A turtle can climb the keyboard faster than you
male protagonist
Who is the male protagonist? Is it the one named Nie Bing? Human beings are so indifferent in front of nature, cherish the beautiful life now.
Although I don't know what the author wants to express later, I can't understand it more and more.
Updates are slow and a bit out of touch, and I feel like these few updates later are a bit perfunctory.
Got a cold
The wind is biting outside today, and the temperature has dropped to minus 13 degrees. The author has caught a cold😢, and his mind is in a state of mush. For the sake of quality, I will stop updating today, and I will say sorry here. I also want to thank the U49 friends who tipped me and gave me support.
The article is very innovative and interesting.
The only fly in the ointment is that the heroine has a low IQ and EQ, looks anxious, and has a bit of a virgin heart. The author's great insights are out of place when it comes to the heroine, because the heroine's lack of strength cannot be comprehended 😂 It's understandable that the heroine has the inferiority complex of an ordinary person. It's just not good to always be hesitant. There are some small bugs in the article. In fact, rice and wheat that are not threshed last longer. And in case of disaster, the skin will be ground together. My throat gets stuck when I eat it. So I think it is somewhat easy for the heroine to obtain the seeds of staple food. Moreover, sweet potatoes have higher yields and larger plants than potatoes. If the staple food in the apocalypse were to be sweet potatoes, they would be better than sweet potatoes. And the nutritional value of sweet potatoes is better. Moreover, the heroine's space has been upgraded, and there are birds in it. In fact, according to the laws of nature, the heroine's space should be full of everything, but they are all wild. Once she masters the space, she should be able to eat meat. Every time I see her eating without meat, I feel heartbroken for someone like me who loves meat. Finally Goldfinger is qualified. Moreover, the heroine with the golden finger does not pay attention to the outside world, and is not very good at sweeping her tail. It feels like she is committing a crime when she is always in danger. I hope it will help the heroine to improve her emotional intelligence quickly. If not, I would have wanted to hit her. Moreover, the heroine has an inferiority complex when facing Nie Bing. In fact, it is not necessary. Most people just feel a sense of gap. After all, the heroine knew about this in advance, so there was no reason for her sudden inferiority complex. I hope Goldfinger has evolved. If you want to be stubborn, can we use some snacks? Don't show your tail every day and make others suspicious. Isn't it pretty good in the early stage? You have to expose so much in front of the little man. Otherwise, I think it would be a bit of a waste to open it up to the female protagonist.
Rubbish
It's rubbish and sissy and not good at all.
Will the heroine return to the world where she died?
Having said that, I still really want the heroine to be with Nie Bing.
nice! Come on, give it a try!
I want to know how long it has been since Liuxu was reborn as a soul. Can I still see old friends? (Is the time spent by her soul synchronized with reality? It seems that hundreds of years have passed)
today
I posted two chapters today. I don't know why the first chapter is still under review and cannot be passed. Please wait patiently, the background will notify me to make changes, and you will be able to see it then.
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Official(114)Scraped 2d ago
Some punctuation marks are redundant.
Remove the punctuation marks where there are hearts to make the text read more smoothly. For example: Still remember that time. Still remember that time. See if there are no punctuation marks between the words and the words, which makes it smoother. If there are any extra punctuation marks, the sentences should be stopped one after another.
A turtle can climb the keyboard faster than you
male protagonist
Who is the male protagonist? Is it the one named Nie Bing? Human beings are so indifferent in front of nature, cherish the beautiful life now.
Although I don't know what the author wants to express later, I can't understand it more and more.
Updates are slow and a bit out of touch, and I feel like these few updates later are a bit perfunctory.
Got a cold
The wind is biting outside today, and the temperature has dropped to minus 13 degrees. The author has caught a cold😢, and his mind is in a state of mush. For the sake of quality, I will stop updating today, and I will say sorry here. I also want to thank the U49 friends who tipped me and gave me support.
The article is very innovative and interesting.
The only fly in the ointment is that the heroine has a low IQ and EQ, looks anxious, and has a bit of a virgin heart. The author's great insights are out of place when it comes to the heroine, because the heroine's lack of strength cannot be comprehended 😂 It's understandable that the heroine has the inferiority complex of an ordinary person. It's just not good to always be hesitant. There are some small bugs in the article. In fact, rice and wheat that are not threshed last longer. And in case of disaster, the skin will be ground together. My throat gets stuck when I eat it. So I think it is somewhat easy for the heroine to obtain the seeds of staple food. Moreover, sweet potatoes have higher yields and larger plants than potatoes. If the staple food in the apocalypse were to be sweet potatoes, they would be better than sweet potatoes. And the nutritional value of sweet potatoes is better. Moreover, the heroine's space has been upgraded, and there are birds in it. In fact, according to the laws of nature, the heroine's space should be full of everything, but they are all wild. Once she masters the space, she should be able to eat meat. Every time I see her eating without meat, I feel heartbroken for someone like me who loves meat. Finally Goldfinger is qualified. Moreover, the heroine with the golden finger does not pay attention to the outside world, and is not very good at sweeping her tail. It feels like she is committing a crime when she is always in danger. I hope it will help the heroine to improve her emotional intelligence quickly. If not, I would have wanted to hit her. Moreover, the heroine has an inferiority complex when facing Nie Bing. In fact, it is not necessary. Most people just feel a sense of gap. After all, the heroine knew about this in advance, so there was no reason for her sudden inferiority complex. I hope Goldfinger has evolved. If you want to be stubborn, can we use some snacks? Don't show your tail every day and make others suspicious. Isn't it pretty good in the early stage? You have to expose so much in front of the little man. Otherwise, I think it would be a bit of a waste to open it up to the female protagonist.
Rubbish
It's rubbish and sissy and not good at all.
Will the heroine return to the world where she died?
Having said that, I still really want the heroine to be with Nie Bing.
nice! Come on, give it a try!
I want to know how long it has been since Liuxu was reborn as a soul. Can I still see old friends? (Is the time spent by her soul synchronized with reality? It seems that hundreds of years have passed)
today
I posted two chapters today. I don't know why the first chapter is still under review and cannot be passed. Please wait patiently, the background will notify me to make changes, and you will be able to see it then.
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