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Does this book have a male protagonist? If so, forget it.

The writing can only be described as dry. For example, the description of the heroine's appearance is roughly as follows: Beautiful! Breathtakingly beautiful! Extremely beautiful! Absolutely beautiful...! Incomparably beautiful...! So beautiful...! Okay, my Chinese teacher often says that the poor writing style of some people is reflected in the description of sadness, "Ah! I am so sad! I am so sad that I am dying" and the description of beauty, "Ah! So beautiful! So beautiful that I am dying!" The description is very pale and weak. Because it's hard to empathize. Beauty is so abstract that it can only make people feel invisible and colorless. When beauty reaches the extreme, it is extremely invisible and colorless. A light word can only leave a blurry image. Do you think that if you repeat this kind of innocuous words a few times, the picture will become clear? It will only make people feel the running account smell of boiled water. There was nothing to chew on. It would really be much better to use metaphors and personification. For example, online novels often describe "skin as white as porcelain jade". The appearance of the characters will become much clearer. Change words like thrilling and thrilling to something specific: how thrilling and thrilling. Change extremely beautiful to describe the aspect of beauty specifically. Make all key points specific, replace short words with long sentences for more important feelings, and replace statements with rhetoric. There are often these metaphors and personifications in composition books: the beauty of flowers makes people's mood colorful (the beauty of flowers has color); the beauty of sunshine melts the glaciers in the heart (the beauty of sunshine has temperature); the beauty of moonlight is the ray of spring breeze that caresses away the dust in the soul, and the pearl can bloom. (The beauty of moonlight is flawless purity) What about the beauty of the heroine? Will it make people only have a few words of thrilling? It's a thrilling and specific moment that makes your whole body tremble and your blood rushes, right? Also, the description of the scenery in the article is a bit lacking. It goes without saying that scenery plays a role in setting off the atmosphere. So are the side descriptions. Finally, I like the setting of the heroine of the article. So when I saw the author describing the appearance of the heroine in a few dry words, I couldn't help but review the book. Maybe the words were exaggerated or something. But the plot of the article is very good, I like it very much. And my advice here is don't listen to me blindly teach you how to write novels. It is best to check online how to improve your writing skills. According to the teacher: if you memorize more good articles and read more nutritious books, rhetoric will be easy to do. Coding is not easy, please come on, author~ If you just want to write a novel for fun, then just think that I was stupid when doing math problems and accidentally put a p point here.

Hug ~ Like by the way. (≧?6?6≦)ゞ

There is no one who can let the original female protagonists deal with themselves. The author who can come up with such a setting is really cute. I am really looking forward to the next story. I hope the author will not give up and I hope this article will become popular. However, I still want to ask, this article does not have a male protagonist or something? Or, if Qiqi is so aggressive, it shouldn't be Lily?

This is the first time I have seen this type of product. It is very novel, beautiful and supportive.

Dear author, do you recognize me?

The subject matter is very innovative, and what is different from the previous fast-travel writing routines is that you can time-travel to the enemy and change the fate of the enemy. But I didn't watch much and it was boring.

When I saw the third dimension, President Love, there were some mistakes and confusion about the names of Mo Yunhua and Mo Yunyu. Bai Xiaoqi's territory in the third plane has been expanded His Majesty's new vest: "Trading System of All Heavens and Worlds" Bai Xiaoqi will find two people in each plane. The female protagonist (Counterattack Life Jiang Ziba) and the male protagonist (become the business leader of this world) become the people of the main system, which can be regarded as the most powerful existence to maintain this world. The two people selected by the system will be together later. This seems to reveal that in other fast-travel novels, the original male and female protagonists are the chosen ones, the darling of the world, the support of the world, and those with great luck. (The main system also has its own plan, just like the world is controlled by a trace of its energy. The existence of Tiandao Jiangzi) Outsiders cannot and cannot fight with them at will. Oh, there are also so-called powerful plot kings, whose ability to enter other worlds is restricted, etc... [The routines are all in order, the novel platform, and the different books are connected into one system] However, the messengers from different worlds chosen by Bai Xiaoqi (let's call them that for the time being) can communicate with each other and communicate with other worlds (which are quite powerful). They can also control their own world to a certain extent and possess powerful abilities. Just saw it and added some guesses If you want to record every plane, I'll do it again when I get a chance, hehe There are many other features in the article. Suddenly in the middle of the night... There are so many. I will pick up the rest when I have time. I feel sorry for you~ [I hope I didn't get swallowed]

This book is different from other fast-traveling books, it's beautiful~ Compare your heart❤

Bai Xiaoqi's character setting. It's really awesome.