I Decide the Happiness of the Fast-wearing Female Partner
About This Novel
Shangguan Yanqing was bound to the system, and she gained happiness from life to life. (1V1 mutual favor) The male protagonists are the same person. In the mission world, even if they have no memory, they will still attract each other and dote on each other without abusing each other! Let me reiterate, this book is not a guide. It does not guide the male protagonist and male partner. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is purely natural. The writing may not be very good in the early stages of this book, but it will gradually improve in the later stages.
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Official(115)Scraped 20d ago
This book was published on Qidian. I just learned that it is available here, so I just saw comments from readers. My writing skills are still very immature, and I will work hard to improve.
I have written to 1158. She has such a troubled lover, although she may not have memories, but her love is too little. The male protagonist can fall in love with her immediately, but she is afraid that the male protagonist will not be good to the children in the future, so she divorces or abandons him. For the sake of the child who was raped, is it wrong? It's disgusting. I don't like such a female protagonist the most.
...
It's not good to read, it's too Mary Sue. I think the author is a primary school student. It doesn't have the charm of a novel at all. I haven't finished reading the first plane yet, so I gave up on the article. Don't fall into the trap. It's too ugly.
I feel like the heroine's life is going too smoothly, she's like the heroine, more of a heroine than a heroine. There is no sense of ups and downs.
The emotional route is too fast, it's like eating the rice before it starts cooking. I'm not very satisfied with it o(╯□╰)o
The first story I read did not attract me. It was written too blandly, without any frustration, and I did not see the meaning of the heroine's counterattack. I felt that in fact, it is not necessary to fast-travel the heroine, anyone can do her kind of task, so I don't know why the fast-travel heroine was included in that story. It felt like superfluous and unnecessary. The author's writing and description level is average, and there is nothing to attract readers, so I abandoned the article.
The heroine is written like a white lotus flower
There's something wrong with the way you wrote it. The superficial meaning and deep meaning of the words are not clear. I think it's okay! It's just a little weird sometimes
This book makes me feel so embarrassed! What a noob, and the writing is as strong as chatting.
Look at the typos and get angry
I'm sorry, can you type in Pinyin? Otherwise, it's okay to check after typing. I'm really tired of reading it. Especially when I listen to the audio book, I really want to punch someone. There are so many typos that it's disgusting.
... no stars.
Ahem, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and greens. The following is just my personal opinion. I politely refuse to be biased. Maybe I have a bit of a picky taste, and I find large articles to be bland. There are not so many ups and downs, and many places are passed over in a general way (the psychological description of the characters). Just like a running account... The characters' images are not revealed. Emmmm, there is an article that says this. There are two little loli. The male protagonist's loli ① is relatively skinny at first (smart and lively, precocious) with a dark belly. As for the heroine's loli②, she is cute, silly, and sweet. However, as I kept writing, the characters became biased... Loli ① became silly and cute, and loli ② became sinister. It's very gentle even though it's big, and the background of the story is very gentle. The ending is good and relatively healing. It's just a personal feeling, don't take it personally.
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Community(0)
Official(115)Scraped 20d ago
This book was published on Qidian. I just learned that it is available here, so I just saw comments from readers. My writing skills are still very immature, and I will work hard to improve.
I have written to 1158. She has such a troubled lover, although she may not have memories, but her love is too little. The male protagonist can fall in love with her immediately, but she is afraid that the male protagonist will not be good to the children in the future, so she divorces or abandons him. For the sake of the child who was raped, is it wrong? It's disgusting. I don't like such a female protagonist the most.
...
It's not good to read, it's too Mary Sue. I think the author is a primary school student. It doesn't have the charm of a novel at all. I haven't finished reading the first plane yet, so I gave up on the article. Don't fall into the trap. It's too ugly.
I feel like the heroine's life is going too smoothly, she's like the heroine, more of a heroine than a heroine. There is no sense of ups and downs.
The emotional route is too fast, it's like eating the rice before it starts cooking. I'm not very satisfied with it o(╯□╰)o
The first story I read did not attract me. It was written too blandly, without any frustration, and I did not see the meaning of the heroine's counterattack. I felt that in fact, it is not necessary to fast-travel the heroine, anyone can do her kind of task, so I don't know why the fast-travel heroine was included in that story. It felt like superfluous and unnecessary. The author's writing and description level is average, and there is nothing to attract readers, so I abandoned the article.
The heroine is written like a white lotus flower
There's something wrong with the way you wrote it. The superficial meaning and deep meaning of the words are not clear. I think it's okay! It's just a little weird sometimes
This book makes me feel so embarrassed! What a noob, and the writing is as strong as chatting.
Look at the typos and get angry
I'm sorry, can you type in Pinyin? Otherwise, it's okay to check after typing. I'm really tired of reading it. Especially when I listen to the audio book, I really want to punch someone. There are so many typos that it's disgusting.
... no stars.
Ahem, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and greens. The following is just my personal opinion. I politely refuse to be biased. Maybe I have a bit of a picky taste, and I find large articles to be bland. There are not so many ups and downs, and many places are passed over in a general way (the psychological description of the characters). Just like a running account... The characters' images are not revealed. Emmmm, there is an article that says this. There are two little loli. The male protagonist's loli ① is relatively skinny at first (smart and lively, precocious) with a dark belly. As for the heroine's loli②, she is cute, silly, and sweet. However, as I kept writing, the characters became biased... Loli ① became silly and cute, and loli ② became sinister. It's very gentle even though it's big, and the background of the story is very gentle. The ending is good and relatively healing. It's just a personal feeling, don't take it personally.
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