Natural Disaster: Run a Small Town and Build Infrastructure in the Last Days

· I started to think that the story was quite innovative. I was expelled from the base and seemed to be walking aimlessly? He must have been brought here by the system, otherwise [Zhao Lezhan] who lives in a small shabby house would have discovered this house first and would not have been able to get in no matter what. And [Qi Wan] came in immediately and heard: Welcome home, master! Did he show up after knowing she was fired? If she had stayed at the base, would she not have shown up or chosen someone else? Or is it that it has been around for three years? Have been waiting for Qi Wan I thought that [Zhao Lezhan] would be the protagonist, but when [Song Junling] showed up, I knew he was out of the picture. However, the former has a good character, and he never thought about it even though he knew he was not from the same group! He is down-to-earth and finally found love From selling land, to building small towns separately, to putting woods and grasslands in major bases, I felt like I was going too far! It's not that it's wrong to save people if you have the ability. When she was targeted and fired, was there someone who could speak out for her in a fair way? Not only did he not have it, he even came to the town and wanted to rob it by force! Who would take her in if it were the other way around? It's too "Mother-like" She works so hard to save people! They also gave away food and clothing. It can be said that all the greening and crops in the country came from "small towns"! More than 80% of the zombies were killed by them. In the end, she was just an ordinary person among thousands of people? Why don't you get a "medal" or something for such great merit? Hong Lianghan. Chen Maorong. Xiao Zhensong. Zhang Zhaodong. Fei Zishi. Meishan. Wu Zhi. Fei Zisong. Shen Zhuangzhuang. Yi Jiangnan. Nie Ce. Han Yinghe. Qiu Qiang. Fu Yue. Feng Dade. Lin Xiaorui. Jiang Junhao. Meng Youer. Feng Shi. Zou Jiarui Why didn't you kick her out after the incident with (Cai Xiaofeng) and "Chang Chao"? Why did you sell him food at a cheap price when you came here to cause trouble twice? Why are you so polite with such an inhumane thing? What does it mean to be too lazy to pay attention to? Not more hateful than those two who were thrown out Another explanation: A formal acre of land is "1,000 square meters!" This is how land in the Northeast (outside the customs) is calculated. "666 Square meters" refers to small acres... Mostly south of Beijing (Guanli) or (South). It seems that the author is not from Northeast China Some people say ①: It's because the level is high and people return to their humanity. Some people say ②: The brain is not penetrated by the virus and retains the thinking before infection. Some people say ③: After reaching an advanced level, you will be able to speak and communicate with others. Some people say ④: The corpse king class is just like humans, it can blend into the base or the crowd without being discovered. In the books I read after that, there were people who retained their humanity. They just wanted to improve their strength and return to humans but couldn't speak, so the humans tried their best to kill them, so Bi became anxious and resisted and killed the humans! This is Bicheng's mortal enemy. Such zombies should not be killed. You can communicate by nodding or shaking your head. The person here (Jiuchang) is also familiar with human nature. He may have thought about returning to human beings but was afraid of being discovered, so he was thinking about the superpower core in human brains! He regards humans as his food reserves, so he deserves to be killed. In fact, zombies belong to the "new humanity"! Just carry the virus and live longer

Not bad. But the male protagonist always gives me a very voyeuristic feeling. And I felt he was not very polite. Although the heroine said that the top 5 people can get water beads for free. But you can't just reach out and ask for it as soon as you meet, and then say "water beads". It's not like anyone owes him.

We have already said that only three meals, one bottle of water and accommodation are included. Why add a ton of water? Isn't it equivalent to adding another third-level crystal nucleus?

It's really just a game template

Not bad, I still want to see the male and female protagonists spend more time together

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Can be seen But you have to watch it without thinking The subject matter is quite interesting, but the backend is a bit cluttered.

The author's setting is actually very good, and it's my favorite type, but it's relatively unpopular and it's hard to find good ones. This book actually looks pretty good. Regarding the creation of characters, I think the wording and creation are not very good. Sometimes there is a sense of contradiction and it looks a bit strange. Maybe the author hasn't written much about emotional lines, and the shaping is not very good. If you don't know it in advance, you may not be able to see it sometimes. But there is still room for improvement The end of the article is a bit abrupt for some reason. I think I can actually expand and write a lot more, which is a bit unfinished. Overall, I think this is a pretty good article. The overall framework and article description are very good, but the experience is not enough. I think if the author practices more, he will definitely produce better works. Come on! Looking forward to your progress and new works

First of all, the heroine went straight to this nice house when she saw it. She never thought that it had been two years since the end of the world. Could there be no one in the nice house? Just go there, it doesn't make sense Secondly, when the heroine went to the door of the house and heard the sound of the system, she went in behind and saw the task screen. The heroine didn't even ask about the existence and specific situation of the system, she just naturally accepted it and continued. Indicates that it is not appropriate Finally, it was mentioned that after the heroine entered the house, other people were also paying attention to the house, which means that the house has been around for a long time, so why would no one want to come in? There is not enough foreshadowing of the causes and consequences, making the plot too abrupt.

It's really beautiful. Please keep writing, the author