Almost Done

Your book is mostly a script. Although there is practice involved. But it's more like the heroine's time-travel martial arts training. It's useless here in Xianxia. Not enough enthusiasm. There is no feeling of love, hate or hatred. This is the difference between your book and Xianxia. Even if you said you should be a hero first and then an immortal. But readers can't feel the passion in your book. Strong love and hatred. And the will of the great road. Read the first dozen chapters. None of these things. The reader naturally gives up. You should try another book. Immortals are immortals. A hero is a hero. As for the rest. It's hard for me to say either.

I feel like the story style is not very unique. If this is your first time writing. This is already a success.

With the ticket, you don't feel like you are alone😁

Xiao Nan wrote this book very seriously. I hope everyone can speak out and point out the shortcomings of this book. You can comment on any bad points, rough points, good or bad. You guys are bored and don't talk, and I'm bored and write. It's really uncomfortable.