
The Beauty World Lives On
by Writing To Support A Family 2333
About This Novel
The story of a person who travels to the beauty world just to live a relaxed life.
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Official(7)Scraped 2d ago
Too mentally retarded
A black boxing introducer with no loyalty at all. According to the author, they actually cooperated to open a company factory. It was still a black technology, and they got a quarter of the shares. So cool! I have no money or something. It would be better to have a tool man in the lottery! Not to mention anything else, the main reason is that he is too mentally retarded. Only then
Speechless
I'm really speechless. It's difficult to write a story, so I don't have high requirements for the story. The logic is reasonable. The protagonist is not an NT, but the protagonist has a good personality. As a result, this book has no logic at the moment. The protagonist is like Long Aotian, who seems to have vented all his negative emotions after traveling through time. Moreover, the protagonist was still in charge in his previous life, so don't come to bring trouble to others.
Quite speechless
It started well, and my IQ is also online! It's a pity that in less than twenty chapters, it's already acceptable, there's nothing to see, the lottery is already retarded, and the mall is a trap. The most retarded thing is that the author actually let the protagonist start a company without fully controlling it! He even used the black technology of lottery to open a company in partnership with a gangster, and even gave others a quarter of the shares! My brain is not working well! Not a subordinate, no loyalty! A useless person! The mental retardation is so great! I think the only one who can survive past thirty chapters is a boring and retarded reader. I tried my best to hold on until the beginning of Chapter 21!
It's still ok,
It's still ok, although I'm a novice There are a lot of flaws Open a company, recruit people, put on a mask and arrest them How do you explain the things you got in the lottery? The company entertains the researcher but they don't betray? Recruiting the FBI... This protagonist is so stupid that he talks about everything and almost talks about the system.
This writing style is for writing a diary outline.
I want to watch the American variety show! !
I want to watch American variety shows, but I don't want to watch Marvel. It started fine, but suddenly Stark appeared and I didn't want to watch anymore.
Just look at the beginning and it will become more and more difficult later on.
It started off well, but it got more and more complicated as I watched it. I was still planning my life, and I felt IQ was on the line, but then I suddenly wanted to start a company, and with a bunch of black technology, I randomly found someone who had no power, no power, no money, and gave me a quarter of the shares as a partnership. When I started a company, it was good to follow the line of influence, but in the end, I ended up acting like an ordinary street hero. Then the way he chose to go out to do things was to drug the agents and run out, and he was discovered. He looked so stupid. Even if you ran out openly, it would not be so strange. In such a big technology company, what can you do if you say you want to go to the laboratory, and then you feel that you don't have a smartphone? On the other hand, the reason I don't develop and make money is that I don't understand. You can't even handle a mobile phone with spaceship technology. If you don't mention it, just mention it. Don't arrange the plot like this. What an idiot. The more you read, the more awkward it becomes. Shuhuang felt good after reading the beginning and wanted to look forward to it. The more I read, the more uncomfortable it became.
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 2d ago
Too mentally retarded
A black boxing introducer with no loyalty at all. According to the author, they actually cooperated to open a company factory. It was still a black technology, and they got a quarter of the shares. So cool! I have no money or something. It would be better to have a tool man in the lottery! Not to mention anything else, the main reason is that he is too mentally retarded. Only then
Speechless
I'm really speechless. It's difficult to write a story, so I don't have high requirements for the story. The logic is reasonable. The protagonist is not an NT, but the protagonist has a good personality. As a result, this book has no logic at the moment. The protagonist is like Long Aotian, who seems to have vented all his negative emotions after traveling through time. Moreover, the protagonist was still in charge in his previous life, so don't come to bring trouble to others.
Quite speechless
It started well, and my IQ is also online! It's a pity that in less than twenty chapters, it's already acceptable, there's nothing to see, the lottery is already retarded, and the mall is a trap. The most retarded thing is that the author actually let the protagonist start a company without fully controlling it! He even used the black technology of lottery to open a company in partnership with a gangster, and even gave others a quarter of the shares! My brain is not working well! Not a subordinate, no loyalty! A useless person! The mental retardation is so great! I think the only one who can survive past thirty chapters is a boring and retarded reader. I tried my best to hold on until the beginning of Chapter 21!
It's still ok,
It's still ok, although I'm a novice There are a lot of flaws Open a company, recruit people, put on a mask and arrest them How do you explain the things you got in the lottery? The company entertains the researcher but they don't betray? Recruiting the FBI... This protagonist is so stupid that he talks about everything and almost talks about the system.
This writing style is for writing a diary outline.
I want to watch the American variety show! !
I want to watch American variety shows, but I don't want to watch Marvel. It started fine, but suddenly Stark appeared and I didn't want to watch anymore.
Just look at the beginning and it will become more and more difficult later on.
It started off well, but it got more and more complicated as I watched it. I was still planning my life, and I felt IQ was on the line, but then I suddenly wanted to start a company, and with a bunch of black technology, I randomly found someone who had no power, no power, no money, and gave me a quarter of the shares as a partnership. When I started a company, it was good to follow the line of influence, but in the end, I ended up acting like an ordinary street hero. Then the way he chose to go out to do things was to drug the agents and run out, and he was discovered. He looked so stupid. Even if you ran out openly, it would not be so strange. In such a big technology company, what can you do if you say you want to go to the laboratory, and then you feel that you don't have a smartphone? On the other hand, the reason I don't develop and make money is that I don't understand. You can't even handle a mobile phone with spaceship technology. If you don't mention it, just mention it. Don't arrange the plot like this. What an idiot. The more you read, the more awkward it becomes. Shuhuang felt good after reading the beginning and wanted to look forward to it. The more I read, the more uncomfortable it became.









