Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Returns from Honkai Impact Iii

Nowadays, dragon novels are all about Lu Mingfei's return. Isn't there any protagonist who is not Lu Mingfei's? It's all about the returning Lu Mingfei

The subject matter is pretty good, but if it's bad, it's bad. But the writing is not good, so work on it.

My little Lu Mingfei, why are there things like this everywhere?

I finally found a copy of Luling. It's too little.

All Heavens and Worlds Lu Mingfei is really awesome

Even if he travels back to Bengsan World, how does Lu Mingfei know his future?

I just want to ask who the heroine is? If you write it this way, the relationship between the characters will feel very confusing.

Come on, the writing is okay, but it would be better if the writing style is more detailed. Also, keep the flow of the drama and don't suddenly add some outrageous plots. Then, the chapter names are a bit random, but after all, I am a new writer. These are understandable, but too outrageous ones are definitely unacceptable, so you have to pay attention. The rest is to improve the plot and improve the writing style in the later stage. Ps: It's the first time I talk so much in a book circle and I'm still a little uncomfortable.

It's a bit of a running story. Come on, I'll write it down later.

After reading the first few chapters, the writing was very poor and the various transitions were very abrupt. It was obvious that the author was a newbie. I'll take another look, try your best😔