The Heroine's Counterattack in the Sadistic Novel of Quick Travel

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It is recommended that the heroine should not have sex with the opposite sex before wearing her body. Now because of fast travel, if you write 1/1, if you don't write it clearly, it is easy to get a low score. Although I don't care about it, but now everyone prefers 1/1.

The plot develops too fast and feels uninteresting. It feels like a primary school student writing a diary and feeling unfocused. The resume was well written and made me look forward to it. I thought I had found a treasure, but I couldn't stand it after just two pages. The heroine's characteristics as a vixen were not reflected at all. No, to be precise, she had no characteristics at all. The male protagonist was also looking forward to it, but after meeting the female protagonist, I just felt greasy. I just decisively abandoned the article. Later, I saw someone in the comment area saying that the administrator had deleted the comment. I didn't plan to comment at first, but then I looked at the rating. Well, it might be bad. I have been reading novels for at least five years and have not reviewed them a few times. The greater my expectations, the greater my disappointment. Attached is my old Qin (*˘˘*). .:*♡

①The heroine is strong and never feels frustrated when doing tasks! ②The scumbag is refreshing and not procrastinating, the plot is interesting, there is love, but it is not all love! That's great~ You can write the plot according to your own starting point! Although what is written later is all virginity! But when the female protagonist takes revenge on the original male protagonist, the original male protagonist is confused! Although it is said that there is cause and effect, the original male protagonist does not know it! People who know this will say it's deserved, but what will people who don't know say? Logically speaking, only the heroine knows about it, others will find it inexplicable... Your plot at the beginning was very good, and it was all the result of doing bad things! So no matter what, I will only feel happy to be tortured! I hope you stick to your original ideas!

Very good, very good-looking. We should torture the original male protagonists, let them taste the feeling of not being able to love, and taste what it means to be heartbroken and despair. The physical pain is far less than the heartache. This kind of heart-torture task (torturing the original male protagonists and scumbags) is good. However, I still hope that the heroine's body before she is possessed will not be touched by others in the future. Although it is not the heroine's own choice, after all, readers are all high-spirited people now. So you know .

Yes, everyone who abuses the male protagonist likes it. The female protagonist takes care of the male protagonist for the abusive female protagonist. It feels good to watch. After finding a better man than the scumbag, it feels even more enjoyable to watch.

Starting from January 1st, all subsequent chapters will be 2,000 words each, updated at least twice a day, at 6 a. M. And 8 p. M.

When I first got into it, the content and plot were all very interesting, but when I looked at it as a whole, I felt that it made the readers seem to be in a hurry, so they couldn't let people enjoy it slowly, but they were rushing to finish reading a chapter. I was wondering if there was something wrong with the segmentation and sentence breaking, the content transitions between scenes, and the characters' psychological activities. I feel like I'm reading at twice the speed. Maybe I'm a novice writer? Or I was in a hurry when I was writing. I hope my little suggestions will be seen, so please do it!

It doesn't feel very refined, and the emotional descriptions are not very detailed. Then there is no description of the heroine's appearance. I watched the first plane and felt that it was developing very quickly.

The hero and heroine fell in love with each other as soon as they met. It is simple and crude. I think this is quite unique. It is currently the simplest and crudest setting among all the fast-traveling stories I have seen! But there are some jokes in Small World that are a bit overdone! For example, the one about being an inventor in prison is a bit outrageous, and there are many other things that are outrageous! But putting those things aside, this book is still worth reading. I think it is still good. It is good to take it out for a quick snack when there is a book shortage! This book is simple and crude, the plot is fast, and some parts are outrageous. When I first started watching it, I was surprised that the plot was so fast, but I personally thought it was acceptable! Quite novel! Don't say anything, just do it! Hahahahaha