
The Infinite Cross-border System of the Origin of All Realms
by Greedy, Lustful And Tasteful
About This Novel
A high school student who loves Douluo Continent was halfway through reading a Douluo Continent novel in an Internet cafe. His computer suddenly crashed, and a burst of electricity brought Ni Lin into the world of Douluo Continent!
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Official(143)Scraped 2mo ago
It's a highly poisonous work, so throw it away at the expense of your life. !
To be honest, this book is not an ordinary poison, this poison is simply hopeless. The content is confusing, there are a lot of typos, and there is no punctuation mark. It makes me feel embarrassed. The word count is really outrageous. I have only read a dozen chapters, and I only used one-fifth of the words in one chapter just to look at the system interface. Fortunately, it is free now. If you charge so much, how on earth would you be willing to pay to read your word count? Maybe there are a lot of people, because you are a stallion novel. , Huo Yuhao was only twelve or thirteen years old when he first went to school. The protagonist, a child, pushed Ma Xiaotao away not long after he entered school. Doesn't the author feel disgusted when he writes like this? ?
No, there are too many mistakes.
There are typos, and some places are wrong. And at the beginning, it was clear that he had just time traveled, but you said that he had given Wang Qiuer a barbecue test before. How could it be possible that he had just time traveled and how could he bake barbecue. And it's a bit messy. Moreover, Brigitte is obviously Ditian's wife, how could she be his fiancée. Even if you change it, you may have gone too far. Moreover, there is a chapter where it is clear that the protagonist knew that Wang Dong was a woman at the beginning, but you said that he did not know this.
Just give me an opinion
Forget it if it's too much of a stud, the harem is too casual, and the plot is not full of content. As an old bookworm, I actually don't like stallion-type movies. Female protagonists are indispensable, just one or two. Overall, the book is okay.
Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water
The system is opened three times in one card. What the hell, the main character's information is always introduced, for fear that we don't know how awesome the main character is. , Don't even know what to look at. I do a lot less Braille. I open it as soon as the system space is opened. I don't want to use so many Braille.
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What was the first novel you read?
The first book I read was San Shao's Douluo Dalu, and then I continued to read San Shao's books and finished them. Because San Shao liked fantasy novels, and then they basically had the same routines. After reading too many, it became boring, so it was time to read two-dimensional books. What about you?
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Official(143)Scraped 2mo ago
It's a highly poisonous work, so throw it away at the expense of your life. !
To be honest, this book is not an ordinary poison, this poison is simply hopeless. The content is confusing, there are a lot of typos, and there is no punctuation mark. It makes me feel embarrassed. The word count is really outrageous. I have only read a dozen chapters, and I only used one-fifth of the words in one chapter just to look at the system interface. Fortunately, it is free now. If you charge so much, how on earth would you be willing to pay to read your word count? Maybe there are a lot of people, because you are a stallion novel. , Huo Yuhao was only twelve or thirteen years old when he first went to school. The protagonist, a child, pushed Ma Xiaotao away not long after he entered school. Doesn't the author feel disgusted when he writes like this? ?
No, there are too many mistakes.
There are typos, and some places are wrong. And at the beginning, it was clear that he had just time traveled, but you said that he had given Wang Qiuer a barbecue test before. How could it be possible that he had just time traveled and how could he bake barbecue. And it's a bit messy. Moreover, Brigitte is obviously Ditian's wife, how could she be his fiancée. Even if you change it, you may have gone too far. Moreover, there is a chapter where it is clear that the protagonist knew that Wang Dong was a woman at the beginning, but you said that he did not know this.
Just give me an opinion
Forget it if it's too much of a stud, the harem is too casual, and the plot is not full of content. As an old bookworm, I actually don't like stallion-type movies. Female protagonists are indispensable, just one or two. Overall, the book is okay.
Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water
The system is opened three times in one card. What the hell, the main character's information is always introduced, for fear that we don't know how awesome the main character is. , Don't even know what to look at. I do a lot less Braille. I open it as soon as the system space is opened. I don't want to use so many Braille.
Sexy man, online reminder
Urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more urge more stress more
good
Support the author greatly for this book
What was the first novel you read?
The first book I read was San Shao's Douluo Dalu, and then I continued to read San Shao's books and finished them. Because San Shao liked fantasy novels, and then they basically had the same routines. After reading too many, it became boring, so it was time to read two-dimensional books. What about you?
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