The Adorable Lord of Da Qin
About This Novel
The winning government in history wiped out the six countries and unified China. He became the first emperor of a unified dynasty in Chinese history. The unified world is only one map away. His life can be described in eight words: awesome, awesome, all awesome. And I will set a small goal first, such as capturing Mars first. Qin Yu looked at the star map and said to Gu Nan: My housekeeper has gone crazy again. Don't care, everyone.
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Official(33)Scraped 21d ago
~...;!_""
Is this the author's first time writing a book? The writing seems to be relatively white. Gu Nan's words seemed to be a little distorted, and they didn't have the same feeling as the original text. As for the author's stuff, isn't it developing a bit fast? And as for Bai Qi, the resurrection is not Bai Qi's. If the Overlord had passed Jiangdong, he would no longer be Xiang Yu, the Overlord of Western Chu. In fact, I really hate those things that are resurrected, because there are some things that you can't just resurrect. It's a feeling, you know? Also, is the protagonist too focused on the system? As for Gu Nan's words about a good ending, what is a good ending? Does anyone want to accompany him? I think the lonely Gu Nan is the real Gu Nan. I feel that Gu Nan is a person who is independent of the way of heaven and has the same behavior as the way of heaven. It's just that his methods are a little different from Tiandao's.
The book is not very good
Since you write a pauper fanfic, you must not be like other fanfics. The time travel is a bit awkward at the beginning, and then you get the system. The system is over the top. You can write it funny, but it is too funny and no one wants to read it. The writing style is not good, there are too few descriptions of environment, characters, and expressions. If you taste Poor Ghost carefully, you should be able to feel that its pictures are real. What you wrote is a bit unrealistic. What I mean is that the picture is not strong enough, just like a dream. How to summon things in the starting system? It's really far-fetched. What you wrote is a fan of Pauper. How do I feel that what you wrote is "Starting from Pauper" I think that when writing about Qionggui fan fiction, you can start writing from other dynasties, which is the place that the Qionggui author has not written about. Otherwise, too many of your sentences will be directly copied from Qionggui, which is destined to fail to become popular. You can also write directly about modern times. I think writing about these invincible things can seem interesting at first, but then it won't work at all, and there will be no sense of immersion. Maybe my requirements are too high. [Emot=default,10/]
Gu Nanshi
The bright moon of the Qin Dynasty passed through the Han Dynasty, and the story of the eternal heroine Gu Nan passed down. Holding an unqualified murderous sword in hand, who knew it would be difficult to achieve prosperity? Search for Elf's Kuailong, come and take a look
I haven't watched it yet, but here's some fun stuff first
? ? ?
Gu Nan? Sister Nan? ? ? ? NPC readers?
Leave a comment. Thank you to all the readers who have read my book. If you think you have any good plots or suggestions, you can directly mention them to me.
@FGO
Ying Zheng: Chen Sheng and Wu Guang rebelled and gave them a space-based cannon to surprise them. Jing Ke: If he hadn't flown the space battleship around the pillar, I would have killed him long ago.
Ha ha
These are all poor fans. I don't know if it's the fifth generation cloud...
Cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough
Cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough
Got a big straw!
This is going to be the Lily route!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(33)Scraped 21d ago
~...;!_""
Is this the author's first time writing a book? The writing seems to be relatively white. Gu Nan's words seemed to be a little distorted, and they didn't have the same feeling as the original text. As for the author's stuff, isn't it developing a bit fast? And as for Bai Qi, the resurrection is not Bai Qi's. If the Overlord had passed Jiangdong, he would no longer be Xiang Yu, the Overlord of Western Chu. In fact, I really hate those things that are resurrected, because there are some things that you can't just resurrect. It's a feeling, you know? Also, is the protagonist too focused on the system? As for Gu Nan's words about a good ending, what is a good ending? Does anyone want to accompany him? I think the lonely Gu Nan is the real Gu Nan. I feel that Gu Nan is a person who is independent of the way of heaven and has the same behavior as the way of heaven. It's just that his methods are a little different from Tiandao's.
The book is not very good
Since you write a pauper fanfic, you must not be like other fanfics. The time travel is a bit awkward at the beginning, and then you get the system. The system is over the top. You can write it funny, but it is too funny and no one wants to read it. The writing style is not good, there are too few descriptions of environment, characters, and expressions. If you taste Poor Ghost carefully, you should be able to feel that its pictures are real. What you wrote is a bit unrealistic. What I mean is that the picture is not strong enough, just like a dream. How to summon things in the starting system? It's really far-fetched. What you wrote is a fan of Pauper. How do I feel that what you wrote is "Starting from Pauper" I think that when writing about Qionggui fan fiction, you can start writing from other dynasties, which is the place that the Qionggui author has not written about. Otherwise, too many of your sentences will be directly copied from Qionggui, which is destined to fail to become popular. You can also write directly about modern times. I think writing about these invincible things can seem interesting at first, but then it won't work at all, and there will be no sense of immersion. Maybe my requirements are too high. [Emot=default,10/]
Gu Nanshi
The bright moon of the Qin Dynasty passed through the Han Dynasty, and the story of the eternal heroine Gu Nan passed down. Holding an unqualified murderous sword in hand, who knew it would be difficult to achieve prosperity? Search for Elf's Kuailong, come and take a look
I haven't watched it yet, but here's some fun stuff first
? ? ?
Gu Nan? Sister Nan? ? ? ? NPC readers?
Leave a comment. Thank you to all the readers who have read my book. If you think you have any good plots or suggestions, you can directly mention them to me.
@FGO
Ying Zheng: Chen Sheng and Wu Guang rebelled and gave them a space-based cannon to surprise them. Jing Ke: If he hadn't flown the space battleship around the pillar, I would have killed him long ago.
Ha ha
These are all poor fans. I don't know if it's the fifth generation cloud...
Cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough
Cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough
Got a big straw!
This is going to be the Lily route!
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