After Farming, I Became the Richest Man in the World

I was so hungry after reading this article in the middle of the night. I couldn't help but read it. Overall, it was quite interesting. However, after reading the first dozen chapters, there were a few points that I didn't like very much. Here are some suggestions for the author to refer to. 1. The neighbors are too malicious and the words they say are too poisonous. Author, you can describe how unhappy they are, just describe it with their demeanor. But to be honest, I have basically never seen such vicious words in real life. It is a bit exaggerated, but this is exaggeration in novels. It is normal. This is my opinion. The author can refer to it and don't be too poisonous. 2. The first meeting between the heroine and the hero was a bit too artificial. I hope the plot can be more natural. Just two points for now. I haven't seen any comments later. I will type them out. The author can refer to them, but it is not a mandatory requirement. After all, you have your own ideas (I support you very much. I like to read the writing without criticizing it!)

YY· Yu Yao, a poor little man who inexplicably traveled to the interstellar space from the 21st century and became a pauper, was also inexplicably tied up with a cheating dog system... What? If you can't complete the task, will you be wiped out? This is the brother of a society governed by the rule of law! It's illegal to be a shark! But what can Yaoyao do? The system is a dog, and the rewards for the mission are really generous. The system is the sky, the system is the earth, the system is the father - QAQ Life is not easy, sigh far away. The dog system here is just that, not counting the wild man picked up by the roadside, but what is going on with this best relative! ? Whether you are sick or not, I suggest you take some melatonin. Thank you. Yu Yao: It's really unlucky day by day. WM· Nameless, a handsome guy who was picked up and brought home by an unnamed beauty. Although you are handsome, this is not the reason for you to pull me, okay? Yu Yao: Don't work, right? Don't eat. Nameless:... Not really. When they first met, he looked like a bad wolf. As time went by, Yu Yao realized that this was not a wolf, but a silly dog (?). His ears turned red after being praised by a beautiful woman (well, superficial-- Speechless. ▪Hanzhi's non-mainstream (? I don't know how late I am in commenting, but I have always been an ace pigeon, please understand, please understand🌚🌝 When I first met Yu Yao, she was a rather aloof beauty. I thought she was going for the cold wind, but I didn't expect-! She turned out to be a cutie! ! As for the nameless classmate, cough, cough, cough, don't think that you are great just because you are awesome. Don't you still have to farm obediently in front of Yu Yao? Look at Lu Yu! ! Look at Zhen... (Ahem, it's definitely not because I forgot the name), can't you be a good-tempered little boy and stop acting like your mother all day long? ? (The dog's head saves your life, Your Majesty, please don't shark me) Finally, let me gently urge you to update~~ Update soon ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! Did you hear that? ! ! ! (Continue to save your life)

In the second paragraph of Chapter 1, there is an idea, saying, "The government cannot mention erasure, that is what the system tells the host." But in the middle and lower part of Chapter 7, the heroine gets 10,000 star coins to pay off the debt. What does she say "doesn't need to be erased"? What does the author want to do, catch bugs and only change one thing?

Come on, madam, update, let me water water (ಡωಡ) in the comment area

Woohoo, I wasn't very interested in this type of book before. It can be said that I have never read it... I originally went to see it with the attitude of giving it a try, but it turns out... It smells really good! Chapter 12 is simply not enough to read! Urgent update, urgent update... But... It seems like I'm going to school and crying to death

I said at the end of one chapter that this novel is brainless. Personally, I feel it's actually okay_(:з∠)_. If I insist on saying that it's brainless, it's that the male protagonist sometimes feels very arrogant when he protects the female protagonist. For other supporting characters (when they have a conflict with the heroine [when the hero is protecting the heroine]), their first impression of the hero is that they are afraid and then helpless. But the general article seems to be like this (><) Regarding the supporting characters: Although this book is a cool novel, there are also many characters who are good to the heroine (✪▽✪). I hope there will be more roles like this in the future. Compare your heart and heart . Then I hope to write more good female characters. It's best to become good friends with the heroine (｡ˇεˇ｡). Personal feeling: Most of the female characters in Shuangwen are aimed at the heroine, which makes us girls very narrow-minded, and I don't like them very much. (╥╥) About the heroine: I think it's pretty good to greatly shape the character of the heroine, right? (´∀｀*) One detail I remember is that when the heroine meets the hero, her first thought is not to save him. I think this is what a normal person should do, and I can give this place a good review (≧∇≦), because most people will not carry it home directly when they meet a stranger. If they carry it home directly, it is obviously a lack of heart. Although I reluctantly took it home because of the 🐶 system, there was nothing I could do . Finally, I hope to be more merciful. If the heroine wants to go to that college to study, can you please give her the brain of a top student (and voluntarily study)? I don't really like the kind of female protagonist who is a scumbag. 🌚🌚 About the male protagonist: I feel that the male protagonist sometimes exudes the aura of a domineering president . Sometimes when I look at it, I automatically imagine the aura of a middle-class male protagonist . Until now, I have a feeling that the male protagonist is very protective, and his life experience is a bit pitiful About the plot: I remember a plot where the heroine seemed to be criminally punished for spreading rumors when she first came here. Most readers here will fall into a misunderstanding and substitute it based on our country's laws. But I checked online and found that if the circumstances are serious, criminal liability can be pursued in accordance with judicial provisions . But after all, it is an interstellar novel. If the law is different from reality, I can actually understand it. What I don't understand: This book is divided into Empire, Federation, and Zerg. Then I want to know, are the people living in the federation human beings or others? [Emot=default,33/] Regarding the development of the male and female protagonists: At present, the development of the male and female protagonists is pretty good, but there is a feeling that they are too close. There is a feeling of lovers, but sometimes they get along like friends. Anyway, how can we say that the relationship between the heroine and the hero may be more like friendship than a lover? (╯3╰) I also hope that the heroine will not be too procrastinating when recognizing her own feelings Finally, let me say, come on . Let's take a look at the pictures first hehehe (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

I'm just a clock-in machine with no emotions

I didn't like this type of writing before, but after reading the author's writing, I completely fell in love with this type of writing. Refill

If you become popular in the future, don't forget us! ! ! We are your solid backing, there is a road ahead, I am responsible for everything, there will always be a light to guide you, and all you can do is persevere until the end (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡

This book is the best interstellar novel I have ever read. The emotional line is also well set, and the system is not as fussy as other novel systems. It will protect the host at critical moments.