I Became the Strongest Beast Master in the Universe by Hatching Eggs

What do people think of this kind of beast-control novel written by the author? It's like going in confused, then coming out confused, and there is an indescribable feeling (the beast-controlling novels on male videos make people pick out a galaxy). Just like that kind of flowing literature, it can't withstand any waves at all. If the author wants to write well, he should explain something at the beginning. The problem is to first clearly explain to the readers the level potential and qualifications of this beast-controlling one. And if you want to be reborn, write about rebirth, and if you want to time travel, write about time travel, because the pre-sale text does not have a general background board. The author has to write that kind of background board yourself, so that the macro of the world can be supported. But when the author started writing, he wrote a lot, and did not write out the history and macro of the world at all. The author describes the heroine in the pen, It makes people feel like, not like a boss, like a loser, with that kind of arrogant feeling, and the background version of the heroine, and the world version of this world, there is no clear explanation at all. For example, the heroine traveled thousands of years ago and was an animal trainer, but in the interstellar era, many things should not be universal. If they are universal, you can use this to explain The background of the two worlds, instead of saying that he was a big boss ten thousand years ago, and then this is just an explanation that the technology is more advanced than the world he is in, it may be talking about the races of beasts that control beasts (you don't need to write too much, just write about the hierarchical differentiation), and compare the potential and qualifications of beast control with the world he lives in, and this world view is constructed. There is no unified template for the background worldview like that in fan fiction. The author can only conceive or use other people's world backgrounds, so that readers will not be confused when they first explain it at the beginning, and then come out confused. (In fan fiction, there is basically no need to explain the background. Write the story directly, but non-humanities require you to construct the story background and world background yourself), which makes it easier for readers who have never seen this type of genre to understand the background of the world, so that it will not be so troublesome to read. You also have to supplement the background of the world yourself, which makes it easier to retain readers. There is also the author's description of the protagonist. To become a boss, you must first have IQ, and also be defensive and cautious. It is the author's description of the protagonist. There is no character expression of the word caution at all. There is only the feeling of being incompetent and not having IQ (the feeling of being arrogant like a common man). He cannot fully understand the nature of the world by relying on his own knowledge alone. At that time, based on one of his own knowledge, he would talk to the people in the world about taking the first place in the country, and he would say this without knowing whether others were more powerful than him. It was like a feeling of being cool without a boss. You can try to substitute (Yang Xuyang), and you will feel that the protagonist in the author's works is quite similar to this one. If you want to make the protagonist better, you can describe the female supporting character. Because the protagonist robbed his contracted beast, but the contract was not successful, she contracted other contracted beasts, and then she forced the heroine to make a bet with him with a grudge. Later, during the college entrance examination, don't say that to reporters. The media wants to expose it. Quantity can be used to expand the words. The protagonist can say to the reporter: I don't want to give up. I want to work hard to take the test. I don't want to give up just because of my physical constitution. I want to give it a try. (The protagonist who says this is very likely to gain a wave of fans, and then they will be fans who can give the protagonist a slap in the face and protect him.) Some of the characteristics of the protagonist can be established at once. (The kind of fans the author writes about on the Internet make people feel like they are brainless and have a sense of being subdued. This is because of what the protagonist said to the reporter)

So far, the writing is very good. The author works hard to update, please come on 👍

The ideas are novel, the writing is immature, and there is a trace of running accounts. Come on, the future is promising.

The heroine doesn't have the feeling of a boss. It's really strange that she can still be plotted by juniors after living for such a long time. She is a bit like a virgin. If I say directly that it relies on the system, I am an ordinary person, so I can understand it, but a big boss from a long time ago cannot understand it🤐. It feels a bit like a novice novel, and the characters are not very fleshed out.

Um, I like it, but it's a bit lacking. I hope there will be more updates.

It's too slow to expect updates! Come on author.

The writing is very good, but the updates are a bit slow and not enough to read.

Haha, it's so interesting to write. Come on, author! More O(≧▽≦)O

I was quite optimistic about it, but I haven't updated it for a while, so I thought I might as well save it, but I haven't seen it this year, so it's really unfinished. Why

I really like this one. The author worked hard on coding!