Scavenging in the Wasteland, the Fat Girl Makes the Whole Family Sick and Disabled

I want to know if I can stop writing plots where people from outside keep interfering with the heroine, and then the heroine keeps resisting these people. First it was the Chen family, then it was Xiao Shi, and now it is Scar. Is there such a contradiction in one article? Wouldn't it be better to write about the daily lives of everyone in the same box? Everyone in the same box is working hard to build these things. Isn't it more exciting than fighting all day long? There are almost two hundred chapters, all kinds of contradictions. Moreover, the female protagonist has been losing so much weight. It has been seven months since the heroine entered the world. She is still pregnant with the magic of cultivating immortals. Is the weight loss so slow? You said that the problem of radiation will cause you to gain weight all the time, but the heroine has already taken protective measures, hasn't she lost weight yet?

I guess the author is a fat man. This is already his second book on Turning Fat into Energy. He must hate fat so much and try his best to make the best use of it

I hope there is a floor plan, what are the locations of the toilets, swimming pools and potato fields, and how the home and the monster tents are placed in the same place.

It's a bit uncomfortable to read one sentence segment by segment, it's too chopped up and feels incoherent.

A large part of each chapter is devoted to introducing various past events. I have never seen such an introduction to the past background. Is it necessary to introduce various past events to do one thing? Is it necessary? Once again, someone comes to provoke me every once in a while, and once again the things to be done in a chapter are hastily explained, and the past deeds of various characters are introduced. Can you please focus on what you really want to do? Doing one thing and talking about all kinds of things that are either irrelevant or tangential to the matter, deviating from the real theme, I am speechless😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

It looks good and the story setting is attractive. Come on!

Cool article! Stay tuned for updates every day! Cheers a lot⋯

I think it's very interesting. I hope the author will add more updates.

🍃Report from the book shortage expert📚~I found this favorite book✨, which saved my boring moment😌💖

I just gave you the monthly pass and the recommendation ticket, and I expected you to fill in the hole~ But I found that you opened a new hole~ Save it first, and then read it later~ The big article is still of high quality! Hope there will be more updates! [Emot=default,64/]