Boss from Another World, She is Beautiful and Sassy

Although there is a lot of malice in the last days, there are still some people with good intentions. That mother asked Shi Mo for help in times of crisis, but when she saw the two children, she promptly reminded her to leave quickly instead of letting her die.

My brother should be the male lead, right? His voice is gentle and elegant, with gentle ups and downs, but it has a lingering flavor, like a hook, tickling people's calm minds. The deep voice coupled with the unique intonation has a noble and elegant flavor. From this description, you can tell that he is the male protagonist. His gentle voice reveals a sense of gentleman. He is the inventor of black crystal watches and has an unusual identity. Moreover, the female protagonist feels that his voice is familiar. This should be the gentle and scum gentleman professor male protagonist that we have mentioned briefly.

It seems that there is no check-in building yet. I will build one.

Now that I have read over a hundred chapters, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Highlight❗ It's just a suggestion, not a compulsion. It's up to the author whether to adopt it or not. Only represents personal views Nothing in this article has any meaning. The attached pictures are all free chapter content Refuse to make excuses and welcome friendly exchanges and corrections ⭐ - 1⃣Excessive segmentation The first one may be divided into paragraphs to make the sentence look less cumbersome, but if it is divided into too many paragraphs, it gives me the feeling: why are there so many words? And when it comes to turning pages like this, I still need to find the end of the sentence on the next page. ●P1 - - The second one, as shown in the picture below, must be separated if it can be put together without being cumbersome at all. Paragraphing originally means starting a new paragraph, which can easily create a sense of separation. My feeling when reading this passage is: This is not a sentence spoken by one person. And in fact, no readers will deliberately stare at your punctuation. Just read the text roughly and just glance at it. ●P2 - - 2⃣The character language is too cumbersome In fact, part of the reason for this feeling is 1⃣. There are too many paragraphs and it feels like it takes up a lot of pages. Then you feel that this person talks too much. But sometimes, there are indeed too many words - ⭐Maybe the author is more accustomed to this type of formatting, but (in my personal opinion) most novels are formatted in another format, and most readers are also exposed to that type of formatting. - - Pick up any novel I'm reading now ●p3 - - - Let me give you another chestnut (deleted inappropriately) Original text (taken from Chapter 105): ●p4 (Personal) After modification: ●p5 ●p6 - - Highlight again❗ It's just a suggestion. If you don't follow the rules, it's forced. It's the author's business to adopt it or not. Only represents personal views Nothing in this article has any meaning. The attached pictures are all free chapter content Refuse to make excuses and welcome friendly exchanges and corrections Ahhhh, I didn't bring back the manuscript I wrote at school two days ago. I'll add more to it... Hope the pictures come out soon...

This is not an activity group, but a fan group! Skirt number: 9-9-6-8-2-4-8-8-6 Friends who like books can join the group and play together.

Sometimes it's really like this I have fought so many times for someone, In the end, someone is afraid that even he will be forgotten. Is it really worth it? It doesn't seem like that, He is not for anyone, He is for the people he is a hero It's a pity, I hope it won't happen again in this life.

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Friends, give me a positive call, it's the second round! Ahhhhhh~~~ It's a one-stop service to collect, like, punch in and vote. Huahua is working overtime to code words, come quickly.

Ahhhh, the first round of PK begins on August 7th. I hope that all you little cuties will actively speak up, check in and collect recommendation tickets, and make more comments to increase the popularity of the new book. This is my first time participating in PK, I hope I can go to the next round smoothly. Friends, get moving, ahhhhh!

Set up a check-in building, and friends can check in together.