Interstellar Reborn: Wilderness with Cubs Live Broadcast Top Score

I counted 16 "directs" in the screenshots I took (I haven't finished Chapter 21 yet). The author gives me the feeling that ① he is trying to make up the number of words, and some sentences will obviously not flow smoothly if he adds "direct"; ② the author's vocabulary is not large enough. (You can delete it if you don't like it)

1. The words "directly" and "then" appear too many times in the full text, which may seem like a waste of words. The sentences are seriously unsound. Readers with obsessive-compulsive disorder are advised to leave early if the author's language skills are high. 2. I don't know whether the author is typing by voice or not reading the words when writing. There are many typos in the whole text, and some even affect reading. 3. The heroine has traveled from the end of the world, but her mind behaves like an ordinary person living in a peaceful world, without any warning about the surrounding things. Specifically, you can refer to the fact that the heroine didn't know how to observe the surrounding situation when she was practicing in the forest. The heroine's superpower level was very high before the time travel, which means that the heroine has survived for a long time at least. However, the heroine's behavior after the time travel does not feel like she has survived in a world full of dangers. Another example is the wolf. When a pack of wolves besieged the heroine's residence, the heroine didn't care. She felt that there were too few wolves and wanted to catch them all. When the wolves gathered, the heroine complained that there were too many wolves and she was worried that she couldn't defeat them. To put it bluntly, wasn't this her own fault? If you know how to kill wolves in batches, you won't face so many wolves at once. The heroine just relies on her heroine aura. Without the heroine's halo, how can she resist so many wolves by herself? What if she can't defend the two children. 4. Regarding the male protagonist, my evaluation is: down below. Within a few chapters of the male protagonist's appearance, he keeps saying "my woman, my child, please~" The female protagonist doesn't know you exist at all, and I don't know how you talk about my woman. In addition, I complained about a few points that are considered normal but personally find them intolerable. Every time when the heroine is in danger, the hero's first thought is what to do with my child if something happens to the heroine, but he never thinks about the heroine. After all, it is a one-night stand. It is understandable that the hero does not think that the heroine only cares about the child, but he is a bit estranged. This is purely a personal opinion. Also, after the male protagonist found out that the original owner was killed by his second aunt, he didn't say anything. He left the whole process to the original owner's brother to take revenge. What can I say, he is also the mother of your child, and he almost died for your child (this should be the case from the male protagonist's perspective). It's not too much for you to help with revenge. The male protagonist didn't do anything at all. Also, does the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist develop too quickly? Personally, I feel that the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are inexplicable. 5. Are there any problems with the worldview of this book? In the world of universal live broadcast, only people from the previous world can see the live broadcast of the lower world, except for the ruling class like the male protagonist. According to common sense, it is normal to accumulate points and move up. However, this situation of moving up is generally for individuals and not for families. In other words, if a person chooses to go to the previous world, it is basically difficult to return to the original family or return to the original world. It is difficult to return to the previous world. Don't tell me that the male protagonist created two accounts. He is a privileged class and he uses his privileges. How can ordinary civilians have the ability to create two accounts? The funniest thing is that the medicine for treating intelligence of children in the fifth-level world can only be bought in the twelfth-level world. Not to mention whether you have connections in the twelfth-level world to get the medicine, but how many families can afford the 50,000 points to buy the medicine. If you don't have connections, the whole family will have to go to the twelfth-level world together. The points consumed are huge, and the child may not be able to get the medicine in his lifetime. The male protagonist understood this but did not take any action. He allowed this situation to happen, claiming that he could not stop it (see the chapter for details. I can't remember the specific language, but it roughly means this) 6. Regarding the original owner, what can I say? It's a very sad person. He was designed to get pregnant and die. He was busy and frightened for ten months, and in the end he may not even see his own child. The child he was pregnant with for ten months was finally taken away by the heroine. The only eldest brother who loves him may also unreservedly give the love he originally gave to another unrelated woman. To sum up, the heroine does not feel like she has survived the apocalypse. She is a bit greedy (referring to the fact that she still does not know how to restrain herself even after being warned in the cemetery of the war between humans and gods), and she thinks very highly of herself. The male protagonist is a bit ordinary. As the prince of the empire, he does not have the ability and vision that a prince should have, and his feelings for the female protagonist are inexplicable. In terms of worldview, it is easy to cause class solidification and the gap between rich and poor (I personally think that such a rule cannot last long)

Long Xu was envious before he could hold the child. Yin Xuehan could hold and take care of the child, but Long Xu could only take a look at it. It wasn't too difficult.

The heroine is a person who has traveled through time in the apocalypse. She has no idea about the principle of not exposing wealth. She is really trying to persuade her to quit.

The heroine shows so many good things and is different from herself, isn't she afraid of others arresting her? Does the heroine think she is very powerful, or something?

The heroine is here to be a golden finger for others, and also helps to carry on the family line. The original owner is in such a bad situation, she has already given birth to one child, and she only has to give birth to the last one, and then she can be prosperous and wealthy.

This kind of book also has a 9.0 Rating? Let's not talk about the content first, the language is not smooth, and then the heroine is an arrogant maniac. She thinks that her strength will become stronger in the future, so she is not afraid of people discovering that she has so many treasures, and even live broadcasts to show them those things. To put it bluntly, she just wants to show off the aura of the pure heroine. If she were not the heroine, this kind of person would have died thousands of times.

I'm really speechless. I've never seen someone put his biological brother aside and discuss everything with a strange man (he is the father of the child at any time, but the heroine doesn't know it!). This is not the case if I want to co-opt the male and female protagonists. The more I look at it, the more illogical it becomes.

Yin Xuehan found this small solar-powered eDonkey that was so convenient. It was also powered by solar energy, so he didn't have to worry about running out of power or other problems. Now he had a means of transportation.

The author will update it soon, it's not enough╥╥