I Love Pampering My Little Childhood Sweetheart, and the Bamboo Horse Wants to Hug Me

Is this the first time Xiao Nai writes an article? I looked like. 🌝 After reading it, I think it's generally pretty good. The writing is pretty good, and the descriptions of appearance and environment are very good. The names of the male and female protagonists are also nice, but there are some places where you still have to pay attention. For example, When writing about a character's inner thoughts, it is best to use the third person, which makes it more comfortable for readers to read. Also, there are a lot of errors in your chapter. Please check more before publishing. Some punctuation marks that should be added should be added, and those that should not be added should be deleted! 😳 Also, if you revise the introduction, it will be more attractive! I don't think the introduction is very good. It's just like "A certain man doesn't know that he has fallen in love with the heroine." Anyway, let's change it! 😁 Finally, I want to ask, will Xiao Nai's book be signed? 🌚 (The above are my suggestions + reflections after reading the article, please accept it or not) 🙃

Ling Haoying: Woman, remember, you can only be mine in this life! Shi Nannan: Haha...🙄

Let's talk, let's talk, Ankang koala velvet

If you saw it, grandma, go to sleep. Good night (☝｀?0?7Ω?0?7)☝Consider the food at the door

When summer meets popsicles, winter meets sweet potatoes, barbecue meets beer, and I meet you, these are the best things in the world. Good night!

Even if the east wind remains the same, don't ask why the setting sun sets in the west. The article is very good, keep it up, I'm optimistic about you!

Water review~~Here comes the big words.

Be active every day! La la la la~

Na na na, I wish the new book will be a success~

It's so beautiful. I need to work hard to update it.