The Book-wearing Female Partner is Working Hard
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[With a Male Protagonist] This book is not very good. Well, that's it,
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Official(15)Scraped 15d ago
I have never seen such a stupid heroine. After being tricked several times, I have never seen a heroine fight back, and she can still meet and chat with her without any problems. Apart from saying that she doesn't like the original heroine, she actually doesn't seem to hold any grudge against being tricked by the original heroine. It's really amazing.
Author, did you write something wrong?
A good swordsman, learning alchemy and neglecting sword practice? A good heroine is written as an aunt. Do we all love to eat melon now? I don't have time. I still have time to gossip in 996 every day. If I have that time, I might as well enrich myself. In the world of cultivation, strength is respected. What does the heroine want to do? Do you want to write a crooked heroine? The cannon fodder has not yet changed his destiny against the will of heaven, and he is not strong enough yet and still has the desire to take advantage of others.
Don't even mention my brother
Why do you only talk about the heroine's training progress after arriving at Wanjian Sect? Where is her brother? There has to be a transition!
The heroine is such a nympho, she says she doesn't like the hero and then peeks at him and is greedy
The plot is well arranged
But why is it a short story? ? ? By the way, I would like to give a suggestion. The name of the heroine appears too many times in the article. It is not necessary to have a subject (name of the heroine) in every sentence. If the subject of a paragraph is the heroine, just mention it once. When it comes to other people's psychological activities or thoughts, you can mention the name. This will make the reading better. I hope the author can consider it. . .
This heroine is too stupid!
Moreover, the heroine's original intention to practice is getting weaker and weaker. She doesn't practice properly. She spends her time refining elixirs, watching movies, and barbecuing meat. It feels like she has forgotten that she is a swordsman. Shouldn't the main occupation be practicing swordsmanship? Otherwise, if the strength is not enough, no matter how much you practice, you will not be able to enjoy it. Moreover, the heroine is too passive in her cultivation. After practicing for three years, she was about to go out for fun, and then she thought of reading some books on spiritual plants and spiritual beasts. Shouldn't these basic books be read at the beginning? The heroine is like an illiterate, she doesn't know anything, doesn't she know how to read more? Read some travel notes or books, learn more about previous experience, and understand the history, geography and humanities of this continent. These are very important basic knowledge for going out to do things or travel in the future. And read books on spiritual beasts, spiritual plants and minerals earlier. This will allow you to immediately judge the weaknesses of spiritual beasts, the usable value of some parts of spiritual beasts, the medicinal value and collection methods of spiritual plants, whether they will be useful to your future cultivation, or whether they are precious or scarce resources, so that you will not just throw things away like a fool, only to regret it in the future. Anyway, the heroine has been practicing for three years, and she still doesn't know anything like a fool. Maybe she is a fool. She obviously wants to live one more life, so she should at least know more principles, but the heroine behaves like a second-rate fool. She doesn't know anything when she goes out to wander around, she only knows how to eat and play.
After practicing for three years, hasn't the heroine read some common sense books? I don't know the spiritual beasts, and I don't even know some spiritual plants.
Come on big
Is there a male protagonist in Da Da Da? Hope not
I'm speechless,
The heroine is a silly and sweet person, and the opportunity is very good. She knows that people will look at you unfavorably, so she doesn't be careful. The opportunity comes when she goes out. She is a swordsman who practices elixirs, and the monsters inside are always snakes.
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Official(15)Scraped 15d ago
I have never seen such a stupid heroine. After being tricked several times, I have never seen a heroine fight back, and she can still meet and chat with her without any problems. Apart from saying that she doesn't like the original heroine, she actually doesn't seem to hold any grudge against being tricked by the original heroine. It's really amazing.
Author, did you write something wrong?
A good swordsman, learning alchemy and neglecting sword practice? A good heroine is written as an aunt. Do we all love to eat melon now? I don't have time. I still have time to gossip in 996 every day. If I have that time, I might as well enrich myself. In the world of cultivation, strength is respected. What does the heroine want to do? Do you want to write a crooked heroine? The cannon fodder has not yet changed his destiny against the will of heaven, and he is not strong enough yet and still has the desire to take advantage of others.
Don't even mention my brother
Why do you only talk about the heroine's training progress after arriving at Wanjian Sect? Where is her brother? There has to be a transition!
The heroine is such a nympho, she says she doesn't like the hero and then peeks at him and is greedy
The plot is well arranged
But why is it a short story? ? ? By the way, I would like to give a suggestion. The name of the heroine appears too many times in the article. It is not necessary to have a subject (name of the heroine) in every sentence. If the subject of a paragraph is the heroine, just mention it once. When it comes to other people's psychological activities or thoughts, you can mention the name. This will make the reading better. I hope the author can consider it. . .
This heroine is too stupid!
Moreover, the heroine's original intention to practice is getting weaker and weaker. She doesn't practice properly. She spends her time refining elixirs, watching movies, and barbecuing meat. It feels like she has forgotten that she is a swordsman. Shouldn't the main occupation be practicing swordsmanship? Otherwise, if the strength is not enough, no matter how much you practice, you will not be able to enjoy it. Moreover, the heroine is too passive in her cultivation. After practicing for three years, she was about to go out for fun, and then she thought of reading some books on spiritual plants and spiritual beasts. Shouldn't these basic books be read at the beginning? The heroine is like an illiterate, she doesn't know anything, doesn't she know how to read more? Read some travel notes or books, learn more about previous experience, and understand the history, geography and humanities of this continent. These are very important basic knowledge for going out to do things or travel in the future. And read books on spiritual beasts, spiritual plants and minerals earlier. This will allow you to immediately judge the weaknesses of spiritual beasts, the usable value of some parts of spiritual beasts, the medicinal value and collection methods of spiritual plants, whether they will be useful to your future cultivation, or whether they are precious or scarce resources, so that you will not just throw things away like a fool, only to regret it in the future. Anyway, the heroine has been practicing for three years, and she still doesn't know anything like a fool. Maybe she is a fool. She obviously wants to live one more life, so she should at least know more principles, but the heroine behaves like a second-rate fool. She doesn't know anything when she goes out to wander around, she only knows how to eat and play.
After practicing for three years, hasn't the heroine read some common sense books? I don't know the spiritual beasts, and I don't even know some spiritual plants.
Come on big
Is there a male protagonist in Da Da Da? Hope not
I'm speechless,
The heroine is a silly and sweet person, and the opportunity is very good. She knows that people will look at you unfavorably, so she doesn't be careful. The opportunity comes when she goes out. She is a swordsman who practices elixirs, and the monsters inside are always snakes.
