Dress up as the Best Female Counterpart in Historical Novels

But you can pay attention to the wording. Some sentences are not reasonable, and some words are very abrupt when placed in some scenes, making it uncomfortable to read. After all, this is a rural area, even if the protagonist is a cultural person, but the language used in the village should be relatively easy to understand. I hope you pay more attention to it. After all, the improper matching of certain sentences can affect the reader's reading mood. Occasionally, it can be forgiven, but too much cannot be ignored. [Emot=default,36/]

She was framed many times by Zhao Xue. She knew clearly that this person wanted to harm her, and always said: 'As long as this person does not harm her, she will let him go. There is also the need to run a duck factory, which is a collective benefit, and after she runs it, she may only have a little money. The key is that she has run it well, and the surrounding villagers are jealous, but they can't see the heroine's family. This is originally meant to benefit the villagers, but don't you find it very disappointing? Also, if it's a great achievement, it would probably be beneficial to have Zhao Xue's father (captain) as well. If the heroine really gets admitted to college, then I guess the heroine may not be able to control it. (You are gone, do you think the duck factory still has your interests? I will definitely say: you don't do anything, and you still want money.) In the end, all you can do is let people take a high look. It can be seen that the male protagonist wanted to kill Zhao Xue for the female protagonist several times, if he hadn't taken care of the female protagonist. Zhao Xue was always being spoiled by the heroine. When she first traveled through time, the heroine actually knew that it was Zhao Xue who was responsible for her harm, but she was afraid of death! Another point is that I don't really understand the female protagonist's brain circuit. She is afraid of the male protagonist because the male protagonist has killed people, but the male protagonist was forced. What about Zhao Xue? Isn't she harming her? How dare you confront someone who wants your life? Okay, you have no fighting ability, but you have never thought about taking revenge on Zhao Xue.

I saw someone said what I wanted to say. The book is not cliché and very interesting, but the written language is a bit too much. Many times the speech and mental activities are written in written language, which is very awkward.

I only saw the previous free chapters... The heroine was created in the early stage... She was passively persecuted by the original heroine again and again... She didn't fight back, she didn't feel any pain, she didn't have any scheming... There were too many activities in her heart, and she was always afraid of being cannon fodder...

I don't understand what the heroine's brain is like. She saved her twice. I'm not grateful, but you always remember that she was a murderer in her previous life. Could it be that she was born a bad person? Even if a heinous person saved her twice, she still can't change her mind. Now that I've traveled through the book, I don't want to change the plot and keep remembering what it means! You have a lot of opinions on the heroine, but you are criticizing her. Just talking about it in your heart makes me feel embarrassed!

The plot is really good, but the sentences are long-winded and the logic is confusing. What is the heroine afraid of the hero for? That reason for fear is untenable. Shouldn't we live in peace or release goodwill? For the sake of future plots, if you don't get too enthusiastic, you should just pretend that you don't know her. You won't tremble with fear when you see her. Also, the whole world knows that the heroine is a premature baby. Is it necessary to talk about it throughout the book? In order to make everyone dislike the heroine, the villain said that the heroine was born prematurely and was in poor health. But did the heroine's younger siblings tell others that the heroine was born prematurely and was in poor health out of love for the heroine? This is very strange, and there is also a degree of bias. There are 4 children in a family. It can be said that the heroine is not in good health and is biased, but it can't be that excessive! It's almost unreasonable. Maybe the author is still young. I hope you can continue writing it because the outline of the book is still excellent and quite attractive. I will continue to follow it.

I don't quite understand why a plot like amnesia is introduced... It feels so strange and not very acceptable.

After seeing the heroine in Chapter 200, she still has various prejudices against the villain. It would be understandable if it was because of the original ending in the novel that the heroine kept a distance from the villain and the hero. However, later on, her attitude towards the hero and heroine is more normal, especially towards the hero, and she has a little admiration for the hero's aura, but for the antagonist Pi is all about malicious speculation. The villain saved her twice and treated her well in various ways. As a result, the heroine is making malicious speculations about others and eating their food at the same time. Her attitudes towards the hero and the villain are very different. I can't help but wonder whether the heroine is afraid that the villain will harm him or she dislikes him because of his background. He doesn't remember any gratitude at all. Instead, he keeps talking about the content of the original novel. I'm speechless. He's such a white-eyed wolf.

This is outrageous. The heroine has lost her memory a lot.

That Zhao Xue is so annoying, and the plot is a bit awkward. Why doesn't the heroine find trouble with Zhao Xue? She has clearly hurt her over and over again, but she still doesn't show off. I'm so speechless!